Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Wow! Damn she did awesome job at spicing things up.
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
What an awesome job Bella did at seducing Edward. I can totally see why Edward likes the rewards of Bella's shopping with Rose. I think every house should come equipped with a stripper pole. After all, its great exercise right!?!?!!
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
I was wondering how their first time with video sex, since they got back, would go. Bella jumped right in with both feet. i liked all the pics she would send Edward. I thought it was fun torturing him like that.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Great chapter. Love how they are coping at this point. I can't wait till she gets to go see him. Will Rose be making the trip out with her and possibly meeting one big brut of a man??
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
bella is so hot! i hope that rose goes with her and she likes emmet! will edward propose to her?
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Love this fic! You're doing an awesome job, and I really appreciate all the effort you're putting in to make it great! I just started reading 2 days ago & have read as much as possible to catch up... Can't wait for another update!! :)
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
That was hot! And sweet! (:
Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Wow, if that was your dash of spice I'd love to see what your real hot stuff is like??? Yum. Poor Edward, being away from Bella when she's being such a minx. Loved the chair! Didn't know such things existed. Phew it certainly got hot in here....
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Wow. Holy f*ck that was hot. Makes me want to go shopping for umm...accessories and stage my own private show. *L* Will be interesting to read of Bella meeting the 'rents and *gasps* Emmett! hehehe I'm not sure he'll be able to keep his mouth shut about having seen the pictures.
Reviewer: Jezzelbell (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Can't wait Can't wait.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
sweet and sexy excellent.
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Awesome!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Awesome!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
awww so cute and wow who would have thought bella would be so good at the rping haha you are brilliant doll seriously i love you :D cant wait for more :D
Reviewer: krazyk85 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Love it!! I'm sooo pervy. Nice job :)
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
nice job
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Being away from their webcam for a week while Edward was on call. Just plain torture. Rose had a marvelous idea to go shopping with Bella. Buying all the sexy new lingerie. Drove Edward nuts at work. Having a wonderful surprise moving around a brass pole. Having him just watch and not be able to touch was extremely difficult for Edward. Great role playing. Both enjoyed it immensely as well as the reader. Time for Bella and Edward is dragging until their next visit together. But with Bella and school work will help her pass the time. Not that they won't miss each other, but Spring Break will arrive soon. Edward's parents will be surprised he has a girlfriend. Emmett after seeing a couple of pictures of Bella is wondering why Edward isn't with her in LA. Edward has more sense to stay where he is for now until Bella graduates to decide where they want to settle together. She'll need to work somewhere and Edward can follow a doctor can work anywhere.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
awww so cute ... it sucks to be so far away! i know :( it didnt work out for me but this guy was a jerk and not edward ... i think i would have felt absolutley dead inside if it was edward ...
Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Love your story and those two are so lovable. I can relate because I met my husband ( of 7 years now) online as well, just not under the same circumstances as those two. So I can relat eto the seperation angst. I guess that's what I adore about your story. It brings back memories, it's real and so well written. I can't wait for the next chapter.
:Michelle:
Reviewer: dragonlady (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Yummmm.
Uhm, I better go change my panties now....
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
I need a cigarette. Damn that was hot! lol
Reviewer: Purple Akua (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Steamy chapter!! I loved how Bella spiced things up. Good for her!! I'm so happy they're transition into the boyfriend/girlfriend phase was smooth, but now it has me wondering about what they'll do next! You hinted at it a lot in the last few chapters, and it really makes me curious about their future living situation. I guess spring break has to go well first though; I'm so excited to read about it!! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
poor edward and bella, such wonderful torture, can't wait for the next one :-)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
This. Was. Awesome.
Wow. I love how they did the big declaration. Awesome.
This was a charming chapter. I am enjoying their desperation, and their playfulness.
AND the pole dancing. lol
Emmett was fun. I so look forward to his meeting Bella. lol I do hope he'll be a gentleman in person!
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
holy sh** that was awesome. I like rose taking bella shopping. loved the pole dancing, especially loved the dildo on the chair. Phew that was hot, please post more soon hugs clare x
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