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Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 18
I knew Cacius was going to be a slime. Can't wait to see what Edward has in store for him.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 18
Crap starting trouble with Caius will only add to the amount of drama that could build within this story! I can't waitto read more! Where do you get your information this is so exciting I am just dieing to see where you take it. This story was suggested on the Twilighted Chat and I am so glad it was wonderful work well written!
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
I ws just thinking about how many problem men she seems to encounter and then you brought up the "danger magnet" canon Bella. Thanks so much for a look inside this club-again, from your imagination. You made it very real to me. I really enjoyed this chapter. I love it when Edward gets into possessive protective mode! Very sexy!
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 18
This was a great chap...we got to go through so many rooms! lol
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 18
Good chapter, of course she can't stay out of trouble.
Reviewer: eleonor317 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 18
YAY update! I'm officially 22 today! Thanks for the birthday present...can't wait to find out what edwards gonna do he seemed majorly pissed. Im also wondering about Bree, i felt so bad for her, hopefully she'll make another appearance and rid herself of Caiius the asshole lmao Thanks again!
Author's Response: Happy Birthday! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 18
I miss the weekly updates of this story. Another great chapter!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 18
lol...even as a slave, Bella is a Danger Magnet....lol
looking forwardto the enxt update
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 18
so glad you didn't go with a PTA version of that! We needed to see something fun! AWESOME as always.
I can't wait to fond out more about Caius. I wonder if Bree is married to him of her will or his.
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 18
great chapter, and not specailly depraved!!!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 18
Another wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: EJS0308 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oooo, the 23rd? That's my birthday. Now if I could just figure out how to invite Master Edward to my party.....
Reviewer: kneon (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 18
Wow, this story keeps you are your toes. Every where you turn there is some thing new and exciting. I can't wait to see what happens nex.
Reviewer: khytruckle (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 18
I'm not sure whether I've ever reviewed before but I wanted to thank you for writing my story. The lifestyle you depict is not my thing, but I'm finding it exciting in spite of that.
Bella the danger magnet--I like that.
I'm looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: Miss_Beckie_Louise (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 18
Awesome chapter.
Trust Bella to find trouble ... LOL
Update soon
xo Beckie
Reviewer: Linda Romith (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 18
OMG, can't wait that long to read what Master E will do! Love this story!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 18
Argh! Bella Can't stay out of trouble. Too bad she couldn't even say a word to Bree either...
Reviewer: ajumbledmess (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 18
March 23rd!!! I can't wait! I watched my email for this update. Wonderful story!
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
never she is just that lucky lol loved it
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter! Yes, Bella does seem to attract danger to her no matter what. The club is definately an interesting place. I'm not sure I could deal with all that sex out in the open. But hey, thats me. Seeing it and reading about it are two different things. Jasper seems a little ovewhelmed too. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 18
Edward is going to try and do something about Caius and then I am afraid that Caius will do something to Bella. Trouble will follow!!!!!!!
Reviewer: frantic-daydreamer (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 18
oh, the tension!
Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 18
There is actualla an mastrubate-athon i Denmark every year, where they compete in similar things.
I hope that Bella and Jasper can stick to them selves...but it's not very likely is it? :P
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
I so don't want to have to wait until March 23rd! That seems so long away!! Oh well :)
Glad to have the story progressing and new characters introduced. Can't wait to see what Edward does to Ciaus!!
Reviewer: ju007 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 18
cant wait!
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