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Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love it! I wonder what's going to happppennn :)
Author's Response: im glad your liking the story :D!! thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oo, I finally read it and I'm hooked. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response: Finally! took you long enough... LOL kidding!! thanks for reading :D!! ps. I'll send you the draft tomorrow!
Reviewer: skaye5880 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
I just discovered this story today. I'm totally addicted!! I absolutely love this story. The only complaint I have is that there isn't more for me to read.
Author's Response: lol.. that would be my fault.. im trying to keep a balance between school and my writtin... school unfortunatelly is kicking my poor fics ass... don't worry the fic will fight back jejej! im so happy you liked the story!! :D i'll try to update as soon as I can. Thank you for reviewing :D
Reviewer: MidnightSunsLove (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
Eek! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to having to treat Bella :)
Author's Response: wow.. the pressure is really on... im getting nervous now.. but lets see how it turns out!! thank you for reading and reviewing!! :D
Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: thanks! could it be that they finally reunite?? :P lets see.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 02:00 PM · On: Preface
Wow, what a tumuluous first post. I was about to go to sleep and thought I'd read a bit before I went to bed. I immediately got back up and loaded the next chapter. Haha. Great job. Fantastic, beautiful, emotional writing. It hit me to the core. I cannot wait to read on!
Author's Response: lol the preface was bit of attention graving.... just enough to keep u wanting more ;).. thank you so much for taking the time to read an review! I hope you like the next chapters, I try to update on weekends :D
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 3
GOOD SMUT EVIL CLIFFY!
Author's Response: I KNOW!! all part of my evil plan to take over the world!! ... wait... no that's the other one!! oh yeah!! the chapter!! *grins evily* im sorry im evil like that... thank you for reviewing! :D
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
It was good. I am guessing though that she says no to the marriage proposal and that is part of the reason they broke up. Also, I am worried about Bella, I don't know that her doctor will be able to concentrate on what he needs to do...lol...keep them coming!
Author's Response: Bella has always been a bit weird about marriage.. we have that in common... to her credit they're fresh out of highschool... who in their right mind would think this would work?!?.. oohh right.. Edward... *sighs* but who is saying that's the reason?? not me :P!! I love your theories.. don't worry every chapter gets us closer to the thruth :D!! thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
Don't be nervous. It was great!
Author's Response: thank you!! im glad you liked it :D
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
I love the little arrow you draw to the review box. How can you say no to that? Great chapter! Your lemon was good. As you write them, you will get even better!
Author's Response: lol the arrow is just a suggestiong... glad its working :D. thanks for the encouragement.. now that I've written something I'm guessing it'll be easier and more fluent next time.. after all practice makes perfect :D! ;) thank you for reviewing!! :D
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh wow! I sit with tears and want to leave a really good review but don't know what to say! I really like how you've incorporated the back story of Bella and Edward but why did they break up? Did I miss something? Naturally I hate Tanya even when she's not an evil, coniving bitch! Your Tanya is not a bad person but she the wrong person to be with Edward! I trust that in time you will take care of that. This story is really good and I am already looking forward to your next update! Especially looking forward to the reunion of two souls that are destined to be together. In preparation of the angst that is certain to come I have my kleenex ready for the inevitable heart fail. I can handle it as long as there is a happily ever after in the future!
Author's Response: wow.. im in tears reading ur review! u really are way to kind! u haven't missed anything big.. I haven't comfirmed why they broke up.. but there are clues out there if you look for them. ur right. Tanya is not essentially evil in this fic. I hate nothing against bitchy Tanya, I actually enjoy her in most of the fics.. she's just the kind of character you love to hate... but not here... Tanya is complicated, don't take her for granted though... she will fight for what she thinks its hers, unfortunatelly for her, she'll have to discover the hard way Edward was never really hers. I will try to update as soon as I can. The pressure is really on for the big reunion, I'm afraid it might be somewhat disapointed.. but don't worry it gets better or should I say its gets more interesting as chapters progress! Thank you so so much for taking the time to review : D
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2008 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
oh i am loving this story. cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I'm so glas your liking it so far!! i hope you feel the same way once you find out what happens! thank you so much for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
smut was good. I HATE CLIFF HANGERS! gosh...o well..great chapter!
Author's Response: lol... sorry had to be done.. you didn't suffer for the other chapters till this one jeje... unfortunatelly cliffies are so you'll visit me again to see what happens :P... i will try to update soon! thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Reviewer: greenk08 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
update soon!!! such a cliff hanger!
Author's Response: i will try... thank you for reviewing :D
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 2
this is getting good, great chapter
Author's Response: thanks :D
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow, that sucks, sleep deprivation, not good
Author's Response: yup, actually a lot of car accidents happen because people are tired and not paying attention to the road. :D thank you for reading and reviewing :D hope ur liking the story
Reviewer: nicole37 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: thanks :D i'll try to update soon.
Reviewer: MrsC (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 08:18 PM · On: Preface
Damn it I knew I would be Bella!! What did she do to him? Your smut was just fine. Not to smutty but enough to get the picture. Nice job as always.
Author's Response: Why is everyone so sure Bella did something??!!... Remember in Harry Potter 3 everyone thought Sirius had killed Harry's parents and he didn't!... LOL, sorry I will only say that Edward made some pretty big mistakes as well. But you'll find out soon enough. I'm glad you liked it :D! I'm editing 4 as we speak.
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
GUH! MORE!
Author's Response: soon my friend... very soon... jeje thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
Smut was great! I need you too update soon! I love this story and want to read more! Pretty please :)
Author's Response: just because you asked nicely... lol sorry I really try to update soon, but I'm afraid if you read the first draft of all the chapters you wouldn't want to read anymore LOL... Thank you for reviewing!! :D
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
just found this. Loved it. you did a great job on the smut. you suck for leaving us there, though. please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm sorry I kinda tend to leave my chapters with cliffies... in my defense its to keep you interested :P ... thank you for reviewing! I'm so happy ur liking the story so far :D
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 3
hooray for smut! heehee. i thought you did an amazing job. steamy! makes me want to skip the gym & go straight home to my hubby & start a load of laundry. LOL! seriously, though, i think you're doing a great job with this. excited for future chapters!
Author's Response: I can't think of a better activity to wait for the clothes to wash and dry... you?! LOL! .. I really was nervous about that scene and debated whether to tone down the rating and save myself... but hey "practice makes perfect" right ?! LOL!! thank you so much for reviewing!! ps.. I say gym is overrated... there must be something you need to wash.. LOL!
Reviewer: psych926 (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2008 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
So the plot thickens . . . hurry up and update, I'm on the edge of my seat here.
Author's Response: excellent *does a mr. burns impressiong* lol!! just don't fall of ok! Im glad I'm finally getting to plot here after I layed out the backstory! I promise to update as soon as I can. I really do! thank you for reviewing :D
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Update Soon Please
Author's Response: I'll try!! I really do. :D thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
Good smut ;) I loved the flashback. They were obviously in love. I'm anxious to find out what happened between them. What did Bella do? I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Edward handles this and what happens when Bella wakes up.
Author's Response: yup lets see what happens when Edward has to treat her.... will he even be able to ?? lol... im so glad i didn't make a fool of myself with the smut.. after all reading smutt is my guilty pleasure :P jajaj thank you for reviewing :D
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