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Reviewer: darkdreamer (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Counting on You
with out a doubt green day's american idiot tour
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Little Earthquakes
Great chapter!! I love it already.. and as far as unlikely to friend me !! People I don't even remember from high school lol I did the whole space out I guess !
Reviewer: epm0001 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Everlong
I love it!
Author's Response: Haha! There's more where that came from. I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9. The link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!
Reviewer: sportress (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Counting on You
best concert??? Heart long road home, moore theatre hands down
i wish i got cool messages on my facebook page...my old high school friends only talk about their kids...LAME LAME
Reviewer: effleurage (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Everlong
Mmmm..I can feel the kiss from here! The interaction between these two is very sweet. I wish Bella could see the subtle clues that Edward is interested in her!!
I look forward to more chapters from you!
- Jen aka effleurage
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I think Bella sees his little clues, but doesn't want to get her hopes up and is trying to reconcile his reputation with what she knows about him firsthand. In Chapter 9, they'll keep getting to know each other because, you know they're *talking* now :)<p>I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9. The link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!</p>
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Everlong
YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!! SCORE!!!! BEST.CHAPTER.EVER!!!!! foo fighters puls edward and bella = best day of my life. i swear to god im falling in love with this story and your edward and bella!!! thank you so much for this amazing chapter...im listening to the acoustic version of everlong as we speak :D
Author's Response: (GreenPuma joins daniellemariecullen in jumping up and down) Haha! I enjoyed this chapter too. You're right--Bella + Edward + D. Grohl/Foo Fighters = Win :)
I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9. The link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Everlong
Great chapter! It was so cute! Can't wait to read the next!
Author's Response: Glad you like! I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9. The link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Everlong
Love it love it love it love it.
Have you ever listened to Ray Lamontagne? He has some pretty fucking fantastic lyrics. "Can I Stay" and "Jolene" are my favorites. I think they would fit in pretty well in your story.
Also, Joshua Radin's "Fear You Won't Fall." Also might fit in.
Love the story. I woke up from a dead sleep in the middle of the day after working the midnight shift just to read this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the music recs! I will definitely check these out. Can't believe you woke up early just to read my fic. Awesome!! I'm glad it was worth it :)<p>Do you follow me on Twitter? I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9 and the link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!</p>
Reviewer: lc1831 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Everlong
That was awesome! I love that their first kiss was to Everlong! Great choice. This chapter has me itching to see them again in concert so hopefully soon!
I'm hoping to see an BPOV next, I'm curious to see if she came to the same conclusion as Edward did during the concert - love... I really like how things are progressing this them. Can't wait to see how they act around each other at school following the concert too. I can picture them keeping it quiet a bit and the Alice making a spectacle calling them out on it.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Chapter 9 definitely shows Bella's reaction. It picks up in a strange place, but don't worry. I flash back to the kiss :) You seem to read my mind (or you must be a writer) because you already predicted many of the themes that will come up in the next chapter.
In any case, Glad you like! I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9. The link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!
Reviewer: DesiCullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Everlong
WOOT! WOOT!
Awesome chapter! Love Everlong! Both together= Amazing! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Many thanks--glad you are enjoying! You just left me my 500th review on Twilighted! If you're interested, I'll be posting a spoiler for Chapter 9 on Twitter (handle is @TheGreenPuma) in a day or two :)
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Everlong
w, so cute! Good chpater!
Author's Response: Glad you like! I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9. The link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!
Reviewer: mickeygirl24 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Everlong
Loved this chapter. I think it might be my favorite so far.
As for the song. I think at the moment it's Everlong.
Author's Response: Haha! Well, you're right in that one of Edward's happy songs now is definitely Everlong. The spoiler scene I just posted (do you follow me on Twitter? I am @TheGreenPuma and I just posted a link under my handle) has Edward dancing around to the song I picked :) Glad you are enjoying!
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Everlong
Amazing!!!
!! I so love this story!
Author's Response: Love your handle! Glad you are liking the story :) I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9. The link is in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Everlong
such a sweet chapter....keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm glad you are still liking this :) I think you might already follow me on Twitter, but in case you don't I'll let you know that I just posted a spoiler for Chapter 9 in my Twitter updates. If you follow me (@TheGreenPuma) you'll get all my spoiler updates!
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Everlong
Your question is difficult this time...
I know what I would say a good happy song for a teenaged boy would be, but I could easily be wrong.
Fast Cars and Freedom by Rascal Flatts
Author's Response:
Ooh, I like whatever Rascal Flatts songs I have ever heard, so I will have to give that one a listen :)
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review and rating! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Everlong
I love this chapter!
especially the part where Edward thinks Bella is "totally in to the cause" when she's really in to...something else. That made me laugh!
great update!
Author's Response:
Haha! Yeah, that was a subtle little tidbit, but you got it. Bella is totally into DG! There is a little more of an homage to DG's hotness (and Bella's infatuation with it) in Ch. 9 :)
Many thanks for the review! Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Everlong
Loved this chapter so much! It's a perfect representation of that time in your first love when you don't think the other person could possibly feel what you're feeling, and wondering how to risk finding out.
Thanks!
Author's Response:
That's a perfect way to describe it--first love is full of so much risk, and it feels like there's so much at stake and it's so scary. Then, later, once both people realize they felt the same way, they just laugh it off and move on. Ah, early love :)
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Everlong
"How old was old enough to ‘take care of yourself'?"..."Eight."...I was six," he almost whispered..."I had a baby brother who died when I was that age. My parents kind of...checked out.".......This is so so sad!
"I'm falling in love with you.....Please, love me back, I prayed, breathless, before I caught her lips in a desperate kiss."
Love the chapter. I voted for you in the moonlight awards already...
I love the Foo Fighters, too. I've seen them in concert, too. they're Awesome!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much for supporting me so much in this fic. I just love your comments and really appreciate your rating and your vote in the Moonlight Awards. If there were ever a fic that an iPod award was made for, I think it may be this one :)
I see you like some of the tenderer plot elements. I think I may have shared with you before that it was originally going to be a lot more angsty, with a lot more focus on their pain an their pasts. I'll probably keep it pretty light, but I have been considering some supplementary pieces that append the fic somehow. I still don't have it figured out.
Do you follow me on Twitter? I have been posting teasers there. I am @TheGreenPuma. I recently posted a link to a Ch. 9 spoiler, but you won't need to wait long for the whole chapter--it is in the queue!
Teaser is at: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Everlong
Ohh, I didn't want this chapter to end!!! More please!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review and for the rating! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: Krismarie94 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Everlong
OH MY GOSH. What a cliffhanger!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review and the rating! Didn't mean to leave a cliffhanger, but the chapter was getting long, so I had to break it up. Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Everlong
Love this story!!! Cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Everlong
OMG that is awesome and you are cruel leaving us hanging like that!!!! Cruel Cruel Cruel!!!! grrr. Edward's Happy song? at this moment I would say Brown Eyed Girl, covered by Everclear...
Author's Response:
Haha! I am a baddie. So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review and rating (and suggestions for Edward's Happy Song--the one I decided to use is mentioned in the teaser)! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Everlong
Wow.....
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're still hanging in there with me--I know you've been here from the beginning :) I am thrilled that you are still enjoying and I really appreciate the rating and review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Everlong
Oh dear lord.... I might die if you don't update soon!
Author's Response: No need to die! The update is coming :) Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Everlong
That was perfect!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
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