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Reviewer: i-love-twilightSaga (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 19

i love thesee'll bee soo good if bella becamee pregnantt 8-) PLEASE MAKE BELLA PREGNANT!

Reviewer: kapap (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 19

I just love this story!

Now they have an enemy, I am worried!

Thanks for sharring:)

Reviewer: amorelli (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

Tell hubby you rocked it!  Great chapter.......I really like how you give the date of the next update.  It's nice to have soemthing to look forward to.  I just tell my husband that fan fiction is my form of crack.......and it's free!  :)

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 19

Good chapter! I gotta tell ya, when they break roles is my favorite chapters of all :)

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, don't know about this...but still reading. :~)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hey great chap =] thank god they got caius kicked out =]

Reviewer: Sari9 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 19

Loved the lovemaking at the end. How they call each other love, no collar, no ritual.

Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 19

Tell your hubby to follow Bella off the damn cliff. FANFICTION MUST LIVE ON!

Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 19

that's interesting, i also have been surprised a bit by the unregular addressing "love" toward E. i even thought firstly it was him who called B "love", but also felt this was what they needed and how they felt at the moment...LOL, everyone is getting an expert and asking the right questions here.  thanks to the lovely author's "training".

Reviewer: kellybex (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 19

Liked this chapter a lot. Caring Edward...not a lot of the foot kissing slave stuff...really see the love E has for B.

Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 19

This story is so try to Edward in many ways... He's very controling and fearful that something is going to happen to Bella.  It is sweet the way he is, but I'm afraid like Bella, that he will go even more controling/dom and not let her out of the house, because of fear of losing her.  Always excited for your chapter.  You leave me wanting more and more.  Can't wait till April :)

Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

Mmm.  Yummy.  <3<3<3

I love this story.  It's super sex-ay! Woop Woop!

Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

Thank you for your time spent in the Fanfiction world, love your story. Thanks for adding more intrigue to this story looking forward to April 6th

Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 19

Thanks ^^

Reviewer: RoseKelly1021 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 19

Love the chapter. More soon.

Reviewer: dreamzuvedward (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 19

I have a question about Bella and Edward's interaction at the end of this chapter. How did she know that she could address him plainly, and refer to herself in first person? Was it simply the intensity of the moment, something she picked up in the way he handled her, or the fact that they were in the bedroom and not the playroom? Or that wouldn't make sense since she typically slept in the bedroom on the floor or in bed as he would arrange her. Hmm... Great update by the way!  

Author's Response:

I appreciate this question because I wanted to explain this in the chapter, but couldn't find a way to do it that didn't detract from the emotions of the moment.  There are a couple of things that would tell Bella that this encounter was lovemaking and not a scene, and that gives her a little freedom. 

For one, she wasn't in her bondage collar.  Another thing is that Edward is clearly upset about what happened (or could have happened) at the club.  Those two things combined with the fact that she is free to speak her heart when she is in his arms made her break from her role acceptable, appropriate even because that was what Edward needed.  And she wants to give him what he needs.

I hope that makes sense.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 19

Ooh no...another potential nightmare. I think we need to start killing some bad guys. Two thumbs up for Jasper training with Esme and Carlisle and that *HAS* to be an outtake! A Domme Esme! OMG, so wonderful.

Reviewer: hotmom08 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 19

I loved this chapter. Hell, I love this story period. My favorite is the difference in the sub/dom relationship between bella and edward. its explorative and authorative but you can feel their love for each other behind everything. Please update ASAP!

Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

I kinda love it when they revert back to Edward and Bella for just a little bit. It's interesting though how she still refers to him as Master in her head. 

Great job with this chapter. I wonder where Caius will pop up in their life again. Maybe he will just go away and not bother them... doubtful but hopeful. 

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 19

Awesome! How does one person cause sooo much trouble?

 Goody- I'm tired of Edward sharing her.

Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 19

The Chair made me laugh and wince all at the same time!  :-D

I enjoyed seeing Bella pull out of her submissive self for a little while at the end of this chapter.  She was comforting when Edward needed it; it's good he doesn't have to be the strong one all the time.

And yes, time for Jasper to go to his own room, lol!  Maybe Mistress Esme will work him over soon.

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 19

This was brilliant :) Is jasper getting feelings for bella? Just a bit?

Reviewer: 3kdz4me (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 19

Shit, I always argue with my husband about fanfiction too.  He says I'm addicted - he's right!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great...I love seeing them like this as much as I like them as "D/s" Thanks cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Casey Curtiss (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 19

Is it wrong of me to get a warm feeling from the fact that Edward sounded a little our of control there at the end?  He's always so controlled and sure of himself, to hear him tell her that he can't lose her and that she's his without his usual control was hearwarming. 

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