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Reviewer: bebe5975 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Everlong

ahhh i love it...i wish it was a lil longer:( i want more :)



Author's Response:

Haha!  This was actually the longest chapter so far, and the next one isn't much longer.  This is going to be a relatively short fic (only 15 chapters or so), but it's still a full story with a lot of plot, so the shorter chapters flow correctly for a novella length work.

In any case, so glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Everlong

I likey A LOT!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked and many thanks for the rating and review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Hallelujah

Wow, I fucking love this story so far! And I totally downloaded the "build me up buttercup" cover because it was just awesome

Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Everlong

Beautiful--loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review and the wonderful rating!  I really appreciate it.  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: Ash Night (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Everlong

it's awesome



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Everlong

What is Edward's happy song? wait, this is before or after Bella?? (that could change things

Mint Car - The Cure

or...
There are a few more, but I didn't wanted to make it eternal...
it's just that I seem to get their music taste, but there's also always the surprise... if you want, though, I have it written down...



Author's Response:

Ooh, I love the cure, but I don't know that song.  I am going to have to look it up :)

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 which includes the happy song I chose for Edward

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Everlong

me likey! me likey a lot!



Author's Response:

Why, thank you :)  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Everlong

AHHHHHHHHHH!



Author's Response:

Don't freak out!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue :)  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

Meanwhile, thanks so much for your review.  

 

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Everlong

I loved it :) They finally kissed :) Beautiful chapter.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much :)  I think you may already be following me on Twitter, but if not, that's where I'm posting teasers.  The full text of Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted Queue!  

Reviewer: Lyxa (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Everlong

Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant chapter!

You've captured the atmosphere between them perfectly and I really can't wait for more

thanks so much for writing

Lyxa



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you!  I am glad it elicited such a great emotional response.  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Everlong

loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Everlong

Aww. I want an Edward even more than before. how sweet!



Author's Response:

Maybe you could ask for one for Christmas?  I think Santa might be getting a few requests for Edwards ;)

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Everlong

OMG...just OMB!!!!  I have been waiting (rather impatiently I might add) for your update and I love it.  Just LOVE it.  I know teenage love is angst but sometimes things CAN just go right.  I really love how you convey his feelings for Bella - the emotion comes through really well. 



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you :) So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Everlong

It's totally Wham.  Wake me up before you go-go baby!  Okay, just kidding, but that song can be kind of addicting.  I don't know what his happy song would be.  Something from Maroon 5, or maybe Boy With A Coin by Iron & Wine, but it could also be a Killers' song...gah, I'm music ADD



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 (note:  this teaser includes the happy song I chose!  I like your suggestions but need to look some of them up, the ones I don't know)

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Everlong

Finally a kiss, Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Everlong

ZOMG! An update! And it's *the* update, the first date! Squeeeee...

LOL @ Edward thinking she was listening what they were talking about on stage, the charity thing, when all she was doing was oggling one of the guys.

Oh, Edward leans in, and goes for the smooch... And then it /stops/... Sonofa*mutters*...

Have fun writing the next part, we'll have fun reading it, and will be tortured while having to wait for it. ^^


Spikey



Author's Response:

(ducks tomatoes lobbed at head as payback for the cruel cliffie)

Seriously, I am so glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Everlong

Likey Likey!  Absolutely love this one.  More please!  :D



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Everlong

his happy song should be funny and cute and apply to the chase his is in trying to get Bella, heck he may blush if she catches him listening to it. I would have it be "Hey there lil red riding hood" by sam the sham and the pharohs.

