I don't know why but surely a slave does not offer anything on her knees except to her Master, besides she calls the other men Sir, and definitely she won't be serving them on her knees ecept when teh Master Precisely and clearly ask her to do so, she does not jump to teh conclusion that acting as usual means also to do it with the visitor !! ...At least that was what I know from first hand experience.

But maybe some Masters in those TPE accept sometimes that their sub behave in such manners....depends on which school they follow whether it is "Gorean" ( Extreme TPE ) or other less extreme.

 

In any case and despite some things that I do not  agree to myself , you stroy is really very well documented, serious and hot :)

GREAT JOB and thanks for the pleasure reading you...

I like plots especially when the bitch is caught in her own wen of deceit :)

I think honestly, for the sake of the story, to not have lemons at each chapter,I dunno IMHO it makes it more convincing and keep vulgarity at bay :)

But you are a veru good writer, and your writing style is everything hot, sexy, intersting, serious, well dsocumented and search, in brief everything  BUT vulgar.

It is a pleasure reading you :)

I don't know why but I feel agitated ...something bad is about to happen....

Wooow The research you made to come up with these BDSM scenes are revealed to be thorough, detailed and time consuming !!

You are indeed a very good writer, who not only rely on her talent but study thoroughly the theme she wants to cover, in this case BDSM, which is UNLIKE many thinks a matter  of tiyong teh sub and spanking her, there's a whole different "Styles" from teh extreme to teh milder, seems you have chosen the extreme, and this is challenging, and I admire your courage, free spirited open mindedness, especially that many though warned at the start of teh novel, would be shocked I am sure.

I am in awe since I know something about the life style, having lived with a Dom for a while, but it was on the milder side of the spectrum but he was the typically Dominating Master, It was me who had LOTS of hard and soft limits :)

So as a Sub I do appreciate and understand your efforts and talents.

Beautifully and authentically written, and most of all thank you for explaining that a sub or a slave in this relationship is actually the real party with power not the the Master, without her consent a Master could do nothing.

Again hats off to you, eager to read the rest :)

As if there weren't already enough good arguments for getting a shower with multiple heads...  :)

 

Their depth of devotion for each other is so touching.  I love how they show their feelings for each other, especially in the context of the Master/slave relationship.

OMG!!!!! Poor Bella, please, please, please update soon. I'll do wathever you want, just tell me :P!!!

Besos

Sally

please please please

 

continue.

 

you're leaving me hanging, chica!

WHHAT?! Wow so didn't see that one coming! lol Such an interesting twist...thanks for the update! :)

OMG!! I can't believe you left us hanging like that- are we being punished?!? I will be anxiousely awaiting the nxt chapter!!!

eek!  Caius!

I keep focusing on some practical questions: are thjey eventually going to have kids? If they do will Bella continue as a 24/7 slave? During the wedding will she conduct herself as a slave?
I can get the turn on in submitting- on occasion- but I just can't relate to the slave thing. I'm trying to understand the psyche of someone who WANTS to be leashed and treated as a total and complete possession without any rights or freewill, or possessions of her own. Needing permission to use the bathroom? All the time, not just for play.
This is in no way a comment on your writing, and I know people do make these decisions and choose this type of lifestyle, I just can't undertsand it. perhaps the only comment I could make about the character development is that I would want it to give me a deeper look into Bella's psychological makeup, thoughts and feelings about why she made this choice, why she craves it, needs it, is fulfilled by it. Specifically in relation to who she used to be, the person she is described as having been, because it seems like a complete about face and that's maybe what I don't get.

Now that I am caught up I thought I would review.  All I can say is WOW!  I have read the summary to this story a few times and didn't know if I could handle it or not.  I have read a few dom/sub stories and I am at present reading two different ones, but nothing like this with Bella being a 24/7 slave.  You have really done your homework is all I can say.  It is really amazing what you can find out there.  Like you, I couldn't do the things Bella does mainly cause I can't keep my mouth shut and not liking not having my own free will.  Constantly thinking about your actions is very hard and having to ask my husband if I can use the bathroom when needed would be, well a bitch for lack of a better word. He would look at me like I'm crazy! Ha!

Your writing is very flowing and easily read.  I do appreciate that you have given Edward a very soft, loving side every now and then when he freely expresses his love to her and she is allowed that as well is comforting.  I don't want to ramble in this review so I will stop there even though I have many things I could discuss, but I just want to let you know I am enjoying this story.  I guess all the drama that you have wrote so well is what I find I am drawn to.  The bdsm is just a backdrop to what the story is really about.  Does that make any sense? 

The next update seems so far away now that I am caught up with you.  I didn't know I would be so eager to know what happens next but I guess that's the gift of a good writer...keeping her readers wanting more, right?!  Bravo! 

Hugs, Stephanie

Ya know, it just figures I'd catch up with the latest update right as I  was getting wayyy too used to instant gratification! LOL

Things are really heating up now with no less than three shady characters on the scene ready to wreak havoc!  Love the mystery of trying to deduce how they might cause trouble and how big a link with canon it might represent.  I figure the girl was Victoria?  Eager to find out.

Thoroughly enjoyed the club!  Would love an out-take of Jasper there! ;D

Love what you do!  Thanks for sharing and warming our lives as well!!!