Dang, a cliffie...

I'm in a conflict now, while I can't wait for you next chapter, but it would also signal that this wonderful story will be coming to an end.

I have always love your take on what are the repercussions of Edward's leaving in NM, not typical, not cliche. Furthermore, I also enjoyed the maturity in Bella that you portrayed, and also the disability thing which is a rare thing among fics that pictures the aftermath of Edward's departure. You also even managed to flesh out Rosalie's character, which is also another rarely seen thing.

Would be both looking forward and not at the same time (I don't want it to end, but all good things must come to an end... *sigh*) for your next few remaining chapters.

 

Thank you for an awesome transformation engulfed with intensity, pity, caring, love, sharing, heartbreak, distress and into shock, happiness and joy! Absolutely amaZing!  Well done!

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aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww....so exciting, please, please post more soon ? I LOVE your story :)

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add more chapters :)

OMG, what a gruesome experience for all of them, vamp, shapeshifter and human alike. I'm sorry for Bella and Edward that the change had to occur under those circumstances, but the way your story was structured, a pieceful and predetermined change (like a c-section) with her family around waiting for her to wake up, would just not do. It was not, what Bella would have wanted. My heart stopped for a minute, though, when Edward declared that Bella was already dead. I wouldn't have put it past you, to have ended the story that way. A very human way to put an end to a years-long love story. I'm glad you didn't though :)

Awesome!  I wonder if Bella will now accept more help from others based on this bad decision??, if she lives!  Hopefully, she's just going into shock....oh! next chapter's up!

Of course it's Fox news... those asshats.

Author's Response:

I'm afraid the journalist in me just HAD to take a potshot.  Can't stand them.  I'm not a fan of broadcast journalism anyway (for a lot of reasons I won't go into), but FOX makes my blood boil.  The only broadcast news I listen to is PBS or the BBC in America.  Occasionally, I'll put up with CNN, but it very much depends on what the show is, or weekly specials like NBC's "Meet the Press."  (Now, some of the CNN *specials* are actually pretty good, but their daily shows, not so much.)

I LOVE that story about Palin - had never heard it before (the part about the song writer).  Thanks for enlightening us!  And since I met to review on the wedding chappie but forgot:  I love love love that you put Bella in an old time wedding night gown - it's so different from what's usually portrayed but I think you're totally right that Edward would love it.

I AM SO LOVING THIS!  it is one of if not the best stories i've read so far, you do an excellent job.  i sure wish there could be twilight books like there are star trek books, i would go crazy buying them!

I already reviewed on ff, but I was rereading and had a rather giggle worthy thought.

 

' "If it were her lying here on the ground -- or one of your babies -- and we could save her, what would you do?" Something in the wolf boy's eyes alter. It's understanding. Emmett only nods.'

 

Half-wolf half-vamp immortal children!   I have this image in my head of ~8 year olds buzzing on caffeine and pixie sticks, dodging "Uncle Edward," and then turning into wolf cubs to get away from Mom and Dad through a small little doggy door.

Read and reviews on ffn...and to read again here...

Is it Sunday yet?  LOL

Okay, Rosalie says *now comes the unpleasant part*...AFTER the bite, the death, the gore?

Shaking my head here...that girl is awesome...and I have complete faith in you...

Kathie