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Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:26 PM · On: The Best Policy
This is heavenly. Funny and charming with just the right amount of vampire issues from Edward. I've never liked the whole massively angsty, self-loathing thing with Edward in the saga and in most of the fan fic.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Several Levels
I had this story in my favorites for a long time. I didn't know why I chose it, because the title and summary were throwing me off. I'm glad I finally got past that. I cannot believe how good this story is. I cant believe that Alice is not a cock blocker in this story. I love the fact that Edward can read Bella's mind. I love that it was pointed out that Edward has to live in the 21st century in regards to sexuality and marriage. It makes sense that Edward would have researched his sperm before engaging in intercourse.
I reads like a real relationship between two teenagers. Great story. This story should have won several awards.
Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 10:14 PM · On: The Best Policy
It's so sweet and I am enjoying it more and more. By far one of the best fan fictions that I have read and trust me, I've read zillions.
Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Open Book
I am very much so enjoying the story. You are doing a great job writing for Edward. I also am enjoying that he can read her mind, very unique.
Keep it up.
Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:24 PM · On: First Sight
Fantastic job. I am enjoying reading it and find it funny at times. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Reviewer: khandy4rmjmaica (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 10:00 AM · On: First Blood
you're plot is so original, and the story is sooo beautifully written. its quite refreshing, give the monotony i've been subjected to lately. Keep up the good work
Reviewer: khandy4rmjmaica (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:12 AM · On: The Best Policy
love this story
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 03:29 AM · On: His Cake
OMG I thought it was so sexy and hot. And I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 03:28 AM · On: His Cake
OMG I thought it was so sexy and hot. And I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: edward1991 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:07 AM · On: First Sight
DAMN.......CANT WAIT FOR MORE TO COME.....I LIKE THIS FUCKING STORY........I CAN TELL U MORE BUT I GOTTA RELIEVE MYSELF NOW
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:14 PM · On: His Cake
Holy Toledo!!! I'm speeachless!!!! I think I'm going to need a break after reading this! Aha ya ya! This has got to be one of the best lemons I've ever read!
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Life Continues
I really love this take on the story! It is so much more thought out and realistic! Heh. Thanks for writing! Your awesome!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:24 PM · On: The End of The Beginning
Wow I liked the way you did Twilight this way. Once i read the books I wished that it would just get to the point, but if that was the case then the books would have be shorter.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Bonfire of the Vampires
I loved it. You are doing such a good job. I loved the way this is turing out.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:42 AM · On: His Cake
LoL, birthday boy should be happy as hell. :-D
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Bonfire of the Vampires
Nicely done! I don't think you could have done that better! Kudos!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Nothing Says High School
Holy cow that was hot an very good. Dang i loved the way you are doing this story more and more.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:25 PM · On: First Sight
Oh wow I like the way you have done the story so far. This is how I have always wanted it to go.
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:42 PM · On: First Blood
Well this bodes for a much better relationship with Jake, and hopefully sans imprinting on Bella's kid! I am so excited to see where you take this! :) You're such a talented writer, thanks for writing!!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:19 PM · On: His Cake
DAYUM!!!!!!!!
I've spent the last two days absorbed in this story. It's utterly amazing.
I LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:47 AM · On: His Cake
Wow ZESTY!
I was so damn glad to see this chapter! I have been waiting and waiting for you to get the second book out! What a great Christmas present!
Loved it!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:18 AM · On: His Cake
My pretty vampire, I love my pretty vampire... Although when Bella thought Ooh, I like that, I was momentarily taken out of the story because I could 'hear' Johnny Depp as Captain Jack Sparrow saying it. And that's a bad, bad, bad mental image (not Johnny, but the thought of Captain Jack/Edward *shudder*). But then Big & Rich's 'Save a Horse, Ride a Cowboy' popped into my head and it was all right.
Wow! I've been waiting for the continuation of this story for what seemed like ages, but I wasn't expecting a chapter so full of lemons that it seemed like a pwp! Not that that's a bad thing...
You know, I'm wondering about how you're gonna deal with Bella's 18th birthday. And who's gonna win the battle to name a baby Renesmee. Has Edward told her of his dislike of that name yet?
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 11:40 PM · On: A Tasty Snack
What a delightful first romp! It was a pleasure to read, and dearest Alice! How sweet of her!
I can't wait for the meeting of Bella, hopefully she does get to spend a bit more time with the Cullen family.
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Nothing Says High School
I did not snort my soda when Alice mentioned condom testing, but it was close! Hehe. I am completely in love with your witty and beautiful writing! I can't believe I have not stumbled onto you before! Sigh, Thanks for writing! I think thoughtful lemons are wonderful. I think the speed at which Bella and Edward are moving is about right for the emotional connection they have.
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 09:50 PM · On: The Best Policy
Whew that would have been a weird chapter to write! You did a great job! I absolutely adored the Cullen family interaction! You did a great job staying true to all of their characters! Thanks for writing! I'm off to read more!
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