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Reviewer: ariateh (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 65
Well let's just hope that stem cells can make those miracles happen in real life... Great chapter, waiting for the next update!
Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 65
Wow...I'm not sure what else to say. Wow.
Will we get to see Edward's revenge on Brady, even if it's only part of your epilogue and not in "real time"? I just feel that Edward isn't one to let this go, given how he treated Bella - and I wouldn't blame him.
Again, I'm glad to see you update, but I will be so sad when this story is over and there will be no more chapters to greet me.
Excellent writing as always...
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 65
wow totally awsome chapter :) cant wait for the next one
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 65
OMG!! i hope that means that she's all healed up and will be able to walk again.. u just gotta make her walk again. she's been through sooo much poor thing.. i can't wait to read more.. please post soon! thanx for writing
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 65
Wow! I'm so glad that it's looking good for Bella's ability to walk again! Being paralyzed for eternity would have really sucked! Great chapter.
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 65
Bella is sitting---Yippeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is so effing awesome.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 65
this was heart wrenching, knowing that Charlie & Martha won't see the young woman they love for some time. Knowing that Reene will never know that Bella is still alive... in her own way...
I loved Edward's little phone call to the dick. His revenge will be sweet and will hopefully follow that idiot his entire life.
Whoot! Bella's sitting up on her own. Hopefully that means that the stem cells worked and she'll be able to stand/walk/run on her own.
I'm really looking forward to seeing how this has affected her personality.
I still think you should do those two outtakes, when you have time, but to be honest, I'm just really looking forward to the last few chapters that are left. I can't wait to see what comes next for these two. Congratulations on one year with this & I hope that you continue to write in the future.
Reviewer: divagils (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 65
I am one of those who tries to review as often as possible. And I hope that some of my one-liners do more good than annoyance. ;) I haven't been able to review for a while, but have been reading faithfully...
First off, I want to thank you for replying to all of those reviews. Few authors do that, and it means so very much to us readers! Well...it does to me anyway. ;)
This story has taken us all on such an incredible journey. We've laughed, we've cried. Our hearts have broken and they've come back to life watching Bella & Edward find their way back to each other and watching the Cullens become who they were meant be...a family. You've given us all so much to think about, so much to strive for ourselves. You've shown us true human nature and what some people can be. You've given us (especially me) an escape from our daily lives which aren't always that great. I don't know how to say thank you without sounding redundant. But I think that "thank you" will have to do, there aren't really words for what you have given us.
This chapter in particular has touched me deeply. I rarely have a physical reaction when I read fic, and when I do, it is so powerful and all-consuming that I find myself breathless. This chapter gave me that. When Edward began to pray, tears found their way through my eyes. I felt everything he felt. I understood him so clearly then. When he comforted her through the change, my heart broke. And now it is mending as the realization that Bella could walk once again has presented itself.
You have addressed so much here that many of us have asked ourselves about the series. So many of the questions have been answered that I find myself feeling like I did about the Twilight Series itself. I fell in love once again and I cannot thank you enough.
Ok, this is probably the longest review ever, and I'm just babbling. But thank you, from the bottom of my heart! I will miss this but can't wait to see if you bring us something else. I will certainly be along for the ride if/when you do!!
Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 65
Wow, this was great. I loved Charlie being in on it and knowing his thoughts. I am thrilled with the fast updates but so sad the story will be ending soon.
Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 65
more, More, MORE!!! I love Martha, and hope that she is in their lives forever! Or as long as she can be. :)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 65
MARVELOUS CHAPTER!!!
I couldn't help crying at Charlie, Renee and Martha's grief--even though I knew (hoped!) it was all going to be okay in the end. I dread the end of this fantastic journey; your story is definitely good enough for publication.
Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 65
nice. all i can say is YES!! I'm so glad that you've fixed her back. YAY!!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 65
This chapter was emotionally draining. Bella's surgery, Edward praying, Charie's "Thank God.", Martha comforting Edward and then she wakes up...
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 65
she's awake....yippie...lol
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 65
Wow-so good. Thanks for keeping this one going! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 65
I am so engrossed in this story, I woke up this morning worried about whether or not you had updated!! :) Poor Edward...he had a really rough chapter. I can't believe the gruesome stuff though - I wasn't expecting they'd have to dismember her :( ugh... I was hoping Bella would get a HEA, but where you left it last chapter, I just couldn't be sure! This may very well be the BEST fan fic I've ever read (and that's saying something!) - I can't believe it's almost over...
Reviewer: biggles89 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 65
I absolutely love your story! This is one of the best in connon fan fics! I cant wait for the next chapter! X
Reviewer: Pkullen (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 65
YEAH! I am SO excited! That was a great chapter and I was so hoping that Bella would not be in a wheel chair as a vamp. Really looking forward to the last two chapters and the epilogue. Thanks for writing this.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 65
Whoo-hoo for continued bashing of Fox News. Freaking LOVE Edward's plans for Clayton. Perfect revenge!
Allowing Charlie and Martha to be there for a bit was lovely - especially since they were both so relieved that she would live in some form. Has to assuage some of Edward's guilt.
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 65
You have surpassed my imagination.
Reviewer: Hollycooks (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 65
i prefer this to BD, well done on the story it's lovely
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 65
yea- she is sitting!!
Reviewer: crazycoffeemom (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 65
ok this is a huge cliffie you left us with lol. HURRY HURRY with the next chapter lol. i know you are going to make her be able to walk cause you love bella and edward like we all do. but please hurry lol.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 65
What an amazing chapter. Emotional! Can't wait to see how Bella first day as a newborn goes.
Reviewer: sommer (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 65
no time to write a long review now, but I just want to say, that it is a bittersweet feeling waiting for the next and final chapters. This wonderful journey that gave so many different and strong emotions, is about to end. I so hope you will continue writing. You are one of my very favourite authors.
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