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Reviewer: dragonlady (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh, I do NOT trust Caius. I know he is going to be trouble. Bella really is a danger magnet!
I hope Jasper does get to train with Carlisle and Esme. And find a nice Alice to keep him AWAY from Bella. Friends with Master, but away from Bella. Just saying...
Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 19
Still Tuesday! Thank you for the update, it didn't seem like a Tuesday without your fic - especially the palce you left us with last time. Love the re-affirmation between Edward/Bella and interesting development of Caius as a potential problem pest for our couple. Great job!
Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 19
Short- but sweet :)
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter, as always! Very nice to get introduced to some of B&E's past with Carlisle & Esme - and the thought of Jasper training with them is very intriguing indeed... And the love and protection Edward has for Bella - it's just beautiful!
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
keep arguing with the hubby we all do it and it is totally worth it to read your stuff
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
keep arguing with the hubby we all do it and it is totally worth it to read your stuff
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
keep arguing with the hubby we all do it and it is totally worth it to read your stuff
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 19
I have enjoyed every chapter and I'm worried about Tyler..
please update
Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
I argue with my husband about spending too much time with fanfiction and I just read it. I enjoy every chapter tremendously the most recent included although I thought more might happen with Jasper.... Thank you for the turn on ;p.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 19
You my dear are weaving quite a complicated plot here and I love it! Thank your husband for us, will you?
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh sweety I know about the husband who is jealous of fanfiction, I'm sitting next to him right now:), Love this story, look forward to April 6th.
Reviewer: spunkluvr (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
Gosh that was just desperate and beautiful. WOW.
Reviewer: baby_pau (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wuao!!!! I love this story!!! is totally amazing, the way you make the characters play is just great.
Congrats!!!
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 19
The end was very beautiful. But the S@@! is about to hit the fan!
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 19
Caius will be nothing but trouble I am sure. I find Tyler's absence a little unnerving. But Edward and Bella's love for each other is reassuring even with the feeling of dark clouds coming. I enjoyed this chapter! Looking forward to the next! I think most husbands benefit from the fanfiction addition; they just do not realize it.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 19
Arguing can be good for a relationship. Great chapter. Is Alice going to make an appearance?
Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter, looks like more trouble ahead.
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 19
great chapter...i always forget that you update every two weeks so its always a happy surprise when i get the notice...thanks
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 19
loved it bella really does bring on the danger lol can't wait till the next update
Reviewer: cullenbear (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 19
I loved all the electricity in this chapter that flowed between Edward and Bella. You could really feel how much they care for each other. God I would love to see these two get married. I’m getting the impression that Edward might not want to share any more am I wrong? See you 4/6 it’s funny I keep a running to do list to get things done but all I have to do is read your authors note and see when your next update is and that sticks in my head with no reminder can’t wait. Lol
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh this is such a great chapter - Keep writing! and I agrue with my husband becasue I read to much fanficton :)
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
Caius wasn't going to go without something like what he did. He was furious and upset he was caught and once again removed from the club. How far will he try to go to get revenge? To get back what he thought was wrongfully taken? Will he take it against Bella and Edward and the rest of the club? Edward is scared for Bella more than himself. He should at least take some more precautions.
Will Jasper still want to join after what he saw?
Esme and Bella made a nice friendship it seems, will we get to see more of it?
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
Tell hubby to read a book or watch TV. WE NEED YOU! This was a wonderful chapter. Edward loves Bella ao much and showed he needs her. Loved it!
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
great chapter! i really saw edwards love for her here. and i liked how you brought carlisle and esme into the story!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 19
I continue to be intrigued by this story. In the beginning, I couldn't understand how/why Bella would want to be in this type of relationship and now I am in complete awe of their relationship and the intensity of their love.
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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