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Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2014 04:31 AM · On: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'

Wow the end, loved the story thanks abk

Reviewer: GrlWundur (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2014 01:47 PM · On: Birthday Wishes

Love it!

Reviewer: eiseman04 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 04:08 AM · On: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'

Such a beautiful story.  The detail you put into every chapter was amazing (i.e. Edward's house, information about burn victims, etc.).  I have to say that I really enjoyed the first epilogue more than the second, but that the second also touched my heart.  Thank you for taking time to write this amazing story.  I believe this is the third story of yours that I've read and I know I'll read the rest.

Cheers!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate all your kind words, especially since this was my first ever fan fic, so it's still a little rough around the edges, but I love it so.  I loved these two characters almost like they were my own children.  I really appreciate your kind thoughtful words.

Best,

Mcgt

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Epilogue #1

love the name! i'm not sure if i want to read the other epi.......is it sad???

Author's Response:

The other epi is kinda sad - but it shows a little bit more of the future.  If you want to skip it, that's okay too.  I wrote a future take that I'll post in early August under my outtake link.  Check out my profile for that and put it on alert if you want to know more about Kate & the Cullen/Masen clan.  LOL 

Thanks again for all your reviews.  I hope the time spent reading was well worth it.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 06:07 PM · On: At Last

awesome ending for an awesome story!!!! absolutly loved it!!!! great job! can't wait to read the epi!

Author's Response:

aw - glad you liked it.  Thanks for all the reviews.  I really do appreciate gettting each and every single one of them.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 05:40 PM · On: Hold On

Jacob is such a bitter dog!!!! i'm so glad she didnt have to suffer any more burns (i mean major scarring ones)

Author's Response:

Yes, he is - but there is a little more info in the future chapter about what his exact deal is/was

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 04:37 PM · On: Burn it Down

bat-shit CRA-ZY is right! omg, can someone get to her in time!!!!!

Author's Response:

It's a good think this is complete now hu?  You don't have to wait for the next chappy!!  Enjoy

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Stop This Train

oh jeez, the freak is in the house!!!!!!!! slip you hand in your pocket and dial 911!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 02:40 PM · On: Many the Miles

oh no, oh no, oh no! Victoria....she's too close!

Author's Response:

Yeah, closer than you think...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Save Me

that's just horrifying to go thru......very scary

Author's Response:

Yes, there was a reason that Edward wasn't ready to share.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 12:35 PM · On: TIme after Time

OMG! you're joking right! VICTORIA!?!?!?!?!?

Author's Response:

Um, yeah, it's a wild ride until the end.  Enjoy!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 12:00 PM · On: Lonestar

YUP, big time stress....but how are they going to cope with it for all that time he is away.......

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your reviews.  I hope you're enjoying it so far.  You're getting there.  Almost done... Enjoy the ride!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 11:39 AM · On: And so it goes...

oh crap! how is he supposed to concentrate now.......he's gonna have Emmett move her into his house till the tour is over!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 11:18 AM · On: And so it goes...

oh crap! how is he supposed to concentrate now.......he's gonna have Emmett move her into his house till the tour is over!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 09:59 AM · On: Tit for Tat

and nor freaking Rose has to pop his heavenly bubble.......i hope it's not big time problems though.....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Birthday Wishes

Yup , definitely a good birthday!!!! I see Rose is still being a bitch in the corner......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 01:03 AM · On: Heal Over

Oh man, the pain (emotional, mental and physical) that she had to go thru :(. And Edward, god knows what else that nut job Victoria did to him....... Did esmevjust walk in on them....???? Oops!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 12:07 AM · On: What an Honor

The concert was great and he sure made Bree's night!! How does that freak Victoria get into these places????

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Be Gentle To Me

Oh boy, Carlisle spilled the beans........hope Edward won't snub her tomorrow. I hate when PR reps think they have a say in their clients love lives....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 06:56 PM · On: Beautiful Disaster

I HATE ROSE!!!!!!!!!! WHAT A BITCH! grrrrr! damn, how is Edward gonna fix this....... :(

Author's Response:

ah yeah... I hated Rose in the books and kinda took it out on her character in this little fic.  - Enjoy the next chapter.  ;)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Breathless

very nice 1st date (except for Rose, i see problems with her in the future...) hope he wasn't followed!

Author's Response:

:-)  Glad you enjoyed their first date.  Yeah, Rose is kind of a bull in a china shop.  Thanks for taking the time to review - I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 04:36 PM · On: Another Place to Fall

YAY, A DATE!!!...lol oh jeez, shes gonna meet Em at the game, that should be interesting....

Author's Response:

Yes, she'll be meeting Emmett at the game, among others.  Yes, they have a date.  Good times are a'coming.

Enjoy!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 01:37 PM · On: The Interview

hmmm burn unit freaked her out.....dying to know the story there......

Author's Response:

:)  Thanks for the review.  Things will slowly be revealed - but chapter 9 &10 are the climax chapters.  Enjoy the ride!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 01:04 PM · On: She Works Hard for the Money

:D does he remember that they were her eyes from the dream???? I hope they got along in HS.....

Author's Response:

It will all be revealed.  An if you check out the outtake when you're done with the story, it's a peek at their lives in High School.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 12:21 PM · On: Moving On

good beginning! can't wait to read more!! Edward is eccentric how?

Author's Response:

Glad you've enjoyed the beginning.  Enjoy the rest.  You don't have to wait through any of the chapter cliffies.  LOL  Can't wait to hear what you think of the rest.

 

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