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Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
love it, you had us so worried
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
GO CHARLIE!!! i love this and i want more please.
Reviewer: M Logan (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Family
WOW! That was beautiful! How touching! Margaret Volturi??? Oh no! what are you doing to break up this little family??????
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Ahhh.. So I like the twist on the great grandmother. She used Renee's greed against her. I think she'll be a nice addition to Jake's support network.
And, the whole Edward/Charlie dynamic, well, I love it.
Are we going to see any Bella/Edward action at school?
Author's Response: Yes, the kids will be going back to school. :) I needed to concentrate on the family drama first. I'm not nearly imaginative enough to have more than one thing going on at once in my story LOL. So glad you like it :)
Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
woohoo! that's right tell that bitch to get the fuck out! and that the mrs. got her number...ooooh so good! keep em coming...
Reviewer: butifuldevine (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
This post was awesome! I love Maggie and I'm so glad she is not like Renee. I kind of wish Edward would have said a little more. But the ending was good. Post more when you can,,hopefully its soon.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
This didn't went as I thought it would.
It was amazing to see so many people standing by Bella, wanting her to feel safe, protected and certain that nothing would change. She was still afraid and scared, and that is understandable. She lived with Renee for a while and knew what she would try to do, but she had no idea what the rest of them had planned and could do.
Maggie was a huge surprise, she is a kind, nice lady who just wants the chance to be a great-grandmother, and she and Charlie had talked and gotten to an agreement, and no one knew about it. Carlisle and Esme being there was also great.
And then Charlie allowing Edward to say what he did to Renee? That was simply priceless. He knew he wouldn't go upstairs with Bella. He has learned a lot about Edward, and he appreciates him
So what's next? I guess an agreement with Maggie and some celebration.
Reviewer: MadisonAshlee (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Great as usual. Can't wait for more.
-Jessica
Reviewer: karajgil (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
aww i love this story! edward is so sweet! if renee was my mom i would have kicked her in cooch!! i think there should be more alice. alice is amazing. i mean who doesnt love alice?? lol. well update soon!!
Reviewer: missy85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Oh, you had me scared for a second! I just found your story and its going straight to my favourites list. I can't wait to read more of your story. Thx
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Great chapter. I'm glad Renee can't take Bella back to Arizona and Edward got to have his say at the end. The Charlie/Bella talk was really sweet. I really like Maggie. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Way to go Swans, Edward and Maggie..
Reviewer: La Tua Cante (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
love the story!!
I love "happily ever afters" and I feel that this story line could lend itself quite nicely?
It has also been an interesting look into the Americal legal system as I myself am Scottish and as happened with me I was my mothers property as a baby and when my estranged father tried to run away with me when I was 2 weeks old he was done for theft!!
Reviewer: MrsHannahCullen (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
LOVE the end of this chapter!
Unexpected about a nice Maggie!
-Hannah
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
ohhhhh great chapter! amazing actually! i love that everyone got together to help out bella and jacob! and of course, you gotta love edward's input!lol!
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
great part
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Well, the title of the chapter said it all - Renee is a bitch - pure and simple. Her true colors came out the moment she uttered the words "You promised me cash money"!! Yeah, what a great mother she is. I'm sure after this little fiasco is all said and done, Bella won't be giving her a second thought.
And way to go Edward. Bella and Jacob are very lucky to have a guy like that in their lives.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
I loved Edward's last line! But, yeah, I think he does have some anger management issues, especially when someone he loves is threatened. I hope that isn't forboding down the track...
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
i LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!!!!!!! i just came across it, and didn't stop till i got to the last chappie!!!! i love how everyone is ganging up on renee!!!! lmao!!!!!! can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
I love that the great-grams double crossed her like that. Kudos to her!
Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Granny Volturi was a great, surprising addition! I kinda love her. And I'm so very, very, very glad that you let Edward have the last say in the battle with Renee. I hope we dont have to deal with her anymore! Great job as always!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
love it.
Reviewer: rfortu01 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
for some reason there is no text. Is anyone else having this problem?
rene
Author's Response: Sorry can you try it now? If no luck you can go here. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5291011/14/Meant_to_Be
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
So the entire text of the stor is blocked out in white...I had to select it like I was going to cut and paste it to be able to read it!!! I got it done though!!!!!!!
I am really liking Maggie...it would be great if she could come and have supervised visits with the baby!!!!!
I fucking love Edward's daddy side.....I can't wait until you write something along the lines of them being out in public and Edward is referred to as Daddy......and since there is no name on the birth certificate............please????
I really would have liked to hear Edward let Renee have it more....I mean what he said was great, but I couldn't have held back at just "get the fuck out of here"......totally looking forward to more!!!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 13 Comeuppance
Another awesome chapter. Glad that Rene was told where to go! I'm glad that Bella is going to be safe and that Granny Volturi was so awesome. Can't wait to read the next update.
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