BTW love this chapter. so awesome can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I will definitely check out the song you mentioned!  I picked out a different song as Edward's happy song and it's on the teaser on the FB Friends thread.  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the rating and review!  The full text of Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted queue, and from here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: iLikeTigerMilk (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Everlong

W-O-W

Just read all 8 chaps in one lovely sitting. Fantastic! Ima gonna stalk/follow you on Twitter, I'm iLikeTigerMilk :)

xxxxxx TM



Author's Response:

Awesome!  Thanks so much for the review.  I see you are following me on Twitter now, which must mean you got the notification about the Ch. 9 teaser that came out a few days ago.  The update for the full chapter is coming soon!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Everlong

YAY!!!!!!! This chapter was just perfect! Oh Edward... so smitten!! *sighs*

Oh my good, but nothing was better than Charlie's sweetness! hhahahahha

I LMAO uncontrollably! It was the best thing ever... You gotta love Charlie. But poor Bella! Totally mortifying. I'd know, because this is exactly the kind of thing my father would have done if I was stupid enough to bring a date home when I was a teen. No fucking way!!! Let's meet at the corner, baby! hahaha

Anyways, thanks for the chapter and update soon. ;)



Author's Response:

Haha!  You were crafty like me.  I also tried not to put otherwise innocent boyfriends in my dad's line of fire.  Meeting the parents was a long, painful exercise for all present.  My dad's strange brand of "love" included intimidation tactics.  He is a lawyer and rather enjoyed interrogating my dates.

In any case, I am glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Everlong

This was Fucking perfect! it always makes my day when I see the mail that Facebook Friends has been updated!

But really, the ping-pong POVs; the way that you have a more serious part on the date when they talk, but it isn't really sad-depressing; Charlie meeting Edward; the whole date... with the waiting line and Edward's last POV! that "I'm falling in love with you" was just aww.

And the kiss! it's great because you don't go really into details but you set the seconds before, it gives you the image of a very passionate, intense yet sweet kiss. with the nose caress...

It was a perfect first kiss....



Author's Response:

(sigh) I loe a good nose caress.  I am glad you thought it was so sweet--that was definitely what I'm going for.  Too bad, since they're teenagers, I am about to turn them into schizophrenic maniacs...at least the sweetness is fun while it lasts ;)

Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Everlong

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! Oh my god AWESOME chapter!! Loved the whole Charlie scene, that whole thing was fucking hilarity - and then them bonding on the drive....and the whole sexual tension building, from outside the club, to holding hands, and then that KISS?! THAT KISS!!! Omg, you own me right now. *sigh*

Update update update!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much!  Hopefully you will forgive me for the cliffie when you read Ch. 9 which includes Bella's rendering of the kiss.  It is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Everlong

This chapter is so sweet.  Even with Charlie being macho dad subtlely warning Edward to behave with all the knives.  talk about embarrassing for Bella.  But dad's do it all the time, mine had the evil eye.  My husband is 6'3" and my dad was only 5'5" but my husband was frightened of my dad.  It took me off guard when he told me that.  But my dad was very protective of my sister and me.  So I laughed a lot during that part of this chapter.  The drive to Seattle, the pizza for dinner, and the standing in line for the concert was just perfect for both of them.  Both feel the same way about each other.  Both want more than friendship.  The actual venue sounded marvelous.  Appears they both enjoyed the concert and just being with each other.  Holding hands and stolen glances at each other, how romantic.  Edward leaning over to kiss her, a little cliffy huh?  Will he be surprised when Bella responds?  I think it will actually make him and her very happy.  Great chapter



Author's Response:

Haha!  Dads are craaazy when it comes to their daughters.  People really connected with that part of the chapter, and I am glad you did, too.  I was really uneasy writing much of this chapter, but I ended up loving The vermillion Room, too.  So glad you enjoyed so many details and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Everlong

This Chapter was awesome! I love Everlong....it's in my top five favorite songs EVER! I love how we finally got a real conversation out of E&B! It was great.

And the kiss...WOW!

Ummm...What is Edwards happy song? I going to say Wonderwall, but not the orginal by Oasis...I would use the remake by Ryan Adams.



Author's Response:

Definitely in my top 5 favorite songs ever, too!  So glad you enjoyed Ch. 8 and thanks for the rating and review!  Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 which shows Edward's happy song this time around :)

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Everlong

I loved it. how cute is mr. lovey dovey Edward??!!



Author's Response:

I know!  Lovey Dovey Edward gets me each time I read him, and I think to myself "I want one" but then I remember he's based on my husband :)  So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!  Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue.  In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums:  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763 

 

From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum.  If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!

 

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