Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
I'm so glad you used the offspring..a lot of people don't know of them...they're definitely underrated.
i love that bella came for him...love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: bookluver (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Oh, Hurry with the next one.
Reviewer: kempe (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
That was awesome!!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Oh my goodness...GO BELLA! So it seems as though she "went all Lloyd Dobbler on his ass" before he could. Probably a good thing considering moving a piano underneath someone's window would have been a lot more complicated LOL. By the way, I love Say Anything, so I was happy to see that reference in this chapter. That'd be really funny if the song Bella was playing just happened to be In Your Eyes. But that'd be so romantic :-)
I think I fell in love with Edward even more in this chapter--sleeping on her porch and all those letters he wrote Bella. You just can't beat love letters *sigh*
Looking forward to Edward and Bella's reunion!
Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
ok, I hope the "talk amongst yourselves" didn't mean you don't want reviews... if you don't I'm sorry, just in case, I'll leave it...
GAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was one of the best chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and it's hard, cause the whole damn thing's so good!!! you gotta love this story....
and sure Bella redeemed herself! =) and I'm so happy! 'cause really I understood her (not what I'd do but I did understood) yet I was anxious for them to reunite, and for Edward just... poor thing, he's the sweetest :P Ok, doesn't help that other 2 stories that I'm reading Bella is being way more ass...
She was playing "Lover, You Should've Come Over" right? it's so sweet! I really can see the scene.... Edward going to the window and Bella standing there with the boom box and the smile and just AWWWWWWWWWW
Ooohhh and Charlie, and Jasper...and Esme... ok, Everybody, I feel bad not to mention the others but... I just liked their POVs and Jasper being wise always gets to me =)
Thank you SO much for this amazing story!
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
awsomeness cant wait for next update!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Wow! Leslie <-- That's me!! XD I know it isn't me me, but my name. Lol, can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
OMG! Bella did not just go all John Cusack on Edward! Oh yes she did! Nice move...he doesn't stand a chance! Muwahahahaha! Awesome...hehehehe!
Have to say that this story is a lot deeper that it might seem at first glance...Bella's reason for getting all bent out of shape is exactly what Charlie was thinking...it got me to thinking about how something that seems trivial to an adult can mean the world to a teenager...and damn if you haven't captured the angst and innocence of the self-centered teen! Great story...can't wait to see how it plays out...; )
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Is It Okay if I Call You Mine?
over reaction much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: kelly101079 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
when will you be updating? I love the story very cute
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
wow, wow, wow i loved this chapter.
i cant wait for more
update asap please
Reviewer: pacificblue87 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
is she playing "please forgive me" ? haha
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:17 PM · On: This Is Love
um music store???? awsome chapter!
wtm
Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Everlong
Edward has a happy song? wow didnt c that one coming! hehehehe! honestlly i dont listen to happy music much so i dont hav a clue! great chapter though!!
wtm
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
at least they are going to talk... i don't like them fighting!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
"Go all Lloyd Dobbler on her ass."
MOST EPIC LINE CARLISLE COULD'VE EVER SAID!
You just pwned my soul! hahah. OMG.
EPIC!! I don't think I can count all of the ways that rocked!!! bahahahahahahaha.
LOVED IT! I'm in love with this story.
Reviewer: lasrnr (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
YEAH!!!!!! She TOTALLY redeemed herself! YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Little Earthquakes
Edward truly loves Bella. Even Charlie can see it when he meets him on Charlie's front porch. Bella was hurt, but it was really a trivial white lie. Alice reminds her that if she hadn't accepted Edward's friend request she would have done it for her. The letters he wrote are beautiful. Glad for the intervention for Bella from Alice and Rosalie. If those letters alone didn't get her to budge I don't know what would make her talk with him. He sent flowers, cards, notes, lived on her porch for almost 36 hours +. I liked Carlisle and Esme's grand gesture of having him play his piano for her with the song he wrote for her. That is romantic to the max. But Bella beat Edward to the punch and she made the grand gesture with her boom box. Reverse of Juliet coming to Romeo to serenade him from below. Looking forward to knowing what song is playing and how their conversation and make up will turn out.
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
AWWWWWWW!!!!!
Bella went all Lloyd Dobbler on his ass!! (I'm so proud of her!)
I'd love to think she was actually playing In Your Eyes, but I doubt it with these two. But they don't have one set song yet, so I have NO CLUE what she would play him! (unless, of course, it's the Jeff Buckley song in the title)
Reviewer: bolideinthesky (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Lloydella! That was a good ending to the chapter. Hehe.
Reviewer: Laine Quinn (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Ahh Lloyd Dobler. Nice.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
AAWWW!!! These two kids really need to communicate.
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Awww.
Reviewer: boo2you122 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
YAYAYAYAY! =D
Reviewer: UrbanAngel (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
god, i think i would have gone crazy if it would have been edward to make another grand gesture - i mean he did enough and they were together exactly how ling?! yeah, well, i'm glad she got over herself!
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