Now that I am caught up I thought I would review.  All I can say is WOW!  I have read the summary to this story a few times and didn't know if I could handle it or not.  I have read a few dom/sub stories and I am at present reading two different ones, but nothing like this with Bella being a 24/7 slave.  You have really done your homework is all I can say.  It is really amazing what you can find out there.  Like you, I couldn't do the things Bella does mainly cause I can't keep my mouth shut and not liking not having my own free will.  Constantly thinking about your actions is very hard and having to ask my husband if I can use the bathroom when needed would be, well a bitch for lack of a better word. He would look at me like I'm crazy! Ha!

Your writing is very flowing and easily read.  I do appreciate that you have given Edward a very soft, loving side every now and then when he freely expresses his love to her and she is allowed that as well is comforting.  I don't want to ramble in this review so I will stop there even though I have many things I could discuss, but I just want to let you know I am enjoying this story.  I guess all the drama that you have wrote so well is what I find I am drawn to.  The bdsm is just a backdrop to what the story is really about.  Does that make any sense? 

The next update seems so far away now that I am caught up with you.  I didn't know I would be so eager to know what happens next but I guess that's the gift of a good writer...keeping her readers wanting more, right?!  Bravo! 

Hugs, Stephanie

Ya know, it just figures I'd catch up with the latest update right as I  was getting wayyy too used to instant gratification! LOL

Things are really heating up now with no less than three shady characters on the scene ready to wreak havoc!  Love the mystery of trying to deduce how they might cause trouble and how big a link with canon it might represent.  I figure the girl was Victoria?  Eager to find out.

Thoroughly enjoyed the club!  Would love an out-take of Jasper there! ;D

Love what you do!  Thanks for sharing and warming our lives as well!!!

Loving how each chapter just gets better!  Excellent use of the Danger-mangnet feature!!

Thanks for writing and sharing!!!

Oh,  it's VERY hot in here, indeed!  ;D   Very much enjoying the ride and more than eager to see more of what transpires.  A bit sad this won't be a threesome tale, but respect why it isn't.  I'll have to check out your other fics for that fix from the sounds of it!   More than interested to see how Tyler and James move the story along.  Great twists!

Thanks for writing and sharing!!!

A cliffie indeed. Looking forward to the 20th!

Oh boy. I love this wonderful chapter. I have to say that I'm not normally fond of cliffhangers but with this story, it adds something to the story. As always I love this wonderful story and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. ^_^

i love this chapter! you're right about loving this chapter too! finally a chapter ending about Bella & Edward and not about a sub & dom! now i'm off to read 10 chapters more...

the book thing has me dead...and now...Caius, too? crap!

Hit and run my ass!, my god, where trouble is you will find Bella...hope this works out for them. when is Alice going to appear?. loved it can't wait for more.

Wow, what a chapter and a cliffie as well!

I didn't notice if Edward left the front door unlocked when he came back in with the paper and the book.  Then they went out to the backyard for breakfast.  Now i'm worried that Tyler has come into the house to snoop or hide in a closet!  Gah, i'll be fretting over this for two weeks!  Surely he wouldn't have the balls for that?  Surely?

As always, your B&E have me re-reading and wanting more.  I shall pop right over to the forum and see what i can see ;-)

Thank you most of all for taking the time to share this great story with all of us readers!

Thanks ^^

Not much is happening lately.

i love it when thee is no master and slave, just Edward and Bella, i adore those moments :)

i love this sfm, thank you :D