Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Oh man. i hope you continue this fic. It was amazing. Also, I loved his nickname for her. 'Little Lioness' It was perfect for her OOC personality. You're amazing.
Reviewer: JamesB (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
I have just read your story, and what an impact that it made on me. Very good, and you are a great storyteller! Thanks for sharing a part of yourself that way.
Reviewer: lcnel (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Really great story! I could see one more chapter, Bella should have her day!
Reviewer: mei-lin16 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Please do make this multi chapter!!! I love it:) You are very talented, I know for a fact I would enjoy reading more of this story and other would too.
Reviewer: mei-lin16 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Please do make this multi chapter!!! I love it:) You are very talented, I know for a fact I would enjoy reading more of this story and other would too.
Reviewer: shallow13 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
I LOVE this story!!!!!!!Please continoue!!!!!!! XDXDXD
Reviewer: Julz04 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
OH! This was hot! I hope you make it into a multi chapter fic. Would love love love it!
Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Um...wow. I mean, that was amazing. Freakin perfectly uh-maze-ing. You actually got me all hot and bothered reading that. And now I'm blushing typing this review. ;-) Just...yeah. That was great. You kinda rock. I've got to read more of your work, haha. Fun times.
Reviewer: Wild_Mage (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
yes! plz plz plz plzzzz make this a multi-chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: EDelta88 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
MORE!!! I DEMAND MORE!!! THIS IS WAY TO AWESOME TO BE LEFT HANGING!!!!!!
Reviewer: nataliem (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
This was wonderful! I'd LOVE to see more chapters!!!! Very well written!
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
oh oh oh u so should make this a multi chapter story it would b so good, coz this could either way, make Bela a vampire or kill her but wow well done
Reviewer: eddiejazz (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
So... I want to know.... did he kill her???? or did he turn her into a vampire?????
Reviewer: Myheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Please. PLEASEEEEE. please please please continue nooooow! as much as I love Work in Progress, this takes priority. Update.
please? :D(oh my dog that smiley makes me feel so immature)
Reviewer: psjenkins (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Loved this! Hope you do come back and finish this. I'll be watching for more.
Reviewer: SueBob (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
I read the review of your story on fictionators, and since I love a good, sexy Darkward, as well as WIP, I thought I would give it a shot. Hot Damn am I glad I did. This was amazing! You kept Edward true to his (currently) black soul until the end. I am salivating for a continuation, and I sincerely hope that you decide to do so. I dare say that there will be more than a few who would be disapppointed if you decided to leave it in its current brilliant state. I would love to see how vigilante Edward reacts to no longer flying solo - will Bella join him in his lifestyle? - how fun!
Reviewer: LadyLawyer (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Whooo!! I am fanning myself. Just enough detail to be hot without being gross. But, your ability to describe Edward's inward thoughts and feelings is magical. This is the first of your writings I have read. I heard about this piece on fictionators. I will have to read your other stories. I am adding you as a favorate author. Thanks.
Reviewer: dorothybert (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
What a great piece. Please do write more.
Reviewer: childishjade (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Wow, I loved this story, and this version of Edward. I think that the way you portray Edward and Bella is amazing and you're writing style is brilliant. I really want to think that Edward stops/stoped... but I don't think he did.
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Wow, this was awesome! It was different, and I loved it. Edward was so sexy too. Thanks mucho. Xoxo
Reviewer: perspicacity (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
I loved this, and would love to see you continue it. Of course, Bella becoming a vampire would be my preferred next occurence, but, you know, we don't always get what we want.
I haven't enjoyed a Darkward fic this much in a long time. The Blood Watchers dialogue was particularly hilarious, btw.
Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: Lique (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Edward will be so sad if he kills her. Obsession beautifully done. Very enjoyable to read.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
O. M G you are amazing, i want you as my friend, i've read a lot of FF but this tops the lot, i'm buzzing from reading that, Please please please write more on this, Wow. Ok i will stop now, before u think i'm crazy!
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
Yes, multi-chapters please!!! I love where this went and where it could go! Please add more!!!
Great read!
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Memory in Blood (One-Shot)
I loved this one shot! I hope you do write it as a multi-chapter fic. I love Darkward fan fic and this is by far one of the best. I'm going to go check out the other things you've written right now. Writing is such a personal thing, thank you for sharing. You have a great talent and I could picture the whole warehouse scene in my mind while I read it.
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