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Reviewer: akers (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Son
I'm with Emmett, who is this jokester Edward? I kinda like it ;)
Author's Response: I think the other favorite moment between Edward and Jake is at the airport when it is assumed they are a couple. :)
Reviewer: Filippanna (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 03:58 AM · On: The Prince
A fantastic story, I want to know what happened next ? Don´t think I wont hunt them down :-)
A wonderful flow, a perpetual want to know more and very good graphic language.
I have been reading at work (don´t tell my boss), at home, on the bus. And I don´t want it to end, thank you!
Author's Response: Well just a few more chapters, yet. So I hope you continue to enjoy! It has been a year in the making...whew!
April
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:45 PM · On: The Prince
I hope the next chapter is up soon and this is not the end, I'm holding out hope for a double wedding and Jake needs to do a little groveling after how he treated Nessie. She screwed up but what he did was WAY WORSE, especially after how he admonished poor Edward for how he treated Bella, at least his intentions were noble. Jake was just prideful and stupid
YAY!!!!!!!!! DING DONG ARO'S DEAD!
I was going to rewrite the entire song but the rhyme scheme no longer worked and I have my own fan fiction to attend to. Not to mention the fact that you are probably wondering why I am rambling and hope that I stop soon :) I will. Just one more thing, I love this story and though you have denied it before, defiantly see you with a career as an author of fiction.
Ok, all done now, just know this chapter was amazing. The thought and care you put into this were astounding. I love Edward as the new leader of the Vampire World, you/Henry were right to pick him over poppa... I mean Carlisle.
P.s. Please let Rose and Em get to at least dismember the bastard that took their son away from them.
Author's Response: Don't know if you've read the next chapter - but I hope Jacob's explanation worked for you. You'll at least get to see what took so long at the wedding! :)
april
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 10:30 PM · On: I Alone
OMG IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW...I LOVE HENRY. YES, I KNOW I AM WRITING IN ALL CAPS BUT I AM SO HAPPY WITH THIS TURN OF EVENTS THAT IT WARRANTS ALL CAPS.
Author's Response: :) Sorry for the late reply! I'm glad it met your expectations!
Reviewer: dqstacy (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 09:54 PM · On: The Prince
Great!
Author's Response: Gracias! I hope that the ending wraps it up sufficiently! ;)
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:50 PM · On: The Prince
very well thought out and done!
Author's Response: :)
Just a little more!
Reviewer: sdcullen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:03 PM · On: The Prince
another excellent chapter....keep up the great work!
Author's Response: :) Only a few more to go. I have to admit that I'll be a little sad when it is over. :(
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 03:24 PM · On: I Alone
WHAT A BATTLE I AM AMAZED LOLI CO ULDNT TARE MY EYES OFF THE LAPTOP LOL EVEN TOLD MY HUSBAND TO SHUT UP !!!
I WISH I WAS THERE TO NURSE EDWARD ALL BETTER THOUGH LOL
Author's Response: Sorry for the late review reply! Work has been hectic and what little time I've had has been used writing. Yes - ah...that visual. Let's both volunteer for nurse duty. :)
Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 02:29 PM · On: The Prince
this chapter was extraordinary, thank you for writing it.... where do you come up with so much it amazing. please update soon ... and like i always tell you i hope you continue it after all the troubles are gonne i want to know what they do when they are finally happy.
Author's Response: Its coming. I'm a HEA kinda person. Its taken a long time to get there - for them to heal and grow - but I'm almost through with the torture. Promise.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Only with the Heart
I loved it! I really like that in your story the pack is so much a part of the Cullen's lives, as it should be!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:17 PM · On: The Prince
thud....holy cow your story telling brain is a gem!
Author's Response: I couldn't do it without my betas - truly. They are the biggest gems.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Mouth of Babes
I love this little Henry. So he's Felix's son? What happens when Felix finds out?
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Anything for Love
So Charlie figured it out, I always knew he would, he's way to cop smart. Tanya wants to hook up with Seth? Hmmmm....I would love an out-take on that! lol
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Son
This story is just the best! So Henry lhas a crush on Anna? Are we seeing a match in the future between those two?
