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Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 54
a lover with a man's patience and a boy's stamina - jealous, jealous, jealous? not me! this is truly a lovely story. you may see the number of reads going up because i am re-reading this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! And nah, none of us are jealous ... Hee!
Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 54
Waiting with baited breath...
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 54
I love this story so very much.
And I must be terrible bc/ I want her to become VampBella so they can be together for a proper forever.
Thanks somuch for your lovely story!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm not giving away the end (of course), but I hope you like it!
Reviewer: giselle (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 54
I really like Charlie in this chapter. You have a very nice voice for him, what with the "business end of my revolver" part. Of course, this gets me very curious as to how she's going to manage to keep all this under wraps if she isn't turned in short order. And Bella is a nut for thinking that anything even remotely resembling "Edward" wouldn't tip Charlie. He had to watch her during the bad months in New Moon. No way he's forgetting about that in only eleven years!
And I loved the roses. That was very sweet. The Ph.D. student in me is as glad as Lorraine to see Bella back in the saddle on her thesis.
I knew I was right about the changing thing, though, just like I knew that shotgun was pointed at Brady. I think I'm going to go back and re-read the chapters around where Alice first has her vision. I'm going to figure out whose decision it was that set this business in motion.
Author's Response: Hee. Part of the hint about the first episode, the shotgun, is in that chapter of the vision. ;) But the hit about what set it off again is in THIS one.
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 54
Ugh, the vision is back...but bless Alice for telling her this time!
A visit from Irene...I wonder how she will like/dislike Edward...
Ah, a father's memory is LONG...LOL
Thanks for sharing!
Kathie
Author's Response: YES. Charlie's has not forgotten Edward. And Irene arrives in the very next part!
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 54
I just love how you are writing Bella and Edward's marriage--it is so sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 54
This story just keeps getting better and better. You actually address some of the concerns I had with canon without being disloyal to it, and I think that's marvelous.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad, on the concerns as that's exactly what I was trying to do. I liked the series (at least the first 3), but I did have some rather large concerns with some aspects of it, which I wanted this story to address.
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 54
Wow. I have an idea but I will keep my mouth shut. Amazing writing as always!
Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 54
Such a shift in tone between the two chapters! Powerful last lines! Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, a bit of a tone difference there!
Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 54
Oh no!! The vision's back! I can't wait to see what's going to happen and I'm so glad that everyone is communicating about it this time. I liked Bella's conversations with Martha and Charlie. I think the visit with Jake and Irene will be interesting. I'll be looking forward to the next part. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thanks! But actually, it's just Irene and the kids who are coming. They arrive in the next part. :-)
And yes, the vision is back ...
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 54
wow.... i'm anxious to see how this vision comes out...
can't wait for more
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 41
Love Rose so much.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: pastel (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 53
Aw, I loved this chapter. It's the kind of "old-fashioned," sweet, perhaps sappy writing that I love, devoid of any hatred, foul language, and such. It simply tugs on the heart.
Aw . . . (:
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 6
so in your a/n you mention the discrepancy between reads and reviews. i am re-reading your story so i probably won't be reviewing. i just think authors should know that the discrepancy might be a compliment. by the way, still love the story the second time around.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know! And I'm glad it still works on a second read!
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 53
Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 53
good chapter! looking forward to the next
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 53
that was beautiful. A very romantic and tradtional wedding for Edward, and it was simple and not too sappy for Bella, too. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, for both reviews! And I'm glad it gave you something fun to do on vacation. :-) It's been, gosh, going on a year since I started it, which is hard to believe!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 52
I'm glad she consulted Carlsile first. I'm with him on this topic.
Btw, I printed out your story until chapter 51 to take along on my vacation. It was a pleasur eto reread it all after such a long time. Your story was the first longer one I read in Twilight FF and still has a very special meaning to me.
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm not sure I can read this story. It has lots of positive reviews, but its completely racist--against the white people of the rural south. VERY few people or places are like that anymore; and to write this story that way is just perpetuating bad stereotypes. Dawsonville, GA is a real place--my sister-in-law grew up there. And while the elderly still use inappropriate words to describe blacks on occassion, their hearts mean well, and I've never seen anything near the level of pervasive prejudice you describe in the South.
Author's Response: Please see your email. Suffice to say -- for the public record -- that I grew up in North Georgia and I'm writing something straight out of my own experiences.
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm deep into this now, and I must stop to tell you what a great storyline this has turned out to be. I'm truly enjoying the new developments of the characters and their change in interaction. Also, the twist in the Cullen family dynamics has my interest piqued.-TheHarper
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to like it!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 53
Their wedding fit them. Family and friends. Simple. Rose's necklace did give me a twinge, I liked the old vows, and Carlisle's prayer/blessing was perfect. Did you choose that prayer because of the last line? Or, is that purely coincidence?
I can't believe this is getting close to the end. Please say you plan to write something else after this.
Author's Response: Thank you! And ... I sort of chose the prayer for the last line, but not entirely. It's the old-old benediction over the couple, so it's the one he'd have used. And yes, it's getting close to done!
Reviewer: divagils (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 53
*sigh* Blissful. Thanks for the sappiness. You are right. We all need it sometimes!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 53
Thanks for including the pic of Bella's corset, I was curious as to what it looked like. I really loved reading Carlisle's prayer and thought it was really neat and fitting how you kept the original spelling.
The phrase that Bella had engraved in Edward's ring was so beautiful and perfect for conveying her feelings for Edward. I love how he was surprised by getting a ring from her.
Author's Response: Thank you! One of the things that surprised me, while researching for this chapter, is apprently how recent it is that men got a wedding ring. I knew that, once, only women had worn then, but I assumed that changed at least a hundred or two hundred years ago ... apparently not.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 53
This was so beautiful. Everything, the service, the after gathering and their union (once more). I fear that necklace is a bit of an omen though. Bring it! You write beautifully and I know Edward and Bella are up for what ever happens here. I can't wait to find out!!!
Joan
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it felt emotional. We are, slowly, coming towards the end.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 53
I didn't expect to cry when they finally got married, but you managed to make this chapter so beautiful that I couldn't help myself. This is one fan fic in which I cannot predict exactly what will happen, and I appreciate that so much.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know that I always dislike it when I can figure out a story too easily. :-)
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