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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence
So real life is starting to intrude in their relationship bubble. Edward needs to work on his work life balance. Rose and Emmetts sudden wedding has obviously raised issues for Edward and seeing as though he's not talking to Bella about it she needs to talk to him, not wait for him to say something, if she does that hell would probably freeze over first. These two have alot of talking to do. I think the lack of personality in Edward's apartment is saying that he just stays there, he just exists. Bella's been bringing him back to life and now he's been knocked back down on his arse again by the wedding and whatever else is going on in his head, aaarrrgghhh!!!! Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Viva Las Vegas ~ Rose and Emmett outtake
Well Emmett certainly got the measure of Rose. I wasn't expecting their pasts to have been so difficult but you can see how that would shape a person, thank God they found each other. I can't wait to see Edward's face when he finds out *snigger*. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 16 ~ Surprise!
Ok, I just lost my eyebrows in my hairline somewhere. Holy Shit! is right, I didn't see that one coming, they go from hating and arguing with each other to married and mind blowing sex in one night, fast work guys. Rose now has no room to talk about Bella and Edward moving fast. Anyway I'm going to send out a search party for my eyebrows and move on to the next chapter, boy am I glad that I haven't had to wait for this to update. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 ~ Change in Plans
Together again at last. I get the feeling that Rose and Emmett are going to be spending quite alot of time together whilst Bella and Edward are 'otherwise occupied.' LOL. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 14 ~ A Dash of Spice
Wow! These two are certainly inventive, that was hot. So Emmett has seen a photo or two of Bella, got more that he bargained for there, and they will meet when Bella goes to Chicago, that should be interesting. Can't wait for Bella to meet Edward's parents, has he told them about her yet and how they met? Another interesting conversation. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 13 ~ Reality
Yay, they told each other finally. Love this story. Jane x
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?
I was hoping that Edward and Bella would talk and it would get better. Thankfully, Edward has a mother to help him pull his head out of his ass.
I hope that Bella is okay and that Edward is able to explain his thoughts/feeling better. (Once Bella is fine.)
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 17 ~ Unbearable Silence
I wonder what is going on with Edward. His behavior is making me nervous.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 12 ~ It's So Hard to Say Goodbye
Stop thinking Edward and admit it, you are in love with her. Looks like they have a lot to discuss, they need to define their relationship and decide what they are going to tell their families and friends that they are comfortable with, but most of all they need to say 'I love you' to each other. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 11 ~ Cherish the Memories
Awww, I love these two, I don't want them to be apart, please make spring break come quickly I don't think they are going to cope too well being apart, they've really grown close during this week. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:03 AM · On: Haiti Outtake - Promise Kept
PHEW! *fanning myself* I think I need a cold shower after that. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 10 ~ Here in New York
Oh Bella don't think of it as one day down, that only makes you look more towards the end rather than enjoying the now. How are these two going to explain each other to their friends and families, it could make for some awkward conversations if they say we met on the internet - hmmm, how exactly? Lol. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
THUD! That was hot! Together at last for a whole week, something tells me that these two are going to have a hard time saying goodbye at the end of the week. Jane x
Reviewer: IzzyBCullen (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?
I love love love this story.
I impatiently await more!
Great writing!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 8 ~Anxiety
Yay they're together, finally, let the good times roll. I love this story, it's so different from all the others. Jane x
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?
Good. Let Edward suffer for being dumb.
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?
OMG WTF HAPPENED AND I LOVE EDWARD BUT HE NEEDS TO GET HIS HEAD OUT OF HIS ASS BEFORE HE LOOSES EVERYTHING
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 ~ Not Backup
Well I'm glad they're back talking and Bella came clean about her reasons for going on the date. At least they both know now that they have more that casual feelings for each other. I'm looking forward to them meeting, could be interesting, in more way than one. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 6 ~ Turning Point
I think Bella is kidding herself when she says that her and Edward have no commitments to each other, she says she feels an attatchment to him, well surely that brings a commitment with it, or is that just me? I think Edward is going to be very hurt over this and it may push him to believe that not only can he not have a full on relationship with a woman who is there that he can't even have a cyber relationship either. This could be a car crash waiting to happen. Jane x
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?
Edward you're such a dork. You know you hurt the woman you love and then what do you, you turn around and hurt her again. You don't explain why you felt doubt about the future. You lumped her into a group of woman without realizing this was Bella. She traveled to meet you in New York for New Year's. Made arrangements to meet you over Spring Break. You both made sure to contact the other daily by some means of communication. Since you talked with Emmett, you've hardly said anything to her. The only time you tell her you're not sure if she'll be in your future. Living together, marriage, children. Look first thing she said was living together. Remaining as a committed couple was all you needed to mention to her. She wasn't looking for a marriage proposal or a plan of having 2.5 children, white picket fence. She wanted to know what you felt and where you saw the relationship going from here. She'll go through school and without some idea of where you both were heading as a couple to make plans for after graduation. You didn't give her anything. "I don't know." Slap in her face, like she's nothing but something to get off with either in person or on the computer. Saying "I love you," doesn't mean anything just words because you're not living up to them. Those are words to get physical with her. They have no substance or reality. You treated her like she was a kept woman while with you. Just there for your pleasure, but not as a person you adored. You better get your buns to California. Too bad you didn't take a flight out after talking to your mom. You had to wait for her to be in the hospital. Great going guy. You need to get your act together. I don't blame Bella for leaving and going home. I would have left you after you went into the hospital on your vacation time. You would have found a dark apartment with nothing. Not even a note I left. Now you know how she has felt for days without your affection, speaking, etc... She felt like she was on an island all alone. You were locked in a tower with no way to reach you. You left her floundering in the nothingness.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 5 ~Desire
I knew she'd cave eventually. You're not kidding when you say Bella got an eyeful, imagine that staring you in eye from your mobile.....yes please, lol. They seem to be getting to know each other a bit more, personally. Things are definitely moving along now with the use of the webcam, who's going to be the one to suggest meeting up? Jane x
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 18 ~ Where Do We Go From Here?
OMG!...i totally fell in love with your story! I had to read it all the way through! I am exhausted...but so glad i stayed up to read this! I understand totally about RL kickin you around...I just can not wait til the next chapter! I also understand that it takes a lot of dedication and a lot of work to crank out a story this EPIC!!!!!!
I hope these kids can get their acts together before too long!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Need
Oh my, Bella Googled Edward, I'm not sure I would have been able to stop myself from looking at the picture of him. Webcam eh? I think she'll cave and go for it.....eventually. These two just have to meet up, they're made for each other and are already acting like boyfriend and girlfriend, love it, love it, love it. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Oh wow, they're actually talking to each other, things are moving on. Is Emmett's curiosity going to get the better of him and visit the site? Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected
Oh I love this story, I know I'm only on the 2nd chapter but not only is it hot but funny as well. Bella's reaction to her password was hilarious I was killing myself laughing. The cybersex idea for a story is inspired and just proves how words and imagination play as big a part as the actual physical act. Jane x
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