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Reviewer: KazM (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 18
I was holding my breath for half that chapter. Hopefully Edward can get something done about Caius. Looking forward to next update.
Reviewer: tigerlili48 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 18
march 23rd is too far away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter!
For a second, I thought that Bella wasn't going to get out of that situation. I'm glad she did though.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
Bella really seems to have a skill for finding herself close to or in the middle of situations she shouldn't. This time she was just following her master's orders, which was in a way lucky, since she was able to help someone, but sadly she seems to have caused trouble to another one.
Caius went after her to see if she had said anything to Edward and to see if her behavior in the restroom would get her punished, and also to see what kind of relationship Bella and Edward have.
It's not too difficult to imagine what Edward will do right now. Good think Jasper went with them tonight so Bella won't be left alone. Things might get a bid unpleasant now.
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh wow! Loved the club - that was quite an education! Caius was quite creepy... was really worried for Bella's safety there for a mo.
Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 18
I really liked this chapter!
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 18
lol Bella aka Danger-Magnet. That was hilarious! She is a danger-magnet isn't she? I'm kind of like that, except it's more for clumsiness and stuff. If there is even one carpet fiber higher up than the rest I'll trip over it. If there's one twig on a plant that sticks out, I'll snag to it. It's awful lol. Anyway, thank you for the update. I will look forward to 3/23!
Reviewer: MaranndaElizabeth (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
you should do an Edward point of view!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 18
=] - im glad she didnt get hurt
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
March 23rd is so far away. I swear Bella just keeps finding trouble. It makes for a very fun story. Full of angst and smut.
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 18
Truly...there is danger everywhere she turns, lol. And another opportunity to right a civil wrong. I hope they bust Caius for drugging Bree.
Always enjoy your updates! Thanks for sharing. Oops...I don't mean THAT kind of sharing! :-D
Hitting the SUBMIT button now. ;-D
Reviewer: funkydiva1978 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 18
wow just wow. Today was a difficult day! but when i saw you updated i was able to lose some of the days stress in reading about my fav danger magnet!
Love it. really very very awesome!
xoxoFunkyD.
Reviewer: dragonlady (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 18
Interesting...
So many nasty forces descending on them. James. Caius. Tyler. Brown truck man. And even Lauren. I'm really beginning to think that Bella needs to lock herself in that house and stay there. And Edward and Jasper both stay there with her!
Thank you for another fabulous chapter.
Reviewer: Triger3happy (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 18
That was interesting. Ant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 18
Good update :) Why is it that Caius is always seen as the bad guy though? Aro is usually seen as the nice one. And could the red headed victim in pink been Victoria by any chance, or is that just me making unrealistic assumptions?
Are all your posts on Tuesdays, because I'll be tuning in then!
Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 18
noooooo...! .14 days till the next chapter? i want to cry :...X
but thank you for this one ;) it's been very entriguing, intense and ..umm educating. i felt like i was a fly on the wall of BDSM club. looking forward for Jasper meeting someone. poor man needs relief.. and.. i just don't want Edward to be in trouble, let this Caius expose himself, please. xxx
Reviewer: Emmi (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 18
Well, that was a bit over the top with all the club activities :D But hey - you're the boss here and I like this story so far, so keep the good work going :) Oh, And I googled to find WTF that butterfly was :D were do you pull that stuff from?? :D It's priceless :)
Author's Response: I've spent waaaay too much time cruising sex toy websites. I'm sure they're wishing I'd buy something already! :)
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 18
Excellent update as always.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 18
"Indeed," Caius answered. "I was wondering... is there some problem with her body that you are embarrassed to display her more openly?"
"The only problem with her body is that when other men see it, she becomes something of an obsession for them," Master said lightly, but his voice became a bit harder as he continued, "She dresses or undresses for my pleasure and no one else's. Even when she undresses before others it is because it brings me pleasure. She exists for me alone, Master Caius." There was a note of warning in his tone."........I LOVE what Edward said here!
Reviewer: mad4hugh (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 18
Bella certainly does seem to have a target on her back, doesn't she? Attracting attention - both negative and positive! I must say, there's something about the way you write Bella's actions, reactions, descriptions that certainly draws you in - I found myself sitting at the edge of my seat when she stumbled upon Caius and the obviously "unsavory" things he was doing to that working girl! Even the idea of how he treats Bree, his wife: drugging her in some way to keep her compliant...*shudders* YUCK!
It does make me fearful for Bella though - she's already got one wingnut fixated with her, now this is all she needs: a rich, powerful (gross) man who knows who she is, where she lives, what her life is like that may hold a grudge against her and Edward.
Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
God I love this story!! I'm still waiting to see how the stalker situation is resolved. Since I love drama and angst, and I really really love panicky,protective Edward, I really hope Bella is physically endangered somehow (maybe the dream of her tied to a chair, sans the blood of course, could be foreshadowing), because I'd love to see how Edward reacts when/if he comes to her rescue. March 23rd can't come fast enough!
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 18
I hope Bella finds some way to help Bree and that Caius gets kicked out on his ass!
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 18
I'm with Jasper. I did not know that places like that existed either! Bella is definitely a danger magnet, and no I do not think she can stay out of trouble. I would think that insecure people in their circle would be very envious/jealous of the relationship that Bella and Edward have, especially since she is the only 24/7 slave in the club and so perfectly matched to her Master. Really bizarre stuff, but as always a really good chapter!
Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 18
Wow! I'm with Jasper- overwhelmed. I have to admit- the last update left me a little bereft. Not that it wasn't beautifully written, but it just felt so cut off from the rest of the story. So happy to see progress, as well as the cameos from Rose and Em. As always, a long two weeks awaits.
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