Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
OMG! I think somebody is about to either be cut out or have butt handed to him.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
ah dam they were doing so well.... welll i think he should tell her the truth and try to make up for it... but i DON'T think they should break up... i that would be really bad!
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! DANGIT! lmao...god he should have just told her *slaps edward* lmao..ok so they were really adorable in this chapter until edward went all "you cant let her know the truth" rofl...everytime i read this story i fall more in love with it :D i think that maybe she should make him work for it more than she already has...i think that edward should G.R.O.V.E.L. on his knees and beg her to take him back and when she disagrees the first time he should tell her that he loves her and that he didnt want to hurt her..lmao
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Yes Emmett did place request on FaceBook, but Bella didn't answer yes the first time. In fact, the only reason she said yes was because Alice threatened to respond for her. So both never actually planned to befriend the other. Emmett is right it could be considered a funny, ironic story. Bella and Edward were getting along so well. Everyone was happy. Now just when Bella was trusting that Edward was telling her the truth with his words about everything, she hears him state she can't know the truth.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
There are so many songs that I think go well with various parts of the Edward/Bella canon relationship, but I can't think of any off the top of my head that embodies their whole relationship.
Meanwhile, I am enjoying this story so far, and I need to go see what other people suggested to your query so I can add to my playlist if there's anything good.
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
holy effin a
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Surely she is not mad at him. :( Thanks so much for the update. Can't wait for the next one :) Please don't make us wait too long
Reviewer: Princesse2186 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
I think they both went over the top. Its not such a big deal for Edward to try and hide it. and Its not a big deal either for Bella to throw her drink on Edward...
I think they are both little drama queens... No offense, I really like your story and look forward to the next update!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Hey there, good to see you've dropped us another chapter!
Lovely as ever, though I don't understand what's so difficult about telling Bella that he didn't get at first he was into her, so Emmett did the FaceBook friending instead of himself. All about how you let her know, of course. Don't Jasper and Alice have an alike story going on? He stared after her so long before the first moves were made, so...
See ya soon, hopefully! Keep up the writing.
Spikey
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Ok call me dense, but I don't seriously see a problem with Bella finding out that Emmett was on Edward's site and he actually did the "friending". Good chapter though.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Ahhh!! More than anything I want to know what the other lethal secrets are! So does Bella, I imagine. How sad that Emmett was probably right too... if Edward had just told her it probably would have been fine.
I laughed so hard when Emmett said that roller derby was soft porn. :)
Another perfect chapter leaving me wanting so much more!!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Ok... so I really wasn't expecting her to be standing there, though I did expect the "ousting" to commence in a similar fashion. Don't know how Edward's gonna make this up. Not because it's so horrible he couldn't man up and do it himself (cause that is bad but not hate you worthy), but the fact that he hid it, wanted it to stay hidden, AND planned to keep that AND OTHER things secret are leave-you-worthy.
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Oh my. This fic has completely owned me this morning. It's fantastic. I love the playfulness and banter between E/B. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Uh-oh! Edward really should have been honest with her. She would have understood .... in the beginning. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
I don't think she is really mad just mad he kept it from her. She should make him beg and grovel for about a week and then let him in on the whole faking being mad. She loves him she cant stay mad at him forever!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
OH SNAP! Reasons why you should never talk about things like this in public. Why on earth was it such a big deal that she not find out? I mean, I'm with Emmett here. And Edward is SUCH a girl, but I love him that way. It makes me both parts giggle and awwww. Great update! Thank you.
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Its not that big of a deal. She shouldn't go all melo-drama on us and screw up a good thing. Make him sweat it a bit...make him spill some truths to her and move on to the SEX!
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
oooown... she shouldn't have done that! I don't think it's a big deal - except by the fact that he really should have told her. anyway, he could always tell her that he loves her! and if she doesn't listen... well, he can say that he loves me and everything is gonna be alright ;)
xoxo
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Ah! Damn! And they were doing so good!! Grovaling on and off Facebook. He needs to declare a post that will knock her socks off!
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
I don't understand why Bella would be mad. Oh well, guess I'll find out soon enough.......right???!!!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Elisabethskar (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
oooor (this idea poped up the minut i hit send on my other comment) he could buy her a record player and a few LPs of songs that means alot to them.
Reviewer: Elisabethskar (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
Keyboard under her bedroom window, serenading her favourite song for her?
yeah, i'd jump him instantly.
Reviewer: Rie Donovan (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
i think bella is over reacting, big time. yes he fibbed but it is obvious how he feels. so what he needed a kick start, he is the one who made all subsequent moves & gestures...she needs to get over it and quick, otherwise it is her own fault for being miserable
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Everlong
Oh wow! *cathing my breath*
This is fucking beautiful!
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