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Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 02, 2009 04:56 PM · On: The Way
i got a good cover song!!!! mad world by gary jules is much better than the original that was done by tears for fears!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: twilighter_87 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Everlong
great chapter...great story :)
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Everlong
I freaking love this story. So sweet and funny.
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Counting on You
*squeal* He asked her out!
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Hallelujah
Lets hope he really talks to her.
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:29 PM · On: The Way
Yea, Alice and Jasper are friends now. It was so sweet he made her a CD. It would have been nice if he could have at least said something when he gave it to her though. Boys.
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Alice and Jasper are cracking me up. Love them.
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:10 PM · On: It's a Fire
So sweet.
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:01 PM · On: If I Were a Boy
Good job Emmett. I'm loving this story, so glad I found it.
Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Little Earthquakes
She did not just ignore his friend request!
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Everlong
Write more it was an awesome story just a suggestion make their relationship sweet and romantic i love it
Reviewer: moracres (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:53 AM · On: The Way
across the universe cover - fiona apple
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Everlong
That was a perfect Date!! Edward Cullen and Dave Grohl!! I love the title of this chapter because Everlong is one of my Favorite songs!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review (and you are so right--Everlong is one of the best songs of its decade)! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a spoiler on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a spoiler each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the spoilers!
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Everlong
oh wow, GREAT chapter!!! They are great together!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Chapter 9 is in the queue. A teaser is posted on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post both the teaser and new chapters!
Reviewer: Codis (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Everlong
Thank you so much for this chapter - A combination of my two favourite things, Grohl adn Cullen. (no mention of Taylor thought, the wicked hot Foo Fighters drummer did bum me just a tad :) )
I loved your description of what Bella was feeling when the band took the stage. as someone who was lucky enough to be front row centre at a Foo Fighters gig a few years back, i can say that that is definately a realistic reaction of a true fan.
thankyou.
Author's Response: Ooh, I'm not sure if I know the drummer--probably because each time I see the band, I am looking at Dave. Unfortunately, I have never seen them at a live show, but I watch the hell out of them on YouTube :)
In any case, so glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: eternalprincess (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Everlong
FANTASTIC!! That's what this chapter is! I can't wait to see where else you take this story! Looking forward to more updates, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much for your kind words about my fic :)
Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Everlong
wow ! what a chapter it was really great and I can not wait to see what will happen next
Author's Response:
Well, you won't have to wait for long! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Meanwhile, thanks so much for your review and the great rating. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Everlong
that was fairly cute
Author's Response: Glad you approve! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: bigbear64 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Everlong
Just found this story and I wanted you to know that I thought it was really good. Don't know if my opinion means but thought I would tell you anyway.
Author's Response: It means A LOT that you took the time to write me a review to let me know you are enjoying my fic. Thank you so much for doing so. It's hard to keep up with responding, but really, the reviews make my day and right now the fact that folks like this fic so much is making my whole year :)
Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Everlong
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! I can't believe you've stoped right in there! OMG. I loved it, loved it, loved it!
xoxo
Author's Response:
Yes,I am evil! (Well, not so much, actually--I had to end it there because it was getting too long. Dont' worry--I don't abandon the kiss and you will soon see Bella's experience of it). So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: MrsBlackx (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Everlong
i love this fic! i love all the songs included and the way you have made music the main character in the story, fantastic writing! Cant wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Everlong
Oh yeah, that is just about the best description of a great first "vibe is on date" I have seen in a while. the whole standing in line, cold, getting closer thing...completely authentic.
Bella girl, you better love him back...
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for the review and the rating. It's been fun to (briefly) relive first love. Dare I say it has inspired me to rekindle some of that romantic spirit in my own life? Yes, yes I do :)
Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: Mechelle1 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Everlong
I'm a HUGE Facebooker, so I'm loving this fic. :-)
Mechelle
Author's Response: Ha! I have barely been on Facebook since I started this fic--no time for that! Someone told me there is a Twilighted fan group on FB that I might want to friend, but I haven't had time. Meanwhile, people keep telling me my fic is getting pimped on LJ, but I barely even know how to use that! LOL!
Anyway, so glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review! Chapter 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers! This is the one technology it seems I can use :)
Reviewer: mel2587 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Everlong
OMG!!!!
This chapter was absolutely amazing!!!!! I loved the ending!!!
Just brilliant!
This is the best story ever!
I cannot wait to read the next chapter!!! I'm looking forward to it!
MeL...
Author's Response:
Ha! Best story ever is quite a compliment. I am glad you are connecting with it so well, and I really appreciate you taking the time to review and rate!
Ch. 9 is already in the Twilighted queue. In the meantime, I posted a teaser on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Everlong
Yay! I'm so excited that they finally kissed. Such a sweet moment. Equally sweet, in my opinion, was when Edward kept Bella warm outside in line. I was kind of squeeing internally :-)
I hope we get to find out Bella's reaction to the kiss next time around...or if things progress from there, well, as much as they can in a public place LOL.
Edward's happy song? Well in my opinion, I'd say that a good choice would be Love Song #1 by Drew and the Medicinal Pen, this really awesome group from Brooklyn. Not only would it be a sweet way to describe his feelings for Bella, but it does sound happy! Here's the link to their Myspace so you can listen to it if you like:
http://www.myspace.com/drewandthemedicinalpen
Author's Response: You will get more on the sweetness of the kiss when you see Bella's experience of the moment in Ch. 9 (glad I could accomodate your wish). I also rather liked the part where he kept her warm, and I'm glad I added that part because I second-guessed it when I first wrote it.
I will check out Drew and the Medicinal Pen, though Edward's happy song is revealed in the teaser I posted on the "Facebook Friends - Behind the Music" thread on the Twilighted forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=6763
From here on out, I will be posting a teaser each week on the forum. If you're not doing so already, following me on Twitter (@TheGreenPuma) will alert you to when I post the teasers! Meanwhile, Ch. 9 is in queue, so you won't have to wait for long for the full text!
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