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Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter! I hope nothing more comes of this trouble with Caius. It seems like Bella and Edward have enough on their plate without adding new problems. I like getting to see glimpses of Bella and Edward's love for each other mixed in with all the Dom/sub stuff. It shows that they are a real couple, not just in it for the sex. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

Tell your husband that he doesn't know what he's talking about! You've got tons of readers that are eating out of your hand, dying to find out what happens next! In fact, my favorite day of the week is every other Tuesday :) GREAT chapter, as always. It was wonderful to see Edward let his guard down for once. Angsty Edward is sexy, and it was also nice that Jasper had a limited role this week. I hope his character is starting to run its course..I love Jasper, but I liked it better when it was just the two of them. Still waiting to see what happens with Tyler. If that was a restraining order that Bella signed, I hope it sends Tyler over the edge so that we get to see a REALLY angsty Edward!! Can you put them back in the playroom next time? It's been a little while since we've had a new scene. Thanks again, and don't pay your hubby any attention. We need you more. Haha just kiddin. Have a great week.

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 19

Mistress Esme! I love it! 2 doms together, quite a fun idea (could never see Carlisle as a sub!) Great chapter - I love the way they reconnected at the end. No kinky stuff, just love.

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 19

What is it with husbands feeling neglected lately? I swear about 80% of fanfic people on Facebook are having Twi related issues! Men! 

 

Anyways, the review. This fic is amazing, it's unlike any situation I've ever read about, and I love it. Have I glossed over Edward telling her he loves her, or has he not said it to her? That would be a future wish, personally. She has made it seem like the marriage is purely for tax/appearance purposes, but it'd be nice for her to receive confirmation that he actually wants to marry her too. Well, I assume he does?

Reviewer: missy85 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 19

Excellent! And, as always, def worth the wait! Loved the plot development

Reviewer: BeautifulDeath (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

it's sweet how much they love each other :) i really like how passive and protective Edward is towards Bella. You can see how much they love each other. i liked this chapter a lot. 

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 19

I had to wait until wednesday to read the update where I live, but that's ok...things doesn't always go according to plan! Tyler looks like a kitten compared to Caius, I really woorid about what he will come up with! See you on the 6th!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 19

fantastic chapter, caius is gone (for good i hope) and jasper thinking of training nice ending just the two of them together no extras just both of them seeking comfort from the othe, more please

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

Aww wow I really loved this chapter!!! I love seeing how sweet Edward and Bella are with eachother <3 Thank you soo much for the update! SO cant wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

Aww wow I really loved this chapter!!! I love seeing how sweet Edward and Bella are with eachother <3 Thank you soo much for the update! SO cant wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 19

excellent chapter!

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

I love this chapter! I hope that Jasper only has a crush and soon meets someone new, like oh Alice? As always I am very eager for the next update. Oh yeah, this A/N was not long. Again I LOVE this story

Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 19

I hear you sister!!

I get the same complaines from my husband about spending too much time here, too!!

Great chapter, a little short for my appetite, but satisfiying.

Thanks, keep up the good, hot, sexy and dominiring work.

XXOO

Mgg

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 19

love the story... it is good to see the characters in different roles.... great chapter

Reviewer: Silkissiren (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 19

I now live for Tuesdays. You never fail to satisfy the need for just a little more drama, scandal, and romance in each new chapter.

Reviewer: Pyejammies (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 19

Glad I couldn't sleep and got up to find that this had come in at last.  Is Caius goign to be a problem?  I hope not but I suspect he will.  What a lovely ending to this chapter.  It's good to see the love there.  Now go , be good to your husband.   Love this bb.

Reviewer: TiffanyCullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

wow that great

Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

This was great! A little action, a little sweetness, a little sex...very nice. Looking forward to the 6th!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 19

It was nice to see Edward's insecurity. Edward and Bella have trouble coming at them from all sides--Tyler, Caius, Lauren, and James--Even Jasper (in a way)--it can only make their relationship stronger. But these troubles coming up around the wedding can't be good.                                                     My husband is jealous of the time I spend with fanfiction, too. Maybe we should start a support group to help them deal.

Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 19

I did enjoy this chapter. Although, Bella always knows where to find trouble. I am glad that Bella and Edward go to have some time together alone. I like seeing Edward not sure of himself. I like knowing that he doesn't have it all together. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

-Are we going to hear anymore about their wedding? Just wondering.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 19

awesome as always..cant wait for the next chapter..uve done an awesome job with this story

Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 19

soo good!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

So Tyler's still out there even if we can't see him around right now... and we're adding Caius to the mix. I'm not so worried about him exposing the 'club' or culture there, but Bella's frequently put in situations where she's left vulnerable to the type of predator Caius is... at least, that's my current interpretation.

It would appear that there would be a lot of very powerful people who would rally to help Bella if she needed it :)

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

I can see Caius teaming up with Eric to get back at Edward via Bella.  Oh, I don't want anything to happen to her.

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

I love this story and I totally adore when Edward is so adoring of Bella. It is so intense, his love for her. And tell your husband he is not supposed to understand, but if it wasn't this, you might be shopping online. That quiets my husband every time, because free is better than spending money!!
Good luck,
Micki

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