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Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter!
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 19
Brilliant chaper!
Reviewer: ccf (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 19
I loved it. I can't wait for more. You really are very talented. Thank you for writing. :)
Reviewer: Emmi (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 19
I don't want to see that Caius guy ever again, but I doubt that will be the case...Oh, lets just look and see :)
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 19
I'm so nervous about the future for these two!
I always enjoy your updates, and this was no exception.
Reviewer: mom4ver2004 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 19
Awesome chapter
Reviewer: Ironic Twist (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 7
This chapter clarified what bothers me about this Bella. There was something, but I couldn't figure it out...
Bella, it seems, is utterly unfulfilled outside of her sexual relationship with Edward. When she reacted negatively to Jasper's possible move it was because it would take time with Edward away from her. He's all she has.
To go from having an important career, friends and other interests to having nothing but a sexual relationship with her Dom, even though that's what she wants, obviously leaves her lacking, at least a little bit. People who are involved with one aspect of their lives to the detriment of all others are usually called something with the suffix -aholic attached to it. Booze, work, gambling, drugs... sex.
Perhaps I'm misreading it and Bella is fulfilled some other way, but there hasn't been evidence of that yet. that I recall.
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 19
This is so very tastefully written! I love this story!
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 19
I have to admit that I too am a bit worried about Caius' retaliation. I'm curious to see Jasper train with Esme and Carlisle. Will you be doing a separate story on that?
I know how you feel about arguing with the hubs regarding ff. Happens to me all the time. Solidarity sister!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 19
I'm guessing Caius is going to prove to be a dangerous man to cross and I'm sure we haven't seen the last of him, although it's hard to know what he can do without exposing his own predilictions. No appearance by Tyler this time, but, again, I don't doubt he'll be back. Poor Edward is obviously very concerned about all this negative attention Bella is getting and looks to be freaking out a bit ... all that, and a wedding to deal with! Counting the days until 6th April.
Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 19
Oh crap so now Caius is going to come after Bella too? Sigh...Great chapter :)
Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 19
Tell the hubs to back off- great chapter! Plenty of drama and I laughed out loud at Mistress Esme and the F/D chair.
Reviewer: girli565 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 19
God, I love this B&E! The lemon at the end is so heartfelt. Their love is strong and this, "I'm fine, love. Everything is fine."
"I know, Bella. I just can't..." his voice broke and he breathed harshly "...I can't lose you."
Ung! Happy sigh :)
Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great Chapter!!!!!!!
Edward did not call Bella "slave" in this chapter. He called her by her name. To me that seemed so much more loving. When he called her slave all time, it seemed so cold and impersonal. In this chapter Edward seemed to show more feeling for Bella. Especially at the end.
I as scared of what Caius will do. Now Bella and Edward ahve to worry about Tyler and Caius. Very interesting. And with Bella being at home by herself, scary.
As always you leave me wanting more and MORE. Can't wait till April 6th for you or next update. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great stories like this make arguing with my husband about reading fanfiction too much all worthwhile!!! LOL!!
Love the story!!
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 19
Thank you for this wonderful chapter. I fight with my husband too over fan fiction. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: Izzy Whitlock (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 19
I enjoyed the chapter but your a/n was worth a review. My husband is sick of my fanfiction addiction also and I'm only a reader. God forbid I ever decided to write.
I really like when Bella called Edward "love." It was right what he needed in that moment, "love" not "master."
Reviewer: ggghhhaaarrr89 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 19
fuck
it is awesome
Reviewer: Joshly (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 19
:-) nice
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 19
O no. Now we have two nuts to watch out for. Caius. and Tyler.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Linda Romith (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 19
I just love your story, and have read all chapters with much delight! I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner, but only after having published my own ff do I know how much reviews mean. So please keep up the good work!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter! I hope nothing more comes of this trouble with Caius. It seems like Bella and Edward have enough on their plate without adding new problems. I like getting to see glimpses of Bella and Edward's love for each other mixed in with all the Dom/sub stuff. It shows that they are a real couple, not just in it for the sex. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 19
Tell your husband that he doesn't know what he's talking about! You've got tons of readers that are eating out of your hand, dying to find out what happens next! In fact, my favorite day of the week is every other Tuesday :) GREAT chapter, as always. It was wonderful to see Edward let his guard down for once. Angsty Edward is sexy, and it was also nice that Jasper had a limited role this week. I hope his character is starting to run its course..I love Jasper, but I liked it better when it was just the two of them. Still waiting to see what happens with Tyler. If that was a restraining order that Bella signed, I hope it sends Tyler over the edge so that we get to see a REALLY angsty Edward!! Can you put them back in the playroom next time? It's been a little while since we've had a new scene. Thanks again, and don't pay your hubby any attention. We need you more. Haha just kiddin. Have a great week.
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 19
Mistress Esme! I love it! 2 doms together, quite a fun idea (could never see Carlisle as a sub!) Great chapter - I love the way they reconnected at the end. No kinky stuff, just love.
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