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Reviewer: pinkfoot (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 11
Good for Rosalie to start such a project, you do pay attention to your characters, but I really just can't wait to read about Edward and Bella's second chance. I also have to ask (just because I really have to coz I used to be a sucker for sad endings but now not so much that I almost always dread them upon starting to read a new story), is there a possibility that Bella going to become a vampire and be able to walk again? Just give a hint. Please. Can't bear thinking a love story between Bella all angsty and old and wrinkly and breasts saggy and Edward still in his 17-year-old god-like glory. Much as I want to think that is what true love's supposed to be, I have to be honest, it's pretty grotesque to imagine.
Author's Response: Can't give away any hints. I'll just say it will be Edward and Bella by the end, though. I *think* there will be a little Edward and Bella in the next chapter (sometimes it's a bit hard to be sure), and it will go slowly, but it'll work out in the end. More than that, I won't say. (Don't hit me!)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow. I am not a big fan of AU's cause I just want Edward and Bella to be together no matter what, but this is excellent. I have really enjoyed it so far. I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you! And Edward and Bella will wind up together, never fear, but hopefully on a solid footing. :-)
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love that that Rose is helping her not she will be able to pay the rent and eat! I love this story, and can't wait for the next update I sure hope that it is soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! And chapter 12 will be posted tomorrow (although that'll be as far as I've got written). And yes, in this story, as you'll see, the women wind up 'rescuing' the women. :-D Even if it's still Edward/Bella.
Reviewer: Tamper with my memory (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 11
wow Bella working for Rose this should be good.
Author's Response: I hope so!
Reviewer: Mommyswanson (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 11
Interesting twist.
Author's Response: :-D Now we're getting to the plot!
Reviewer: Tamper with my memory (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love it. I love the way you write Hope to find more of your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you! So far, this is the first. :-)
Reviewer: GoldIwannaB (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, wow, I love it. I especially like the line in the end notes, "Rose is back and she's mad as hell." Perfectly a Rose thing to say. I love how knoweldable you are about all these things that the characters are dealing with. Now, for all I know you could be making it all up, but it sure sound real!
Author's Response: Ha! I do try to do my homework. :-) (And avoid going into detail about things I don't know ... of which there's a lot!) But I'm glad you're enjoying it, and there will be more Rose and Emmett too in the next chapter! :):)
Reviewer: Tamper with my memory (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 3
I really like this . I cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm about to upload more tonight!
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ha, I loved those last two lines- was not totally not expecting that!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: fifialice (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love it sooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!! u r totally brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 10
keep it coming!!! :)
Author's Response: I plan to! :-)
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
I was wondering when Rose and Emmett would make an appearance. Love the chapter. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! More soonish. This week has totally KILLED me. Ha.
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 8
I absolutely love the fact this is set in N. GA - my MIL lives in Cleveland!! :)
Author's Response: Cleveland isn't far from Helen or Dawesonville!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 10
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I will be waiting!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
I'm from Missouri so I liked the show-me state reference...and I love this story..I think it's pretty great..
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest too!
Reviewer: Mommyswanson (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 10
I Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 10
Your story is wonderful. I think I cried at every chapter.The way you describe the feelings and actions are very heartfelt. Now that I found this I can't wait for the updates.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've been really swamped this week and haven't gotten to write (so frustrating!), but I hope to have more in a few days.
Reviewer: pinkfoot (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 8
oy. beautiful story. and by golly, you know how to write. you've made me cry by the second chapter. and don't get me started on your research. i wish i didn't have to stop reading but i have to go to sleep if i wanted to be able to cook my boys some decent breakfast in three hours. i'll get back to this wonderful fanfic later. cheers.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it (and the research). I hope you enjoy the rest as well. :-)
Reviewer: iloveedward (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 5
why St. Olaf? (i'm only asking because i'm from MN and most people don't know that collage is there.)
Author's Response: It's a fairly highbrown liberal arts college, and I happened to know a bit about it. Ha.
Reviewer: IsabellaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
I'm thoroughly enjoying the story and its development. The research you've put into it (especially considering Mark's topic of study as well as J.A. Whitlock's accomplishments) is highly commendable. It shows how much you care about the story. I look forward to reading more about the relationships between all the characters (the split between Carlisle & Esme took me by surprise) as well as exactly what Edward has been doing with his PhD in Neuroscience. A man with multiple medical degrees, a photographic memory, an enormous amount of motivation, and an endless supply of funding .... can he accomplish miracles?
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, we'll see what Edward's been up to, although it's probably not as miraculous as one might hope. But still. :-)
Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 9
That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: uptonmama (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 9
I have enjoyed reading this story, I look forward to seeing what happens.
Author's Response: Thank you! More should be uploaded in the next day or so. :-)
Reviewer: simplywow (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 8
I loved that chapter. I loved the length, I loved the dialogue. I lol'd when Bella said , "by-golly" in her tirade! ha! It was also refreshing (in a sad way) that the family is so broken. I don't think I've ever read a story that had Carlisle and Esme splitting. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I don't think I've read one where Carlisle and Esme split up, either. As the "parents," I think it's hard for people to imagine them doing so, just like children have a hard time imagining their parents divorcing. I was really hoping to inject some realism into what might have happened in the wake of Edward's leaving, how it could have stirred things up in a different way, especially if he didn't think Bella was dead.
Reviewer: uptonmama (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 7
LOL reading this chapter reminds me how happy I am that dh is no longer in academics!
Author's Response: Ha! Yes, academia can be SO much fun ...
Reviewer: uptonmama (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 6
You have come up with a great story line. I am enjoying reading this.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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