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Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
such a beautiful story. Are we approaching the time of the prologue in the "present" narrative yet? Love these characters and your twist on this plot, can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: bellavita79 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 12
When is this awesome story going to be updated? I just read all 12 chapters and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please post it soon.
Also I have read all your stories and I must say they are all amazing!!! Please please update this story soon!!!! Thank you.
Bella (it's my real name)
Reviewer: elsiemanville (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 12
When is the next update coming? I'm dyin' over here!
Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 12
::pretty please update:: :)
Reviewer: Pink Lemonade (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
I am new to Twilighted so I am a little late to the party! I am loving your story! Thanks so much for sharing! I am on the edge of my seat to catch up!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
Great chapter. The flashback was hard to read but the insight was good. Loved the E/B interaction. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
I don't know why you didn't like the chapter. I thought you wrote their emotions very well. I felt Bella's anger, and even Jacob's jealousy. Awesome job.
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
Aww, I have to say, I really like this.
However, something I noticed the last few chapters, the editing is horrific, tsk, so many errors in your writing. It tends to distract.
Reviewer: Mrs McCullen (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 12
Sooo glad you updated, I love love love this story, the flashbacks are amazing and totally add to the relationship edwaed and bella have.
Update more soon!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow!!!This was awsome...Please update again soon..Can't wait for more. ;D
Reviewer: kwatt (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 12
I am really enjoying the story - very excited to see what goes down when Tanya comes to town! Yikes! Thanks for sharing your work!
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
vey niicee
High Five
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 12
Awe Edward needs to dump Tanya and he and Bella need to figure their shit out. Alice needs to confront the two of them and tell them about her pushing them into their wedding, because while yes the insecurites were already there, with Bella at least, Alice brought them to the surface by pushing them into the wedding plans and everything. It is so sad that Edward hasn't played his piano in a while and the first thing that he plays is Bella's lullaby. I hope that with age, Edward has learned not to be so jealous of men who are friends with Bella, Jake especially, because that pushed their relationship further apart as well. Anyways can't wait to read more and can't wait for Bella and Edward to get together...hopefully otherwise I'll be sad!
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
I'm so glad you updated!
I loved Bella's comment about Edward pissing on her. The flashbacks add so so much to this story- I've seen flashbacks done really badly before but you pull it off so well :)
Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 12
YAY! You updated!!!! And such an awesome chapter too. Can't wait for your next one :D
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oh my god..
This chapter
This story
Your writting
I love it all so much..its amazingggg
i have missed this story and was so excited when i saw you updated!
i forgot just how much i loved it and how amazing it is..now im like jumping up and down waiting to see what happens next!
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 12
AWESOME~ I'M GLAD YOU'RE BACK=)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 12
It really does sound like Bella was forced into a wedding she didn't want by Alice. And "past" Edward sounds really controlling. All of that probably combined to make for the painful breakup :-( I'm hoping that the Tanya issue gets resolved in the near future.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 12
It has been a long time. I'm glad to see Alice conspiring to let them feel this through. But, how many hoops will there be? They jumped through so many in the past. If it isn't easy, will they truly fight for that love?
Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
Yay!!! You should have seen me doing a little happy dance when I saw that you finally updated... :o) This really is one of my absolute favorite fics ever and I just don't know why it still doesn't get more attention...
But anyway... this chapter was brilliant! I love how you describe the gravity between Edward and Bella. But I think it was actually good that you didn't let the kiss happen to easily or to fast (though I hope it'll happen next chapter ;-)) because it seems that Edward has to regain his faith in Bella after what she did to him in their past... and then he's got to deal with his sense of duty towards Tanya and the question if he's ready to let her go completely (I personally think so!). Nevertheless they seem to be on the right path now. That's awesome!
The memories of Bella and Edward fighting and her developing (wrong) feelings for Jake and obviously getting "cold feet" was really painful and so sad... I hope they can finally get over it and Edward will forgive Bella what she did.
I'm sooooooooooo looking forward to the next chapter - If I didn't say it before: You're really talented and just a great writer!! So of course I voted for you (both, FIWWM and TOTE) at the Indie TwiFics - you absolutely deserve it!
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
I'm guessing she ran out of the wedding or something, like said no instead of 'I do' hmmm, very excellent.
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
I very much enjoy this story.
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
Haha, I love the bickering between Jake and Edward.
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
The ending is perfect. But, my favorite part is still, "You remember." GAH. I heart your Edward. This makes me want to wrap up, 'Unknown'. :))
Glad to help you out on your fantastic story anytime, babe!! I luff you even though you piss me off with your Jacob-ness! Haha.
<3.
Author's Response: LOL.. YEII!! GO FINISH UNKNOWN!! right this second... although I know next chapter is going to kill me!! I will cry my eyes out.. but it needs to be done!!
also give me some ATOTE goodness woman!!! I need my Masen and Cullen
Reviewer: njochara (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 3
wow lol he he he he made me blush !! I so do not want to go to bed till i have read this all lol
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