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Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Til Death Do You Part Ain't Cuttin' It!
I loved your characters in this series. Really beautiful and lots of action and suspence!! Great writing. I think you're in my favorites already but I'll double check to keep a watch for your next story! I know it's going to be fabulous!
*hugs and happy holidays!*
Joan
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:34 AM · On: As It Should Be
i ownder if there is a wedding in the air????
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:02 AM · On: As It Should Be
Just leaving the love! I'm glad everything turned out well for the Cullens. It's a shame that Ben couldn't move past his loss of Tia but certainly after seeing Edward's and Bella's near fiasco, we understand the loss was too great. Great writing! Love this tale with Sophie and Bella and of course, Edward. Great charicturization (sp) and storyline! Loved it!
Joan
Author's Response: Joan, my faithful review. You are seriously my favourite person. Thank you so much for sticking through Read Lightly with me. Just wanted to say that before reponding to your review. Means so much to me.
I'm sorry Ben couldn't survive but given his connection to Earth and the temperament that would give him coupled with the power with which Vampires mate, there is no way he could live without Tia. I also wanted to remind me readers the lengths Edward would have gone to as well, if Bella was truly dead and his family hadn't been there to support him.
I hope you enjoy the next two chapters and that it is the ending you would have wanted for our trouble-attracting duo.
Nutty
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:56 PM · On: I Know What You Did
WOW!!!
Author's Response: seriously? Cool, so glad you liked it. Chapter 8&9 was hard to write, not the hardest but as a lover not a hater, so conveying just how close to the edge it came was difficult.
What was wow about it? I am working on drama in my new fic so would like to know what i'm doing right and wrong
Thanks for reviewing, i hope you stick through to the end.
Nutty
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:26 AM · On: I Know What You Did
Ugh, I hate the ER, Blood and stitches. I hope you are better now. I guess that means you'll have lots of time to start yet another Twi-tale! Yes!! As for this one, no, I didn't see it coming. What a force Bella is as a Vampire! She truly was born to become one! Great writing and thank you for staying with you story. I have several I am following and check them daily, about 10 times daily. LOL Enjoyed it!! Thank you!!!
(hugs)
Joanie
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 11:26 AM · On: A Selfless Love
This was a tough chapter! It had to be tough to write. :( Bella won't sacrifice Edward because she feels she has brought this down on them. Sophia get to stay with the Cullens but poor Edward loses Bella again? ugh... Looking forward to the next chapter as always. Where are the Romainian Vampires when you need them! :) great writing.
Joan
Author's Response: Selfless love is the second hardest chapter to write. the last two tie for 1st place. I was always tied as to where Bella would lie, given i had a less than maternal upbringing but after a quick vote at a BBQ we hosted, the answer was clear, and given in the next chapter...which is sitting waiting for validation.
So glad you are loving this!!!
Nutty
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 04:59 PM · On: A Selfless Love
ack... well hopefully they rescue her
Author's Response: Its all Cullen hands to the pump on this one...answer is in the next chpater...never was very good with keeping readers in suspense for too long.
Nutty
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:14 AM · On: A Haunting Past
Great Chapter! Poor Sophia!
Author's Response: Apologies for the lateness of the reply.
i know, as if being permenantly 6 wasn't enough of a pain in the behind, she has Jane and Demetri to worry about! Hope you continue to enjoy, let me know
Nutty
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Who's Ya Daddy?
Great chapter!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 03:16 PM · On: A Haunting Past
This was a very exciting chapter and I fear the next will be more than that. Oh I hate when my favorite characters die! Grrr! But the good thing is that you can always write them back to life in the next story. :)) I'll have to steel myself to what's coming and wait, I guess. Really great writing. You really do have a knack!
*hugs*
Joan
Author's Response: hey, sorry for the late reply, RL kicked my butt and i ended up in the ER (or ED as it is known down under).
Thank you for the comment on my writing. It means soo much as i gave up writing for 4 years as i was shocking disheartened at what i was putting out. Now with a beta, who stops me berating myself so much, i am finally inspired.
Hope you read on.
Nutty
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:10 AM · On: A Haunting Past
Very interesting. I hate Aro
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the late reply, RL sucks big bananas
don't we all hate Aro. I have a very Voldemolt-like figure in my head when i imagine him. A vampire, distorted by greed and too much power. I hope he gets his just deserts one day!
Please let me know what you think of the rest of the story
Nutty
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:07 AM · On: A Haunting Past
i am guessing blackmail. aro will use sophia to get edward, and possibly the rest of the cullens and bella to join him.
Author's Response: i love it when new readers review. Glad you reading. My lips are sealed but the update should be up by next week i will say this though, Aro is a nasty piece of work but would be really go as far as to piss of fthe Cullens in a bid of vampire domination?
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Sacrifices Were Made
loving this story.. and I havent even read the other one.. I might have to go over and have a look
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Who's Ya Daddy?
Gees, I don't see anything wrong with this. ?? Maybe people wanted to see Sophia go after one of the kids at the party and Emmett have to stop her? I think this is a great story. When you get into Bella and Demetri's adventure or assignment and the story gets edgy, reviews will pick up? I dunno? I like this!!
*hugs*
Joan
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Who's Ya Daddy?
I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!
Author's Response: *claps her handies* I am so glad you are enjoying it! I must admit i like this version better than the original version of Tread Lightly i wrote. Hopefully the next chapter will be up by Monday from Edinburgh Airport. I am at a wedding all weekend and won't have a chance to post. PLEASE PLEASE keep reading!
Nutty
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Prevention is Better Than Cure
I love it. Hands down, it's a great piece. Bella and Edward as parents with Bella under the thumb of the creepy Volturri. And now Demetri has her on the plane!! Did he see her kiss Edward and Sophia goodbye? Ugh! The suspence till the next chapter will have me biting my nails for sure!! Great writing! Great story!!
*hugs*
Joan
Author's Response: he he - loving that you are loving it. Its undergone a major re-edit so nice to know its still okay to read. The next chapter has just gone in so hopefully the suspense will be over soon.
Nutty
Reviewer: Molly0207 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Sacrifices Were Made
Enjoying the sequel - enjoyed the other also
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Sacrifices Were Made
This is really good! I love the little mermaid, so them drawing the parallel to their own story at the end of the chapter was excellent!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Sacrifices Were Made
Delightful! Oh, you have no idea how I've wondered at Bella's past here. Told beaufifully as well. Thank you! I fear with one of Aro's next assignments, it will be perilous for Bella! That always makes me nervous for my beloved characters. Great writing!!! Thanks again for this story!!
*hugs*
Joan
Author's Response: Hello Joan, good to 'see' you. Than you, thank you for the review! Bella's past wa something that i had written out before i begun writing TLIL. More of her past comes out as we go through Tread Lightly. I don't give up my secrets easily!
Keep tuned!
Nutty
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Oh Happy Days
I'm SO glad you are continuing your story with Edward, Bella and Sophia. I was curious before when you told about Bella being connected to the Volturi and Aro. Very interesting! Wonderful!! :)
*hugs*
Joan
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Sacrifices Were Made
What, re read tlitl - just b4 i read this chappie and get relli stuck in
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Oh Happy Days
Don't be disheartened =]
NIAIS
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Oh Happy Days
wooohooo! first review! more stars!
Author's Response: my only reviewer. Was it really that sucky! Opps.
Thank you so much for following me into the sequel. This didn't flow as easily as TLITL but now i have a beta, it is getting better!
Nutty
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Oh Happy Days
LOVING IT! Especially sophia and edwards relationship ten stars =]
NIAIS
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