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Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 20

Brava!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ahnyx (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 20

I'm really enjoying this story! I'm glad we finally found out what was in the folder. Yet another great chapter. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!  And I'm working on the next part. :-)

Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 20

awwwwwww soooo sad!!!!!!and sweet!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!  And yes, sad, but necessary. :-)

Reviewer: Lizzie (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 20

Another wonderful chapter.  When Mark declares that Bella is his life and Edward responds that it is the same for him, it really brings it home.  Thanks also for the teaser for the next chapter in the A/N; I'm looking forward to some more B/E interaction!

Author's Response: More B/E coming up. :-)  And the guys' friendship was a sort of ... odd thing.  But I really wanted them to like each other, once they got past the "I hate you for what you did to her; I hate myself for what I did to her." Ha.

Reviewer: KissinCullens (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 20

Another wonderful chapter. I've bee waiting for the letters to be revealed and wasnt disappointed by their content. I enjoy your writing so much. And i know its shameful to beg for quick updates as people do have busy lives but when it comes to your story i have no shame! I love it and cant wait for more. Good job!

Author's Response: Ha!  Thanks!  I'm glad the letters weren't a disappointment, as I was a bit worried!  But I'm glad they worked. :-)

Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 20

That was very sweet and sad.  I teared up myself.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 20

can't wait for the next chapter. 

Author's Response: Soon!

Reviewer: Matahari (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 20

Beautiful chapter...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Imaginethat (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 20

What a lovely chapter!! So beautifully written, so heart wrenching, so full of hope and hopelessness at the same time. "She's my life, you know, Mark wrote at one point, and Edward replied, Mine, too." ..oh that made me cry. Your Edward is so worth falling in love with and so is your Bella. I love your last chapter too (boy, did it bring memories of grad school).

Author's Response:

Ha, on memories of grad school!

And thank you.  I'm really glad this chapter worked.  I was quite worried about it, as it's fairly pivotal -- sort of the "last reveal," if you will.  I wanted to do something different by making the two men who loved Bella actually *like* each other, too -- and not be friends before Bella entered the picture, like Arthur and Lancelot, but AFTER.

Reviewer: missjanelle (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 19

oh wonderfull chapter.

i'm anticpating whats going to happen when bella reads those emails.. 

 i really enjoyed the interaction, i look foward to more, and to more beautiful moments between the two. i think when they re-unite its going to be so beautiful and amazing.. your drawing it out, and its good...



Author's Response: Thank you!  And Bella reads the email with the next chapter.  And yes, I'm hoping that by the time they realize they're in love again, they'll really be ready for it. :-)

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 19

great chapter. l love seeing how they interact with each other. i cant wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you!  And it was fun to write, letting them be "intellectual" together BEFORE anything else. :-)

Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

1.  i like that edward was friends with bella's husband.  that is awesome.

2.  it's sad that the cullens are all split up at the moment, but it looks like that is changing.

3.  i kind of don't like this "older" edward and older bella.  i like her better than him because i can see how she got to be where she is, but as for edwad . . . it's like he's saying he's not perfection.  :)  but that's my fault, not yours.  it does add a new dynamic to his character. 

 

mmmm  i guess that's all i have to say.   *clicks next*



Author's Response:

1-2. Yes, Edward and Mark knew each other and were friends, and the reuniting of the Cullens is a large part of the plot. :-)

3. Ha.  Edward isn't perfection.  That's just a teenaged Bella's love-blind view of him. :-)  He's a lot more interesting for not being so.  (Perfect characters are boring because they leave nothing to write about, not to mention they're not real people. Ha.)

Hope you like further chapters!

Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: November 07, 2008 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 19

Ooh I can't wait to read what was in his email :)

Author's Response: Soon!

Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 19

Another wonderful chapter!  I'm so nervous about the cd.  Is it going to make her angry at Edward or will she be touched?  Can't wait!

Author's Response: Next chapter!  I need to get into the mood to write it, I think.  I'm actually going to take a stab later tonight...  (mood music, here I come ...)

Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love it. I find Bella's points and personality so interesting in your story. I'm desperately looking forward to what she finds on the CD...

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad Bella is staying intriguing!

Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ooo...how is Bella going to handle the Cullen's reappearing in her life suddenly? This is wonderfully written.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I hope you continue to enjoy it when they're all back!

Reviewer: GoldIwannaB (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 19

I love stories that make me think! I actually went back and reread parts of this chapter to see both of their sides in the "argument" an see whose I agreed with more. Normally I just read ff once, so  congratulations for making me think twice!

I can't wait for  next week's chapter!

 



Author's Response: Thank you!  Sometimes writing something like this is fun, "heavy" as it is.  But it was important (less for what they said than the whole ... atmosphere, I guess)?  Baby steps.  Also, just to show where Bella is right now.  Anyway, thanks again!

Reviewer: Lady Saffir (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ah, and Edward shows up.  I love the amount of detail you have regarding people with spinal cord injuries and the little medical things.  A wonderful story. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!  (And my sis has SCI, so, well, yeah.  ha.)

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 19

Oh I can't wait to see what is on the CD!!

Author's Response: Soon!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 19

Good chapter, I liked their debate, it had quite a bit of information in it, but it was something she is passionate about and so it helped her relax and just be able to talk to him.

Author's Response: Exactly!  Right now, Bella is -- has to be -- in a really "head place" in order to function and not just dissolve, emotionally.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 19

Very well done.  I felt lik I was in a college classroom taking part in a discussion :)

I really love your story.



Author's Response: Thank you!  And yes, I was hoping for a bit of that "detached" academic feel. Ha!

Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 19

ahh!! check the cd bella!! 

I loved the interaction with Bella and Edward in this chapter.  I love that her walls are coming down and she is accepting to him wanting to help her.

I always find myself with tears in my eyes reading every chapter of your story...even if it's not really sad, the whole situation is just really unfortunate :(

keep writing...I assure you I will keep reading :)



Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad it's moving, even when it's a bit intellectual, like here, although that was intentional.  It's about to break.  And I'm sorry, but tissues may be required again soon!

Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 19

but i can't wait till morning to look at the CD!!!!

 

 



Author's Response: Hee!  Next chapter!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 19

Loved how theri conversation"debate' went! Love that Edward is trying so hard to be there for Bella in any way he can. He is showing her that he is not being so selfish in his ways like he had in the past. great job! Cannot wait to see what is on that CD!

Author's Response: Thank you!  And yes, our Edward has really grown up!  He's learned to love Bella from a distance, sacrifice what he wants to see her happy ... and has realized how HARD that really is.  It's not a melodramatic act.

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 19

I wasn't even expecting an update, so I was very pleasantly surprised to see this chapter posted. It's really great to see them acting and interacting like adults!

Author's Response: Thanks!  And I actually had the basics written by last Sunday, but then got caught in teaching and couldn't finish editing it until yesterday. :p

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