Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
That was cute. Keep em coming!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
cute story
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Great start on the story. New angle for Bella and Edward. Thank goodness for Emmett and Alice or neither one would have made a move at all. At least some conversation was made between them. He acknowledged he likes Pearl Jam which was her T-shirt and lyrics. Interesting. Looking forward to where the story will lead. Also Jasper and Alice are always cute together even when first starting.
Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
I love it. Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: MilleVang (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Haha thats actually a bit funny... Great chapter, please update soon..
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Gaaah, that last part made me want to just giggle with glee, or something like that. I remember that Pearl Jam "Vs" shirt; my older brother had that when he was a teen. He's in his early thirties now and he still has it. :P
Reviewer: jaceslashalec (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Thus far I'm really liking this & I'm looking forward to more.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Great chapter! Little short but good.
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
i love this story,,,,keep it up.. bc deep down inside we are all stalkers on FB
Reviewer: cheshiregirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
ahhhhh what a great chapter ending! really I loved it!
hmm I would dear say that Iris from Goo Goo Dolls, It has the wrong vibe and is more angsty (more fitting to other BxE stories, maybe it could be mor for the Edward of Twilight...) but there's something about the "I don't want the world to see me.. I just want you to know who I am" that fits...besides if bella likes a bit tortured... city of angels...
hehehehe "Just can't get enough" of Depech Mode... if you're looking for light... because of the whole, "I think of you I know we have to meet" well they search the web and they're always over analizing and such...
Nothingman from Pearl Jam...it's not B/E relationship, but I wanted to mention it because I've read that Eddie Vedder stated about the song "The idea is about if you love someone and they love you, don't f--k up... 'cause you are left with less than nothing."... and I believe is some of the fear Edward has, to screw up?
High from The Cure... just because in the end I know Edward will know he'll never let her go, and just..."tho think I could've let you go" hehehe not right now but some day it will be...
"You and Me" from Lifehouse because it's sweet and romantic and it states that they quite don't really know the depth of their feelings maybe, and how about they're always consious and keeping tracks on what the other does...
right now, I would go with "You and Me"... sorry I know it's no Pearl Jam or Led Zeppelin... but I couldn't find one that convinced me...
and sorry this got so long!
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
I recently fell in love with Ray Lamontagne, and his song "Can I stay" belongs somewhere with Edward and Bella. Josh Radin, "The Fear You Won't Fall" is fantastic... And also... Rachel Yamagata "Be Be Your Love."
Love your story.
Reviewer: tommyxloser (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
right now I am stuck on "forever and almost always" and "can't break a broken heart" by Kate Voegele. I guess if I were to put them into the Twilight universe, they would only fit in with New Moon, but I'm in love with those songs regardless. "Halo" by Beyonce is sort of awesome for the relationship too, even though I'm not a big fan of hers. "Love Me Like A Man" by Bonnie Raitt. "Love Me Or Leave Me" by Doris Day. "I'm Only Happy When It Rains" by Garbage. There are more, I know, but I can't think of them right this minute. :)
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Little Earthquakes
Great concept....hee! I had an ex-boyfriend send a friend request....ugh!
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
oh good. I like where this is going!
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Awww ... I like this progression! Can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
NIce music ref btw. love the story update soon.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
mmmm...Maroon 5 'she will be loved'..Sarah Mcglachlan(sp?)...'silence'..and I dont' know why..but Portishead 'Mourning air'
Reviewer: twihards_unite (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
lol, nice that is pretty awesome, keep up the update!
and a song that i think is very appropriate for bella and edward (not in this story but in the books) is "I will follow you into the dark" by death cab for cutie, it's very much embodies their infinite love
Reviewer: xXElle-BelleXx (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
if u mean in the actual books, i would say Bring Me to Life by Evanescence for New Moon - BPOV. :)
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Can't wait for an udpate. I wish your chapters were longer, cause I am loving it.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Little Earthquakes
mmmm...I might just like your story..different...but nice to use a huge networking site like facebook.
My most unlikely person to request me was my 62 year old grandma.
Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Hmm I like it... interesting start! *Adds to favourites!*
Reviewer: aimeexjeannette25 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
Feeling good by Muse
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
"Gone Away"
Cold
Hardly anyone knows about this song, but I love it. It came out in like 2000 or something.
Reviewer: Cullenfan (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Elderly Woman behind the Counter in a Small Town
This story is so much fun!! :) Thanks for the update. I loved the little moment between Jasper and Alice
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