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Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 23
So Alice is the wedding planner, right? And Jasper is going to meet her while he's with Bella? I was thinking she would be the other sub with the Carlisle and Esme while Jasper was with them...
Reviewer: Izzy Whitlock (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 23
I get uncomfortable just thinking about being gagged. I have a highly active gag reflex. I choke brushing my teeth half the time. I think gagging would be a hard limit for me. I'd take a whipping over the gag. Plus I don't see how it can be attractive. I understand the feeling of power it would give the Dom but I think it is visually repugnant. I think photos of submissives are very sexually appealing even in situations I wouldn't want to be in but not gagged. It's ugly to me. I guess that is what is great about BDSM - there is something for every taste out there.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 23
Bella is completely aware of the reason for her punishment, she isn't happy, and is rather uncomfortable. However, she is taking it with stride, since she knows, she had it coming when she didn't follow orders.
As strict as Edward is, he is also very concerned and caring about her, he never goes overboard with anything that concerns Bella, that's why she is so content in this life of theirs.
But to someone on the outside, as Jasper, it is still surprising and I can guess not too easy to understand.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 23
Thank goodness Jasper was there. He asked all the questions I wanted answers to.
Reviewer: Teri0113 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 23
We missed you. Glad you are writing again. Thank you for a great chapter.
Reviewer: loverlover (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 23
hey you have a realy good talient i is sorry if i offended you i didn't mean to be impaient. make it very very very lemony though maby you should bring the but plug back in later
Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 6
original...très...
Reviewer: baklava80 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 23
im loving this:-) But my heart beats way too quickly when im reading it, maybe in anticipation!! Love it anyway:-) XXM
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 23
I was going to review, but...well...gag.
LOL! Just kiddiiiing! I was cracking up though.
Okay, serious face now...you understand how this gag funnel thing works waaaay too well. I hope your dom is as thorough as Edward. <stern brows>
Thinking about investing in one of those spreader bars, myself. Question though...why hook the cuffs to her collar rather than the speader bar? I'm thinking it may have something to do with her position and those clover clamps. owwww.
Thanks for sharing with us, Flibbins! Your tail is always so tauntingly titillating!
I meant TALE! I meant tale. <eyes flash to floor> Sorry.
Clicking 'Submit' now.
Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 5
génial
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 23
Interesting having Bella in a gag all day, I liked how her sense of humor seemed to peek out during the punishment.
But...well....gag
Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 4
génial
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 23
this was incredible!
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 23
Holy potatoes! I could not have done the gag thing all day. It's odd, for the majority of the day i breathe through my nose with my mouth closed, but once something is in my mouth, I always find it extremely difficult to breathe through my nose, odd...
Reviewer: baby_pau (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 23
Woow heavy stuff!!!! lol, i love the chapter and the story!!!
I have a suspicios about that wedding designer, i think it would be a little pixie, with black hair, lol.
Thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 23
The shit hitting the fan...is that about Tyler?
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 23
Does she get any say in her wedding??
What kind of wedding is it any way?
Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
ok
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 23
great chapter, that gag sounds absolutly horrible, it must take years to train away a gag reflex we all got that for a reason, and what shit is going to hit??? more please thanks tracy
Reviewer: Biankis (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 22
this story is so weird!!!!
Reviewer: jadedbrowneyes2 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 23
I think it's funny when Jasper still gets a little squicky when Bella is in a 'compromising position.' I'm excited about the dress fitting, and I won't lie, I'm ready for shit to hit the fan. Great chapter.
Reviewer: ErrorLoading_User (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 23
wonderful Story ; )
Reviewer: Emmi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 23
Well, damn if it wasn't interesting :D I must admit some places still bothers me, but it's interesting to observe non-the-less. Oh, and the Jacob part/outtake was hilarious - I loved Edward speech there by the tree :)
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 23
The longer your chapters get the more chances I have of Twilighted timing me out! Oh, I still have a hard time reading when Bella is being punished-especially cooking a delicious dinner and then having to choke down a protein shake. I realize the weekend sucked for Edward too, as he had no one to talk to-until Jasper arrived. I think like Jasper-and would be plotting ways to kill him in his sleep!! I do understand this is the way their relationship works and you are doing such a good job portraying that. Can't wait until we get into the wedding details!
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