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Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

aww, sweet!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

I am so thrilled that they finally confessed their feelings.  It will interesting to see how their relationship grows and changes since their have shared their feelings. 

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Awwww.....that was so unbelievably gorgeous! The build up made me giggle because Edward and Bella were both pussy-footing around, trying to avoid putting their emotions & hearts on the line, but knowing they needed to tell the other how they feel.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Ella_Jacobs (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Awesome!! luved it

cant improve .. i was engaged the whole time.. im sucked in...

more more more!! *laughs*

Ella

Reviewer: obsessivebehaviors (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

You’re killing me (through tear stained eyes at 5:30 a.m. ET). They can’t wait 3 long months to hold each other again.  Please tell me there’s a compromise somewhere?

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Aww! That was so sweet!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

awww so cute!

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

why it is so hard to say ?

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Great chapter! I'm glad they both finally said it. I wonder how much Alice is going to freak out when she hears about Edward. I'm anxious for the trip to Chicago. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Purple Akua (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Yay yay yaaaayyyy!!!! I LOVED this chapter!!! You have no idea how nice it is to not have drama between them, where they actually talk and are on the same page about stuff. That is what I love most about this story, the realness of their relationship, and this chapter totally sealed it for me. The little anxious drama you included is just the right amount. :) And oh my God, Rose going to Chicago too!?! That will be so fun--I can't wait for it!! Glad to hear the next chapter will be up soon!!

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

awwww, I love this story

Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

amazing chapter! with or without lemons this fic is a work of art. i enjoy every word, it's very well written. i am so looking forward for the next chapters, wish this story would be endless.

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Best chappie yet, and it didn't even have any lemons!!! How is that even possible??? Thanks for not drawing out getting them to say 'I love you' any longer. I hate that level of drama. Can't wait until Rose meets Emmett. So, where's Jazz?

Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

I'm all choked-up...this was sweet.

 

Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

such a sweet chapter, I need more.  really enjoying this story

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Great chapter

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

In a lot of ways Rose was the best person to tell how she met Edward.  She's a little freer in that mode of thinking.  Alice would have freaked out and been all over the place.  Bringing up why this good or bad.  But Rose can handle it and once she saw what he looked like, it made even more sense.  Edward's talk with Emmett produced the same results.  Both Rose and Emmett told them to tell the other how they feel.  It's great that they feel the same way about each other.  I don't know how Edward's going to feel about Rose insisting on traveling with Bella to Chicago.  But it will be great for Bella to see his home, his work place, meet his family.  Eventually he'll need to travel with her back home to meet her dad.  She only has one more semester, not really that long of a time period.  Classes start in January and usually end in May. So 5 months left of school.  Edward still has to follow his residency until completion.  Looking forward to Emmett's and Rose's reaction that Edward and Bella feel the same way about each other.  Wonder will sparks fly when Rose meets Emmett.  Only time will tell.

Reviewer: chishi09 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown

Aww.... that was sooo sweeet!<3

Reviewer: WorldInMyEyes (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

*Sigh* I love that they finally admit how they feel about on another:) Great story! Can't wait to see where they go from here.

Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Very beautiful chapter... I loved it..

Reviewer: owenic (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

Fantastic chapter.  They both needed this so much.  =)

Can't wait for the next one. 

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

keep it coming!  I can't wait to see how these two work it out.  

Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

keep it coming!  I can't wait to see how these two work it out.  

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

I am lame enough to admit that I had to read this chapter again! I reviewd on FF, but it was so sweet, I wanted to let you know again! These two are so perfect and I would love to see more Emmett too!
 

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality

That was a great chapter.  Not every chapter even though it's exciting, does not need a lemon.

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