Just finished reading through all of these chapters and I love this story. I am so excited for more.

please post sooner

Holy hell (literally!) that was ... well, hot!  This is certainly not your average Gentleman's Club, and I am very curious about what else there is to satisfy the BDSM palate.

Oh Lord, I'd like to go on a picnic with Domward!  And poor old Jasper, I thought he might fall a little in love with Bella.  The whole Tyler business is getting creepier and I suspect it's going to get worse before it gets better.

this club sounds more and more intresting emmetts games so amusing, but poor bella she realy does have bad luck following her around, now it's this caius thing i love how edward defended her and disbelieved caius as he tried to get bella into trouble, i hope edward got him thrown out but what of his poor wife/sub  he is obviously a bad dominant? more please

Loved this chapter, very erotic - food and sex, always a win!  As for Tyler, looks like he really is a bit of a pyscho stalker.  Does he really believe that he can have her?  Perhaps he thinks that because Edward shares her with Jasper, she's up for it.  Clearly, the police won't be able to do much at this stage except perhaps warn him off, but I'm not sure that will be enough if he's psychotic enough.  What a shame Bella had to puke her lovely dinner, as well as have him potentially ruin such an enjoyable evening for all of them.

Another fabulous chapter. I guess I'm as bad as the forum ladies cause I just love the club debauchery. Not a huge fan of Caius and his drugging of Bree while he attacks another woman but I have faith that Master Edward will come to the rescue. And a little drama is always a good thing. As long as we get plenty of delicious Domward/slavella interaction, I'm a deliriously happy camper. Great job. Lovin' this story. Mmmm...

I'm not sure what to make of this chapter.  I was a bit shocked that Edward would want Bella to do something quite so intimate in front of Jasper, especially at the breakfast table (!) and then it all went to hell.  Jasper's reticence the night before made it clear that, although he was aware of Edward's lifestyle and his and Bella's relationship, he was still not completely au fait with the specifics, and I thought it was a bit much that Edward would push things quite so far after such a short time - I actually think he deserved a beating for that and Bella's consequent humiliation.  However, he retrieved it by his actions in The Chamber and by the fact that at the end he showed that he considers Bella to be not just his sub, but his lover and his equal, and it was nice to hear Bella use his name for the first time.

Blimey, Edward is so bad!  I have to admit that the whole idea of nipple and clit clamps makes me cringe a bit and want to cross my arms and legs.  However, it's just coming up to 8pm here and I have an overwhelming urge to have a cheese and ham omelette for dinner!

Looks like Tyler Crowley could become a problem.  And I wonder if Edward will be annoyed if he finds out about his flirtations with Bella, especially if it isn't Bella who tells him.  Jasper seems like a good guy.  Is he into BDSM and will Bella be required to serve him in a scene?  Bella managed to get through this initial inter-action without having to address Edward by name or title but I can't see how she will avoid it long term.  Will Edward want her to call him Master in front of Jasper?  I hope he's not cross with her about her hesitation about Jasper's potential close proximity.

Eww that Caius is a jerk!  I love how Dom Edward shows how much he truly cares about Bella.  Turning off the vibrator to ask what is wrong and the things he said to Caius.

Holy crapoli, I'm gonna need to take a break for half an hour, I'm feeling a little overcome (pun definitely intended!)  Phew!  That is all.