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Reviewer: niven (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 12
Thanks so much for updating, love your story and couldn´t wait for the next chapter. Loved the end with the lullaby and hoping Edward will leave Tanya behind very soon ;-)
Hope you update soon, can´t wait!
Author's Response: I believe in Happy ending.. but E/B still have to work on their happy ending!!!
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Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
Aww, I really want to know what Bella did.
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hmm. I like it! Very good!
I wonder if you will keep it in EPOV for the accident since Bella is kinda outta it.
=]
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very niice. I really like this story
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Preface
Wow, that was fabulous, way to hook someone into a story.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 12
This remains one of my favorite stories on the website! Your writing is fantastic, and you undeniably have a talent to draw in readers and spin a great plot. Maybe you can write a novel, like Bella!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: wow *blushes furiously* thank you so much!! I'm just happy you guys are still with me, I love writing, I just have to find a balance between this and RL..
Next chapter is coming soon!! :D
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Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 12
This update made my day!! I just had to go back & skim the ret of the story, its been sooo long. I love the storyline, & the way you write these characters!
MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: I am so sorry for the long wait... its just hard with school and all.. but im finding a balance! next chapter will be up soon!! :D
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Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
Love your story. Congrats on your nimination. Please upate soon. Soory not the biggest Fan of Tanya/Edward pairing. Please let him realize before it's to late he still loves Bella. I am sure youwill have it all work out but in the mean time it just sad.
Author's Response: LOL I don't think anyone is a big fan of the T/E... but I am a fervent B/E follower.. just give me time to set things straight!! :D
thanks for your review here and over at ff.net, I really appreciate you taking your time to review both sites!! thank you for your support!!
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Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 12
I just read this last night on FF. So I'm just letting you know that this is one of my favs.
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Thank you sooo very much for taking the time to review both sites!! it really means the world to me!!! I hope you like the next chapter ( which I am currently working on!! :D )
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Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
This is an interesting, lovely and intriguing story. I really like it.
Reviewer: meadow11 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Preface
i am loving this story! please please please update soon- i can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: kwatt (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love your story! Please, please, please update soon!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
ohhhh this was amazing
i loved it
this story is insane...it amazing!
cannottt wait to see what happens next! :]
Reviewer: han (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great story, i love the alteration between the past and present. Hopefully some more soon?
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
ohhhhmygooodnesss
this is amazing
i love it
godd i hope it gets better soon
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 6
Okay..seriously
im in love with this story!
ughhh..but its so confusing!
its amazinggg though!
Reviewer: princessamy1 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
I love this story!!! I am dying for the next chapter!!!!!!! Please tell me I do not have to wait much longer!!!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
So okay..i didnt know that the first thing i read was a preface.. And im wondering..is the preface the ending of the story? because i read a fanfic that gave the preface and it ended up being the ending of the story..im just wondering if thats how it is for this one? But ohman! i do like this a lot now :]
great chapter!
Author's Response: the preface is sorta the climax of the story!! but not exactly the ending! :D im glad you're liking it! hope it doesn't dissapoint!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Preface
Whooaaa..this is so confusing!
i kinda like it though..
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter. I felt so bad for Edward all through this chapter. Bella really wanted to get married and then she started to doubt herself... it was hard to read while I knew that Bella wouldn't go through with the wedding in the end.
I liked the conve between Bella and Alice. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
Well Good Luck on finals first of all!
It pains me to think Edward is with Tanya because she made him smile after Bella. I hope his lack of love for T makes him open up to a possible future with B.
Looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: villanova (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 11
I really love your writing and your story, a great balance between angst, fluff and lemony bits. Please update soon. Also all your efforts on "A Tale of Two Edwards" are worth it, it is definately the best fan fiction out there! Congrats to you and Becca. I cannot wait to see if it is going to be Masen (who I have a real soft spot for, he is just too funny) or Cullen who I would not say no to either. Don't make me wait tooooooo long.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh! I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Reviewer: Elektra1369 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 11
I liked this chapter alot. Good luck on your finals!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ooh, that bitchy Lauren and Jess....they make me so mad!
And I actually really liked Renee's reaction...much more like how I expected her to act in the book.
Good luck on finals!
xoxo Sarah
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