Oh Lord, that has got me very hot and bothered.  I do enjoy BDSM fics, particularly the ones by TaraSueMe, and I am slightly in love with Fifty Shades from Master of the Universe (although that one is not overtly BDSM), but I was unsure at first if I would enjoy this as Bella is so submissive.  However, I must confess to being really turned on by this chapter, and I think I may have to admit to being hooked!

This is getting interesting. The dynamics of the relationship are intense, but they are getting married, so clearly there is love, of sorts, involved. It is, indeed, a strange relationship, but if it works for them and they want and enjoy it I guess it's ok. Whatever, it's very hot!

Pheewww, that chapter pushed my limits. I've read alot of fanfic and its not very often I need to step away for a second. Thats not a bad thing, its nice to be challenged. I'm still enjoying the story, good job :D So anyway I'm off to read some more, just had to comment here.

Hope Edward kicks some ass!

perfect cant wait for the next chapter

great chapter! update soon!

yes!! so happy you posted an update! this story keeps getting better and better..totally hooked! thanks again!

I love getting that little update e-mail for this story. I enjoy reading this so much. I am enjoying the club as well. There is so much to see and do. Thanks for delving a little deeper into D/s world and sharing this with us. I can't wait for the next update.

March 23rd?! aww. it's getting exciting though!

I am absolutely amazed at your grasp of the BDSM community!  I've found so many stories here on Twilighted that deal with the subject that I was wondering which came first...the stories or the site?  I would love to correspond with you not only about the story that I am enjoying so completely but also about your insight into this culture.  I can be emailed at Motherthing@kc.rr.com if you like.

Motherthing

Great chapter.  You did a great job of showing us what this club was like.  I liked how it was described.  I felt that I could easily picture it.

She really is a danger magnet.  I am half expecting Tyler to show up at any moment.  ;)

Amazing chapter --- can't wait for the 23rd!!

Wow, how many more men will want to forcefully possess Bella?  That was a very interesting situation Bella was in where she didn't vocalize her feelings the way she should in that fearful situation.  I'm pissed that Victoria didn't report the guy or get reinforcements to get Bella out.  I can't believe they allowed him back into the club given that his sub is clearly under some form of duress.  It doesn't matter that she's 21 and of age to supposedly make her own decisions.  He's a pedophile and overly aggressive.  It's getting to a point that Bella won't ever be allowed outside her home.

this is going to be a very long 2 weeks waiting for an update... very good chapter i really enjoyed it. And now i want a petite four.