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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 23
want more E B and J muah hahaha Love this story read all your out takes hehehe amazing!!!!!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 23
That's just downright nasty! Drinking thru a funnel.
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 23
I waited up hoping to get this update. Loved it and I'm impressed with Bella. i couldn't drink thru a gag. Good for her! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: mmsa (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
intense
Reviewer: loverlover (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 22
hay i thought you were going to post more of the story to day-scenc you have not posted yet make it very very lemmony
Reviewer: FracturedReality (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Lustin4aCullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
ACK! Hangin on a cliffie for 2 weeks!!??!! That is exactly why I only read completed fics. Thank goodness I'm here on 11 and you've done thru chapter 22....Phew! I wouldn't have handled that well. LoL
Reviewer: mistydarling (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 22
i just came across this fic and it's pretty darn good - i was convinced it had to be written by a man because it seems that the number of blow jobs far exceeds the number of clit licks! i'm glad you're writing this fic and i look forward to the update! my personal unf's - i'd love more details in the sex - and i'd love for bella to get some lip to clit action - hugs!
Author's Response: I'm definitely not a guy, lol. Glad you're enjoying this even though there is an imbalance in the oral sex ratios. Though you have to admit that Bella isn't doing too badly in the overall orgasm tally.
Thanks for reading and for taking the time to share your thoughts.
Reviewer: Danmarie96 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
omg i love this story soo much. i also love your outtakes for this story. i think you should make an outtake about bellas time with carlisle and esme i would love to read it pleaseeee
Reviewer: loverlover (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 22
hey you are a really good writer post soon :)
Reviewer: Lustin4aCullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 5
um..... can you say "over-stimulation"? sheesh.
Reviewer: Lustin4aCullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 3
HE SHARES!!!! NO WAY! That is sooo not Edward, in ANY alternate universe, LoL... I'll keep reading, but I'm not happy about that part!
Reviewer: Lustin4aCullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
Now, honestly, what the hell happens if she needs to take a crap while he is at work???? WTH??? Def NOT for me....
But, I love you writing and your story!
Reviewer: Lustin4aCullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! Certainly is different from the D/s situations we are used to reading about, huh?
Reviewer: sydvalentine (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 22
Great Chapter! I am looking forward to shit hitting the fan for some reason!!
Reviewer: Milk40 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
How will he know if she bathes in hot water anyway?
Reviewer: vittra (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 22
there's not much I can say since this is a story so far outside of the normal twific plot that everything is new and completely novel. I'm enjoying it immensely though and hope that you continue writing till the end, with maybe some fluffy outtakes to take the stress off once the real drama happens, maybe an outtake of the first scene between these two.
-v
Reviewer: EdwardxJacob (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 10
I really like this chapter. Just for the "OOC" moment. I wondered if their relationship was always slave/master but seeing this was a really good insight!
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 22
I did enjoy the chapter. I'll now share TMI with you -- when she was sharing her journal with Jasper and read the passage about Jacob watching her by the pool -- that's like my "go-to" head fantasy when the hubby is doing naughty things to me with various toys (or myself doing naughty things with my toys). Not so much Jacob but the whole watching thing...RAWR (not that I would *ever* do it but that's what fantasies are for, right?). Thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: maaahtwi4ever (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
great chap as always !!!! i loved!! u so good writter !! and i think i am a sadic now
Reviewer: krakengrrl (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 22
Real life has kept me from reading this until today and I am mighty sorry I had to wait this long. I thought for sure it was Tyler in the garden! I'm surprised Master lets Jacob get that close to Bella though. He didn't seem like the type to share his toys with the gardener. I do like the new toy though. That sounds way cool. Keep it up!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 22
Oooh, yay - Jasper update too! I must have been a good girl! :)
Great chapter - thanks as always for writing. The mysterious man in the garden certainly freaked me out. Glad it was only Jacob!!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 22
It was a tiring afternoon for Bella. She was unable to move and was being stimulated in several ways. Physically with the toys and the net itself, visually, mentally, and then with the blindfold, her entire body was ready to jump. I'm impressed with the control she has. It can't be easy, and Edward, I think, realizes what she does for him. They make a unique couple. Their agreement might not be understood by much, but for them, it's what they want and need.
Reviewer: Ashley2204 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 22
This fic is great... The hell w work today- I read the whole story.. I think I may love you!LOL butIm really having a hard time imagining the frame/bike seat setup-any link or pics for your inspiration?
Reviewer: m7707 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 22
excellent and erotic - both wonderful things. Thanks!
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