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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:25 PM · On: If I Were a Boy
I think Emmett deserves a treat rather than a punishment. ;o) However, if I *had* to punish Emmett there would be some spanking and handcuffs involved.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Once Bella makes up her mind, that's it won't stop. She impressed Edward with her grand gesture. Just as Edward would have done with having his piano in her yard under her window. So both were at the same point. Bella doesn't have to prove anything to Edward. Everyone has secrets they don't tell anyone. Things that really aren't necessary to who you are today. The past is just that, the past. It molds and shapes who we will become as we mature. This process doesn't just stop at high school it continues until the end of our lives. Edward loved the person she is and their connection of who they both are is music. The lyrics say what they think and feel. At least now Edward can communicate through words instead of just music. So can Bella-their connection is wonderful and cute. Not sure I would offer to carry a guy's backpack though. Guess I'm old fashioned it's the guys who do the lifting and carrying. Talking giving and taking of themselves building and strengthening their bond or relationship. Sometimes you have to go through pain to become stronger and overcome past demons. Through pain comes change and hopefully betterment. I think Bella and Edward have suceeded in betterment of who they both are and what they feel for the other as well as themselves as a couple. The songs you picked both were great songs for your story. For finale how about "Still the One" by Orleans. Just a suggestion I like your music choices.
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
awesome song. great choice!
Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Love it!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Little Earthquakes
I totally get Bella not thinking she's in the same league as Edward. I've felt that way myself.
Great start--I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
P.S: good HEA song: This Is Home by Switchfoot
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
I have an absolute attachement to Dolphin's Cry by Live both for sex and for mushy romance... all purpose awesomeness in one song. :)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Bow-chicka-wow-wow!! THAT is my vote. ;)
Very good chapter. I've loved following these two.
Great job.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Thank GOD for making the right choice Bella!! But you need to know that no matt4r how bad or horrible it may be Edward is just gonna love you harder.
Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
I'm kind of... at a lost of words...
I hadn't get last chap. that one of the songs Edward uses was "Lover You..." that's why I guessed that, then I realized that it couldn't be Bella's boom box song...
anyway, it was great! I guess sometimes you sigh a little at Bella, but, everybody needs their process and bumps, what'cha gonna do, huh?
I really laughed at the Plastic Fantastic dude singing "I want to know what Love is" it just bubbled up my throat suddenly and unexpectedly, really great ^^
I'll wish for your sanity, and if there's anything I can help (I know there's probably not much, and you have friends and all but...)
Anyway, hope things are getting better for you now, and thank you for the Chapter, and not abandoning the fic =)
Love the Story! the ending of this chapter was really awwwwww
Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
I'm kind of... at a lost of words...
I hadn't get last chap. that one of the songs Edward uses was "Lover You..." that's why I guessed that, then I realized that it couldn't be Bella's boom box song...
anyway, it was great! I guess sometimes you sigh a little at Bella, but, everybody needs their process and bumps, what'cha gonna do, huh?
I really laughed at the Plastic Fantastic dude singing "I want to know what Love is" it just bubbled up my throat suddenly and unexpectedly, really great ^^
I'll wish for your sanity, and if there's anything I can help (I know there's probably not much, and you have friends and all but...)
Anyway, hope things are getting better for you now, and thank you for the Chapter, and not abandoning the fic =)
Love the Story! the ending of this chapter was really awwwwww
Reviewer: khytruckle (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
I'm glad you're back to posting and hope that things settle down in your life in a good way.
I like the E&B honesty plan. Very nice chapter.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Beautiful by Christina Aguilera
These are two people who have been hurt, rejected and misjudged by people all their lives. This has dictated how they feel about their own self-worth. This is the perfect song for them. They are rejecting the image others have of them, and seeing the beauty in eachother.
;)
Great chapter.
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
I'm so glad you're back! I was just thinking of this story yesterday, and trying to decide whether I should lose my PM virginity to let you know how much I was missing it.
Sorry to hear that RL has been beating you down. Please know that the time you take to share your creativity with us brightens my RL considerably, and that you are appreciated.
I am glad to see that babie-cuddling Sobward and his girl are working things out. (And Jasper? Puppies?) The response Emmett spewed out was priceless.
I'm too terrible at remembering titles or even, sometimes, lyrics to help out with the HEA song suggestion. That reminds me, though, that some of the music you've used in this fic has become my new favorites. Thanks!
I'm really glad you're doing an outtake of this chapter, because I did have some questions as I was reading it, both about Bella's conversations with her parents and about her reference to a history of casual sex. I had assumed there was no abuse, but that angle still came somewhat out of left field for me. Why did she not mention anything to Alice during their heart-to-hearts? Was it a bad history?
Anyway, hopefully the blanks will be filled in, and E and B will ride off happily into the sunset. (If you can channel "Say Anything" I figure we can continue our ride on the corny train.)
Thanks again!
Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Oh I loved this chapter. They are so freaking adorable.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
well gad the cleared the air. Although seems to me Bella has been scaring herself for nothing.
Loved her whole antics to win him back.
Another great chapter.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Great chapter! And I loved the song choice. Good one!!!
Bella's story was so sad. I am glad that she shared it with him. I thought it was good that she wanted to start off as friends.
I am so happy that they are being honest with each other. It will be so beneficial in the long run!
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Beautiful story, so well done!
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
ooh ooh I vote for sexy song!!! glad we'll be getting some extras!
Reviewer: camianbu_88 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Dear GOD!!!, what a beautiful chapter!!!!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
music store guy was funny. I am glad they are finally moving forward.
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Own, so cute! But I'm sad now... Only 15? Gosh, I wish this story could last forever!
Hope to read the next chapter soon!
xoxo
Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Lovely!!!!!!!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:03 AM · On: Mystery Song Chapter
Great chapter! I'm glad things are coming together for these two. Can't wait for more!!!
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