Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
ack! noooooooooo
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Thank you for another fabulous chapter. This is totally my favorite fic. Please don't keep us waiting for your update!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
OMG! I need to know more. I want these two to get together in person so bad. It's good that she's being honest and I hope that it stirs up emotion in him to want to tell her he wants more. I think they would be great together. Please update soon. I'm totally addicted.
Reviewer: Brittbee21 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
oh my god, kill me why dont you! this story makes my heart want to pound out of my chest! i love it! please hurry with more!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
omg!!!!!! can't wait for more!!!! this story is hot!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Aaaargh! Bella could have handled that so much better. But, in typical Bella fashion, she doesn't fight for what she really wants.
She could have said "a group of us are going out", but nooooooooooo, she has to go and hurt Edward's feelings.
So, what is Jaspar's last name? Is he Edward's brother?
And, when, oh, when, is Bella going to fly to Chicago to see the fine doctor? Or, when is she going to be "sent" to Chicago for an interview or something and be in a car accident (or some other injury) and be sent to the ER so Edward can save her life?
BTW, this was your best chappie yet, you did the web cam dialogue wonderfully!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Oh.... That was a painful ending to the chapter. I mean, sure, there's been nothing "said" or anything, but still...
OUCH.
I am totally, completely loving how you're weaving this, though. You're working with great limitations in your story parameters and it's working brilliantly.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
I so loved that they finally got to see each other. Gotta love the web cams!
I could understand Bella's thinking and feelings. I did appreciate that she was being honest with him. I just wish she would be honest with him about how she is feeling too.
Can't wait to see Edward's POV.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
my heart actually ache when i real the word no from bella's text. i just feel that edward would be crushed with that. a turning point indeed. i am super excited for the next update. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Wow!
Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
What will Edward think when now that he knows Bella is going on a date? Great chater, really love this story. Thanks and hope you can update soon!
Reviewer: jacoblover98 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
omfg that made me come that was so smexy i love this chapters
Reviewer: ArlynG (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Can you make them see each other? Make Edward go to a conference in LA or something? Please..... and make it quick... the wait is unbearable...
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Aww. More please?
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
i loved this chapter. please update again soon. thanks
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Good chapter! I think Edward is going to freak. Poor guy.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
oh no, Edward will be so sad! I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: LOVEDfelicia (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Well don't stop there! x] Update soon! :]
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
What can I say. Intense, sensual, sexy, sultry, teasing, and pleasure. Nice to hear Bella's POV on first glance of Edward through web cam. I know Edward enjoyed the slow motion up her body. Bella's reaction made her feel sexy. Encouraged her to continue and add more teasing sultry behavior. I can tell why they don't sleep at night. How do they keep awake during the day at job or school? Alice making another blind date for Bella to double with her and Jasper. Alice determined to have Bella meet Jasper and go out to have fun. Alice said it's only dinner. What can happen right? So Bella text messaged Edward that she was going out. He wanted to know girl or boy? Bella responded boy which was only 1/2 of the truth. She is actually going out with a girl, her boyfriend, and a blind guy date. Very curious what Edward's reaction will be. Jealous, disappointment, anger, frustration, maybe even rejection. Bella should have explained in more detail how date set up and also physical difficulty to continue after work/school. Bella feels awkward telling him even though he is a doctor of her currently experiencing monthly occurance. Going to throw a wrench in things by her text.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Great chapter! Hope you figure out a way to get these two together soon. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
webcams turned out great, love that she is starting to think relationship, can't wait to read epov
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
I'm trusting, she is at least being realistic at where they are at in this relationship and how the distance is a real issue down the road.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Why does Bella think she needs to make decisions for the both of them. I think she would be surprised what the good doctor thinks about the same topics! I do not get the feeling he will be too happy about this situation!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Nice... Great first chapter.
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
Love the webcam!! I like that she was honest with him. Maybe he will get jelious and make the next move...;0)
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