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Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 20
Mmmmm....hot shower, very nice! Collar doesn't bother me, but the leash-too many dog references come to mind! And when they were sitting out by the pool all I could think about was that they better not live in a neighborhood like mine where the houses are close together!! So many things happening-first Tyler and now Caius. Loved this chapter0-ahd some smexing, some loving, some slave/master and some tension. What more could I need??
Reviewer: Miss_Beckie_Louise (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter!
loved it.
I hope that Caius as I'm guessing it was him gets done and ends up in prision and that Taylor gets ran over :)
Update soon!
xo Beckie
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 20
Following you on twitter :)
Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 20
What a cruel place to end it! Edward is not going to like this new development.
Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 19
well I am new to the story and so far love it ver much can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks.....
Reviewer: lynsrob (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 13
I don't know where you're going with the Tyler thing, but it surprises me it's Tyler and not James lol. I love the explanation you gave for Edward sharing Bella with Jaspar, it helped me deal with that. Edward is putting Bella's needs first and not just tossing her around, that makes more sense.
Reviewer: lynsrob (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
The way Bella explains it makes sense. If this lifestyle is what keeps her sane, safe & happy then that's what is best for her.
Reviewer: lynsrob (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very interesting story, Bella is so obedient and I understand this is a lifestyle choice, but I'm interested to know why Edward be be displeased with her reaction to Jaspar.
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 19
This was a really good chapter....It is breathtaking to see the softer side of Edward...his love for Bella is truly exquisite!!!!
I am most definitely anticipating the drama that is sure to unfold with either Tylor and/or Caius....anxiously awaiting the next update!!!
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 15
A little Possessiveward is most definitely YUMMY!!!!
Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 10
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER...so far it was definitely my favorite!!
I love Edward & Bella's relationship, it is built on what seems like a very open & honest way of living...ummm, I don't really know how to express it but the way you portray their relationship makes me get this intense feeling of an ultimate bond between them from everything they have experienced so openly with eachother...it is breathtaking...truly intense...and I am so intrigued by it but then at the same time I find myself cringing at some of the things that Edward makes Bella do and I think if it was me....I would have a permanently bruised backside!!! LOL
Reviewer: mikkirose13 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 19
Poor Bella. But Edward wants to show her off this is what happens. Caius is a a whole other clusterfuck in itself. Till next chapter:)
Reviewer: mikkirose13 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 8
I dont like Bella Jasper Sorry. I t is my personal preference.
Reviewer: silversteina (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 19
What a wonderful chapter. I know that there is trouble coming up for Edward and Bella. I just hope that it brings them closer! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: mikkirose13 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ok your end note made me LMAO. I guess we do have to have a plot sometimes:( LOL.
Reviewer: mikkirose13 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
YES, I like very much. Very Very Good & hot.
Reviewer: emmys angel (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 19
wow i just started reading today and couldn'tr stop till i finished that was one of the best i have read so far i can't wait til next week
thank you
angel
Reviewer: charlieD (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 19
enjooying your story thanks cant wait for 6th
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
Lol dont argue with your husband. But i loved this update! Its so amazing to see esme and carlisle as doms! its insane though lol
Reviewer: benna (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
Loved the chapter. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: nch2691 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
I LOVE THIS STORY AND LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR UPDATES :)
Reviewer: starryangel1225 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
I love seeing the connection between them. Thank you for sharing that
Reviewer: KaitlynAusten (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ya! I continue to love this story. Its a very "naughty" escape from life.
I'm interested to see what happens with Jasper....i'm just sayin'. Whats up with that boy?
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
yes!! i love their connection to each other! just by a look she knew what he needed to hear..that is what is so awesome about their relationship..you can see the trust in their relationship.
"I knew that I was already chained to him in the most important way. I loved him. And that was the strongest, most binding chain of all."
that it is my dear..that it is!
i can't wait til April 6th!!!!
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 19
Another great chapter! I liked seeing Edward insecurities, and it was great to see Bella notice them when no one else did.
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