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Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:07 PM · On: In a Little While
That was great :) Keeps getting better and better. I am glad Bella trusts herself to be with Edward. I would be upset if she listened to what everyone else says. Keep up the great work. Look forward to more soon
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:07 PM · On: In a Little While
haha no tomatoes from me, i love this story. you're doing such an amazing job!
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:06 PM · On: In a Little While
EEEEEEEEEEE! That was great!!!! She needs to accept the fact that he wants to have a relationship with her. They are getting closer. Love it!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:06 PM · On: In a Little While
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:00 PM · On: In a Little While
Well, if Bella does give it up to Edward, she's gonna so deserve the bad rep she's gonna get.
I'm still not convinced Edward isn't trying to conquer her, then leave her.
And, Bella really should be on the lookout, I mean it was just, what, a day ago that the creeps at the gas station were placing bets on her and Edward. So, if they are placing bets on whether Bella puts out, then how are they gonna find out whether or not she does the deed?
Yea. Edward.
So, like I said, if she gives it up, she's gonna deserve the fallout.
Just sayin.
I mean, heck, it's only been 10 days. Maybe she ought to show just a little restraint.
But, I'll certainly love reading about it no matter which direction she goes in.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 07:00 PM · On: In a Little While
Well, if Bella does give it up to Edward, she's gonna so deserve the bad rep she's gonna get.
I'm still not convinced Edward isn't trying to conquer her, then leave her.
And, Bella really should be on the lookout, I mean it was just, what, a day ago that the creeps at the gas station were placing bets on her and Edward. So, if they are placing bets on whether Bella puts out, then how are they gonna find out whether or not she does the deed?
Yea. Edward.
So, like I said, if she gives it up, she's gonna deserve the fallout.
Just sayin.
I mean, heck, it's only been 10 days. Maybe she ought to show just a little restraint.
But, I'll certainly love reading about it no matter which direction she goes in.
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 06:58 PM · On: In a Little While
I totally had tomatoes ready but you saved the day, though I have a feeling I just might need those tomatoes again later cause Bella seems to have a thick head.
Great update!
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 06:55 PM · On: In a Little While
AHHHH!! Fantastic and spicy!!
I had a feeling they were going to go to some awesome record store or something. When I was imagining the perfect date for them, awesome record store was on the menu. Fantastic touch with the listening booths. It reminds me of one of my favorite movies, "Before Sunrise."
Awesome awesome awesome! Now I'm depressed that I have to wait a week to hear from GreenPuma again!
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks for your review. I forgot there was a listening booth scene in "Before Sunrise". You are right--that's an excellent film. Maybe I should write a fic based on "Before Sunrise" and "Before Sunset" (<--I hope you have seen the sequel). It could be called "Before Twilight"!
P.S. Yes, it will be another week, but I will post a spoiler in a few days, by Monday or Tuesday :)
Reviewer: larisbell (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:44 PM · On: This Is Love
luv it update soon
Reviewer: larisbell (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:43 PM · On: This Is Love
luv it update soon
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:07 PM · On: This Is Love
ahhh! yes! he's got bitten by the loooove bug *que lovey backround 60's music* lol this story keeps on getting more awesome everytime. like you have no idea, this is mine and my friends favorite story. at school i we do is talk about it. can't wait for the next update =]
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 11:15 AM · On: This Is Love
Meanwhile, a question: where do you think Bella will take Edward on their date?
I have contemplated this and I'm kinda thinking some kind of music festival or a free concert by a local band...
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:55 AM · On: This Is Love
Love it Edward should take Bella to a Picnic in the Park at night should be romantic
Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:37 AM · On: This Is Love
Thanks for another update. You have the teenage hesitation and excitement down pretty well.
Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Everlong
So sweet!
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:59 PM · On: This Is Love
Own... Edward is so cute! Can I have one, please??
Anyway, I want to know what is his happy song! *Or is it the one he was "playing the guitar" with Carlisle? :P
And... Well, I have no ideia where Edward would take Bella on a date - why don't you help me with that and post it asap?
- xoxo, and thanks for answering my last review!
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:47 PM · On: This Is Love
What's the happy song?
Reviewer: Nicki 101 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:32 PM · On: This Is Love
i love this chapter but idk where edward will take her mayb to his house....no thts too idk ordinary i guess mayb the meadow or juss another special place of his...if u hurry and write the next chapter then everyone will kno lol ^_^ cant wait
Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:27 PM · On: This Is Love
Great. Just great. I loved how you moved everything along, but still included how the date went.
I can honestly say I have no idea where edward is taking her, but I hope to find out soon.
Reviewer: twilighter_87 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:23 PM · On: This Is Love
and u dont give us the song??? good chapter, and I really liked the dream/thought-segments :)
Reviewer: clobub (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:06 PM · On: This Is Love
it is so cold where i am at the mo, but this has warmed me right up!!! i didnt stop smiling and i even did a happy dance, similiar to edwards (to everlong and wont get fooled again though) when reading.
i love this story, it makes me feel really happy!!! thanx ever so much!!!
xxxxxclobubxxxxxx
Reviewer: landslide (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 01:56 PM · On: This Is Love
Can I have a wooing Edward? Please, pretty please.....
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 11:57 AM · On: This Is Love
Great chapter. Thanks
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 09:59 AM · On: This Is Love
love it :)Now playing my happy song
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 09:38 AM · On: This Is Love
possibly an old ventage record store in Port Angeles that Edward doesn't know about?
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