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Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 21
i don't usually stand J/B ff as i am totally E/B Team, but Jasper of All of Me is kind of part of the deal and seems to be their only close friend. so i miss him somehow,..lol, hope he'll pop in here, maybe with enother girl.
Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 21
I enjoy a good cliffhanger. It makes the next chapter so much more exciting. I liked this chapter. Edward working with Bella to explore some new things about herself is so great. The part about Victoria is so sad.
I can't wait to see who is actually in the bushes. I have an idea, but I hate to jump to conclusions.
I can't wait for the next chapter and this outtake is going to brighten my Tuesday. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 21
this chapter is great as usual. it's one of my most fave ff. i always crave for more, of course recommended on TwiSunday on RAoR and wish more readers found out this story.
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 21
OH my GOD I would die if that happened to me..yeah being strung up against a wall with a ball gag in my mouth completely naked...anyway the point is i would die just being caught naked by a stranger. haha good chapter, im excited for the next one!
Reviewer: HotSausceGorgonzola (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
Hi! I LOVE this story, by the way. But I was wondering if you could reccomend any similar fics for me?
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 19
AHHHHH intense with Caius!! I love scenes where edward is desperate, that last bedroom scene was very nice
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 18
aw shit edward better be careful!! and caius better watch his back
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 21
Holly crap, what a cliffy. I wonder who it is. Maybe it's just Jasper back perusing the garden. Doubt it though.
Can't wait for your next post, I've just spent the last few days reading & am all caught up meaning I'll have to be tortured, along with Bella, waiting for my next chapters.
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 20
Well, so much for Victoria being a bad guy [girl] and creating trouble with James. Guess she can't testify against Caius now.
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
Totally enjoyed it. Thanks for writing. Now we have Caius to worry about. Wonder who will get her 1st: Tyler, James or Caius
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 17
phew it IS hot in here.......
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 18
Boy, you said it, "danger magnet"
So, I wonder if redhead is Victoria & she's going to find a way to let James in the club. I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of him nor that he is too happy about being shot down & made to feel marginal by Edward.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 21
Edward should have anticipated Tyler. I did, or Caius. I bet Tyler.
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 16
an uppidty shady club love it lol. and damn bella stop attracting major creeps!
Reviewer: twilipated007 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 21
**attempting to lift jaw from ground in order to review** Nope, speechless!
Reviewer: blueeyez (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
who is it? its killing me i think it might be tyler update soon its geting good
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 15
plesant chapter =)
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 21
thank you for the update. Looking forward to the Jasper update I was just thinking how I missed Jasper.
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 21
Nooo! But, on the bright side, my birthday is May 12th... so a juicy chapter, pretty please? Loved this one.. the net sounds sort of fun ;-)
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 14
good chapter liked the jasper action. liked some sweet edward bella time
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 13
fuck you tyler i was dying for some after dinner three way loving!! edward is a good teacher for jasper
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 12
hmmmm is jasper going to play with them/bella...?
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
i'm so happy that jasper and bella are better =). oh lord is it tyler.....?!!
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 10
whoa that was so intense! i was completely with bella when jasper freaked out!! i was shocked!! i LOVED the moments between bella and edward this chapter. awesome job. again good mixture of everything
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 15
I was wondering when that little problem would prop up with Jasper. I expected Edward to be more possesive than he is.
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