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Reviewer: kuu (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 5
loved it
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 5
Loved it, absolutely loved it! Now I have to wait for more...off to see if I can find you on the forums :)
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
What horrible devastation for her to have to witness. Glad Edward is there to comfort her and take care of her.
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
let. me. bur. amen. fabulous! just loving this story :)
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 5
I like this Bella! She may have had a shocking experience but when she needed to she totally laid into poor Edward!
I like the baby's name!
Great Story - Great Chapter - Hurry With The Next One!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
His reaction to her after he was expecting a blond was awesome :) I love how you had her stumbling in her heels and I also want to thank your mom for having a love of SEALs! I think you're doing a fantastic job. The talking in military time...my dad still does it and he's been out for 16 years, lol! Great chapter!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love this story, I've always been fascinated with the life of a seal. Read many fiction books where they played a prominent part and am very excited to see one on Twilighted, awesome! Everything is so spot on so far...never had any SEAL friends, just Navy guys :)
Reviewer: ckitaguchi (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 5
I just found this story and I really like it. Navy Seal Edward is so HOT! I'd like to see more interaction with Bella and the guys since she is writing an article about all of them but this Bella/Edward will be fantastic!
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 5
Aww to cute! lol Great chapter :D
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm glad that Bella apologized to Edward at the end. She did overreact and didn't give him the opportunity to say his side of the conversation. He was very good to her the night before and he had every right to go to the commander. He was just worried about her and wanted to make sure she was okay.
Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
Edward's reaction to Bella is just adorable. Your writing style is great and I can 'picture' everything without the descriptions being overbearing. It's a perfect blend of detail and plot. I like the original story line too.
Reviewer: dark edwards girl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 5
so loving this story!!!!!!! i hope its not going to be sad though!!!!! keep up the good work xoxo
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 5
so love the story
Reviewer: anntje (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great great great chapter. I love you story. You go girl!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 5
Rageward!! Oooh, now you're talking! I wanna see some of that! Boy, you sure know how to give a woman a wedgie by twisting her panties, don't you? Congrats to Jasper and Alice for their baby boy - Jasper's reaction is just so sweet. :) Thanks for writing and sharing... I'm looking forward to more, especially Rageward.
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 5
I loved that letter from Alice. It was perfectly done.
Reviewer: ms_ambrosia (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 5
You're welcome! I love this story so freakin' much. I totally can't wait for some more Bella and Edward action. The kiss was nice, though....or at least it was until Edward freaked out.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
WONDERFUL! ... that was a great depiction of the trama and heartbreak. I can;t even imagine what a person might go through if they witnessed something like that or if they where in a situation like that. And how you made edward and his team all emotional too was a perfect touch. It shows the humanity in them and that although this is their job they are not heartless creatures. instead of some stories where they just dont care! I like them being human! great job ... cant wait for the next one .... do we get to see some lovin from our two favourite characters? ouu ... :)
Reviewer: Scar24 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love it so far! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
I didn't see it as an attack on Islam or Muslims. Terrorists exist. Northern Africa has a large Muslim population. Broken nations are havens for terrorists- and with the religious background, Islamic terrorism would certainly move in.
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow. Fantastic writing. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this story. Sealward is awesome.
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
I´m a sucker for Sealward so finding SEALs made me very happy. More swoon worthy Navy men please :-)
Reviewer: pillow912 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 4
dying for more
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