Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Please Please write more it is a very sweet story.
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Please Please write more it is a very swet story.
Reviewer: XsweetXtragedyX (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
my first review and might I say I was FAR from disappointed. I absolutely LOVE this story...for realz.
oh and the boombox over her head thing...I literally laughed out loud.
<3
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Forget Lloyd Dobbler Bells went 'Say Anything' on his ass!! Eddie's not the one doing the serenading on here.
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Great chapter.
I was surprised that Bella is outside Edwards window.
Hope everything work out for them in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
My goodness. I don't know what to say, so jus tpost it soon so I can recover! :P
xoxo
Reviewer: damlanrrr (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
woww, it was great:)
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
lmao.. ok I know this chapter was very sad and my heart broke for the stupid boy (cuz as we females know they are all stupid at some point or another), but Bella stealing the thunder by her doing the grand gesture is just freaking priceless. Excellent use of the surprise plot twist!!!
Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
I kind of hope it's In Your Eyes, you know, for purity!
I love this fic :)
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Creep
Bells what in the Forks are you doing?!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
wow !!
Reviewer: lifeupsidedown (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Noooooothing compares, noth-ing compares too yoooou!? Love the story, keep up the good work.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
So Bella Brings out the Big Guns!!! OMG I am laughing so hard right now!!! THE BOOMBOX!!! No she didn't.
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
I have no clue what song Bella could be playing... but it's gotta be an improvement from the depressing crap Edward's listening to, right?
BTW - I like the way Esme and Carlisle think.
Reviewer: KalifDee (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
In Your Eyes by Peter Gabriel!!! Most romantic gesture to grace an 80s movie ever!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Great getting other POV!
Awww, poor Edward. He was trying so hard to prove to her how sorry he was and what she means to him.
And good for Bella! Can't wait to find out the song!!
Reviewer: donnah77 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
I absolutely adored Esme's advice to go all Lloyd Dobbler on her ass.
Great chapters, poor Edward, and thank goodness Bella seems to be extricating head from ass. Looking forward to the next.
I'm gonna guess its In Your Eyes, since I'm traditional like that. And it is a wonderful song.
Reviewer: WorldInMyEyes (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
I still love this story:) Especially the "Say Anything" references:)
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Esme's POV was epic. Absolutely perfect. I loved the whole chapter! I'm so sad ther are only two more chapters!
Reviewer: plumprincess (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
awww!
Reviewer: synapsegirl (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
I'm glad they're going to get back together but honestly....Bella pulling the grand gesture kind of surprised me. Not in an "OMG" way - more of a..."Huh, really??" kinda way. For some reason it just felt off and so unlike her. No satisfaction received from it.
Oh well! So long as Edward's happy in the end that's all that matters.
PS - personally, I loved the way you were going up until this chapter. Bella was overreacting and unfriended Edward..kinda expected with Bella and if she did anything different it would have been off. So kudos on doing it! This just kinda felt like a neat wrapping up in a bow to make ppl happy. Sorry... I'm not typically negative but yeah - had to say it. LOVE your writing though so please, please, please continue. :)))
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Awwwww.... Love it! Love the 'rents! Love that it was Bella who got her act together and went to Edward!
Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
"I found him in his room this morning picking petals off of a rose and listening to "Ain't No Sunshine When She's Gone" on a loop. It's time to intervene."
BAHAHAHAHA! Wow, how very Emoward of him!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: RPatz (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
Hi, just to let you know I'm one of those horrible human beings that never reviews but... I just want to let you know that I love your story. I also love the Say Anything reference. Just wanted to let you know how much I love it and say thanks.
Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Lover You Should've Come Over
This Chapter was great, espeacially since it was only last week when I was trying to explain to my children about Lloyd Dobbler and the boombox. I litterally clapped my hands upon reading that part...... Thanks
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