Author's Response: KEEP going - You'll see. :)
Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 09:21 AM · On: The Prince
AWESOME! Go Henry :) I like the how and especially the why.
And poor Henry at the same time...some of that stuff will no doubt haunt him, being forced to feed off humans, etc.
Author's Response: In reality, all the Cullens come with scars. His are battle ones...
Reviewer: SewinthePast (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:09 AM · On: The Prince
Excellent!!!
Author's Response: Thank You! I so enjoy hearing how it is for everyone. You get so lost in you own little world.
Reviewer: karanasaur (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:08 AM · On: The Prince
I am LOVING this story and I hate to see it ending. Looking forward to the coming chapters!
Author's Response: Just a few more left. I will be sad, I have to admit. April
Reviewer: tu_luv (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:05 AM · On: The Prince
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Very long and drawn out explanation of what he was doing - but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: ErinJeany (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:08 AM · On: The Prince
oh. my. god.
that chapter was worth the wait. I had chills reading Henrys plan... and it worked. *exhale breath in relief* Cant wait for the reuniting! And Henry and Anna's wedding!
Now let's just get Jake back and have him and Nessie married! :)
Author's Response: YUP! I hope you've already been able to read the next chapter - I liked that he is - after all - still the little boy they loved.
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:06 AM · On: The Prince
W O O H O O ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Wow, just when I thought this story couldn't get any better...AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! Wow, now I have to read it over from the beginning once you complete it. Actually, I hope that you write many more chapters because you are a very captivating writer and I just love where you've taken our beloved Cullens. BRAVO!!!!!! :)
Author's Response: Just a few more left to tie up the last ends. :) Glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Desire
That was very sweet of Edward to take care of Bella in such a loving way. It's so like him. Great chapter, you captured the emotions really well.
Reviewer: Filippanna (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Family Tradition
Oh, wow - reading this story at work was not a good idea ! I´ve been laughing my head off at this last chapter, and I will probably laugh at the most impropriate times when seeing Eclipse this weekend.
The story is great, with a steady flow, ups & downs and leaves you wanting to know whats next.
Thank you.
Author's Response: I don't know if you've been able to go over and read the Family Tradition story or not. It deals with everyone's celebration in Forks before they go to Chicago. That had to be the hardest story to write - but with great rewards. I even laugh still myself when I get a review and have to go back to read the story - to see what was happening in a specific chapter. I'm glad I was able to make you laugh!
Reviewer: ddot (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:00 AM · On: The Prince
the way you combine christianity with this reality is impeccable
and i love it lol
i just love it to death lol
my goodness....i love it lol i can't say it enough ...I LOVE IT.
This story was INCREDIBLE...i can't believe it's time to end it
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you went into soooo much detail..it's just...wow...i'm floored
Henry was genius...how did you conceive this plot?
amazing i love it...you're awesome!
Author's Response: I have to admit that Henry was always the plan to help overthrow Aro. The second chapter starts with a quote for The Aenid, which is the story that includes the fable of The Trojan Horse. Aro send him there excpecting one result, and received another. I knew that Aro would have patience to wait for a long term plan to roll out, and that he would prey on the Cullens in the cruelest way possible. Voila....
Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:22 PM · On: The Prince
Oooohhh!! I love it. I knew that "little" guy had a gift in there somewhere.
Author's Response: Sneaky - Sneaky boy.
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:18 PM · On: The Prince
What a great character you have created with Henry, a real protagonist (I saw that he was important from the beginning, I recall sending a very early review).
I have a few questions: why it was so important that Henry and Ann did not have sex before marriage? The Cullens are faithful to their mates, but not prude ... I don't find it very credible, sincerely.
If hybrids block Alice's gift, she would be blocked all the time, both at home (Henry and Nessie), and later in Volterra once Henry was there. This made Nahuel's sister redundant, while useful when H and N were still with the family ... I don't understand this.
Author's Response: The challenge I received from my friend to write this story included keeping it as cannon/Stephenie Meyer-like as possible. Since she wrote the creation of Edward and Bella's sexual relationship being so "pure" as to wait to marriage...so I wrote this one as well. I could see Emmett being torn between the fact it is his son, and the girl he probably looks at in a protective manner.
I don't know if that helps????? :) april
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