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Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Open Book
Wonderful chapter. I just love this part of their relationship!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I rather like this part of their relationship, too. Though if I'm honest, I'm 250K words in, and I'm liking *that* part of their relationship as well. They're still surprising each other...
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: princesspeach (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:02 AM · On: The Best Policy
Really enjoying your story! I wondered how on earth Edward could find Bella fascinating if he could read her mind as easily as anyone else's...great twist that it is not so much that her thoughts is all that interesting (although her thoughts are certainly nicer than those of most people her age), but that being inside her mind in which he finally is able to shut out all of the superfluous noise and find peace.
Edward needs to get over his little stalking habit, though! lol!
Author's Response: ::grins:: I'm glad you like it so far, and I hope I'll end up answering any questions you have about the story.
And yes, the stalking thing - weird no matter what species you belong to.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:47 AM · On: The Best Policy
I really love this take of Twilight! I have no words, I just adore this story and can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: Words or no, I'm glad you're enjoying the fic. Thank you for reviewing. :)
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:40 AM · On: First Sight
I've always wondered what it would have been like if Edward could hear Bella's thoughts. Thanks for writing this. (I love your Edward)
Author's Response: :) I'm rather fond of my Edward as well. (He's even better than the real thing.) I've always wondered what kind of impact Edward's asinine behavior had on his family, and I hope to answer that question, as well...
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:41 AM · On: The Best Policy
I simply adore this concept. I think things would have been so much better if he could have read her mind...
Thanks for udating!
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you're enjoying the fic. Next chapter should be up soon; it's in the queue.
Things would have been very different if he could interact with her as he is able to interact with everyone else... It's not really a matter of reading her mind, I think. It's that mind-reading is like any of his other senses. Imagine having to deal with this without being able to use one of your senses... I mean, ouch.
Ouch.
S
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:24 AM · On: The Best Policy
nice
Author's Response: thanks
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:23 AM · On: The Best Policy
Loving this! Loving this! More please....quickly! :-)
Author's Response: Okay! And, Thanks!
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:47 AM · On: The Best Policy
I totally LOVE this story! It is very well written and I have to say that I'm enjoying this version by far more than the original if thats possible! I'm completly surprised by how you have approached this by your different viewpoints and ideas. In a way it seems much more belivable. You've have got me totally hooked. I love your writing style and how you are protraying Bella and Edward as well. I've put this in my Fav list and I'm looking forward to more chapters. I'd have to say that at this moment your pretty much in my top 10 favorites for stories that I have read hear. I hope many more find this fic and read it and that others will recomend this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely rating and review. I appreciate both.
I'm very glad to hear how much you are enjoying the story and I hope that your enjoyment will only increase as the story develops. Please let me know what you make of the future chapters! The next chapter even now is in the queue, so it should be posted shortly.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: angela2805 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:48 AM · On: The Best Policy
I really like this story. I like most that he can get into her mind like that! And that shes okay with it!
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you like the story. I hope your enjoyment only increases as the story develops.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:46 AM · On: The Best Policy
This is very interesting, will look for update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you find it of interest. I hope that continues.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: Discordia28 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:35 AM · On: The Best Policy
I've just found this story and I am loving it. The characters are so spot on it feels so authentic. I usually struggle with AU as it doesn't seem to hit the mark but yours certainly has. Please keep posting I am now completely addicted!
Author's Response: :) Well, it's my aim to hit that mark, actually, so please feel free to call me on it when you feel as if I don't make it, or if it's a near miss. I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far, though. The next chapter should be up soon; it's in the queue.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:55 AM · On: The Best Policy
this is interesting :)
Author's Response: i'm glad you think so :)
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:44 PM · On: The Best Policy
Another great chapter!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks! Next chapter is in the queue. :)
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:55 PM · On: The Best Policy
This story is great. Such a different take on everything, and I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for letting me know. I hope that only continues. :)
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:44 PM · On: The Best Policy
aww i really like how bella helped edward and i was a little worried when he said he had to leave - i was omg not again lol - anyway love the story - was wonder if jacob is going to be a big part of thia story or not so big like in twilight?? - cant WAIT for next chapter asap
Oh n u get a 10 yay =D
Jackie
Author's Response: :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for rating and reviewing; I appreciate it. And... yes... Jacob is going to have a role to play, but you'll have to see as it unfolds... Things are going to end up a bit differently in my version than in Meyer's version...
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: Lan (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Open Book
i cannot wait for the nex chapter!!!!
a very diferent history with Bella's unblock mind....
CUTE and SWEET!!
update soon pliz!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far, and I hope that only continues. Don't worry, the next chapter should be up soon. It is already in the queue, and needs only to be validated by my twilighted beta.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: Bad Kitty (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Open Book
Just found this and I love your twist on the tale!!!! Really can't wait to see what you write next!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story thus far. I hope that only continues. The next chapter is up and in the queue, so you should see it soon.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: bucephala (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Open Book
This story is rather beautiful and sweet. I really like what you've done with Edwards change of character.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're liking the story so far. I hope that only intensifies as the story develops. Let me know. :)
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Open Book
I love this story. It is so refreshing to read a story where Edward is not all angsty, stubborn, and looking to deny himself and Bella eternity together. I can't wait to awtch their relationship progress!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it as it develops. Yes, I don't think that all of Edward's negativity is an essential part of his character any more than it is an essential part of any of our personalities. It's situational, and I like to think I altered the situation just enough to afford him some leeway. Let me know if I'm convincingly doing that, or not...
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: carolinabelle (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Open Book
I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I am really glad to know that. Thank you for telling me. More should be up soon - chapter 4 is in the queue now.
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: _LuvTwilight_ (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Open Book
I actually like this version so much better than Twilight! I love that he knows how she feels, and maybe just maybe the timing will playout right for them. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: :) I feel the same way. I'm 250K words into it, and I feel the same way. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it as the story develops. :)
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Open Book
soooooooooo love it
Author's Response: I'm so glad. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story as it develops. :)
Peace,
Sare
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Open Book
Awesome, as always!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Open Book
I like it!
Author's Response: I'm glad!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Open Book
i really like it - i couldnt wait for your next chapter - i love how u still have thing in the story that had happen in the 'orignal' story cant wait for next chapter - i cant wait to see how everyone reacts to b & e be so call 'friends' - i was a wondering are u staying with the twilight story line or are u going to drift away from it 'so to speak' - enither way i love it i really love ur story cant wait asap
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I put the next chapter in the queue, so it should be around shortly. My validation beta on Twilighted seems to get through them in about a week's time, so expect it, I would guess, next weekend.
About my closeness to canon... weeeeell... you'll just have to stick around and find out. :)
Peace,
Sare
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