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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Wow Rose! Way to steal Bella's thunder lmao. I want to wake up to Edward in my bed :)
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
WHAT! I figured Rose and Em would end up sharing a bed, maybe by the second night, but marriage? After that speech she gave about distance, and not really knowing someone that long...wow! Well, this takes the story in a better direction, now Bella can go w/Rose...Can't wait to see Edwards reaction...
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
that was just to perfect i loved it
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
What!!! Damn, I wish we had heard more of that conversation from last night. The sex I just knew would happen, but married. What a turn of events.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
OMG, Holy Shit is right! LOL! Great chapter.
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Wow - did not see that wedding coming - at all! I love how genuinely in love your Bella and Edward are; curious to see how this will play out!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Bella and Edward get along so well apart and even more when together. They just fit. No awkwardness between them either online or in person. Rosalie and Emmett are like oil and water. Tension, hostile, yelling, insults, etc... between the two. Shocking after the huge fight in the restaurant over dinner and then later the fight in the hotel suite. to find the following morning that Rosalie and Emmett had the most amazing sex ever and are married. Bella is in shock. What???? Wait until Edward hears the news. Bella was concerned about Rosalie's question if he would still be interested in Bella if she wasn't 1/2 across the country. She asked Edward if she lived close to him would he still look lovingly and adoringly at her and still want her all the time. Edward was stunned. He told her he would always want her and loves her. He doesn't take home just anybody. Hasn't since college. His family will love Bella. June is the end of the semester, Rose is moving to Chicago. Bella hasn't made up her mind. Edward and Bella have been trying to visit during her free time from school. Next chapter should be very interesting among the four of them.
Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Holy Shit is right. OMG, I loved it, and can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
love this chapter. did not see that ending of the chapter coming. how come that wasn't b&e? can't wait till update,please try not to take as long as the last one, i love this story.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
I so enjoy when Edward and Bella are together. I look forward to it almost as much as they do. They really have an incredible relationship.
I was very surprised by the ending. I expected Emmett and Rose to sleep together but never thought that they would get married.
I am excited to see what happens next!
Reviewer: sherry0129 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
I love your story so far! I just started reading it. But i can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: MariahMae (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
You HAVE to write a one-shot of rosalie and emmett. I'm so interested in that night, it's rediculous! Loved the chapter, btw, as per usual :)
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
holy shit is right. I kind of secretly hoped that Bella and Edward were going to go get hitched at a Elvis marrige shack but did not see rose and em doing it.
Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
LOL I thought Edward & Bella would be the ones to get married in Vegas.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
So good, and oh God! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Wow! That's so good! Love it!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Wow-I kind of expected Rose adn Emmitt to get together, but not through marriage! Glad to read a new chapter...I've missed this story.
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
HOLY SHIT BATMAN! Thats a twist alright! lol!
Reviewer: Blaise (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
OMG...I expected the hate turning into a passionate night for Rose and Emmett but did not expect that gold band. How will Bella react to this...especially in terms of her and Edward's relationship? Can't wait to see the reaction and fallout to this.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
mmm i wonder if that will inspire bella to move to chicago also.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Holy shit indeed! LOL! I would've thought that Bella and Edward would've done that. Well this might help Bella to decide to go to Chicago.
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
I just spend the first part of my day off reading you awesome story. I can not wait to see where things go from here. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
OMG, never saw the marriage thing coming from them!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
I adore this chapter! Bella & Edward together are amazing, but Rose marrying Emmett.....genius!!! I am always so happy when you update my favorite story!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Ok, didn't see that coming! Despite the fact they were in Vegas, and although I knew Emmett and Rosalie would eventually combust, I didn't see the elopement.
Edward and Bella are still so sweet together -- are you gonna keep them apart for much longer? They may be able to handle it, but I don't know if I can!
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