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Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
I love how this is staring out are you doing dual POVs? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
I just reviewed and tried to rate... but I inadvertently ended up with the wrong rating before I submitted... Sorry... Let me try again.
Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Great start... waiting for more!
Thanks!
Reviewer: Calling_Siren (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Love it, absolutely and completely! I'm going to put it in my favorites and I'm going to look forward to each update!!!
Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
haha
some parts were so funny LOL
update soon :D
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Good start. I enjoyed reading (smut lover). I wanna see where this goes so keep writing.
Reviewer: StarLightSuccubus (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
awesome bb, I love you... VIVA MEXICO.... hehehe
Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Pleeeeeeeeease continue!
Reviewer: mizmerry (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
please keep going this is awesome
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Love it! I definitely wanna read more. :)
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
LOVE IT!!SMUT IS GOOD, AND YOU DO IT SO WELL! CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Very Hot indeed! I'm really liking this storyline so far. It's smut based, but it's got backstory on Edward which I dig tremendously. I'm excited to see where this goes.
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Really different. I liked it. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
I like the premise and the cyber scene was pretty hot, but I must admit I am really bother that E is a smoker, especially considering he is a doctor. Sorry - personal bias :)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Interesting! Yeah, continue. I am dying to find out how their relationship would get established and how they will work through getting to know each other. ;)
Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
typing and jerking off seems very unpractical to be honest... they sholud do a webcam session! I think you should continue with the story, deffinetly!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Yes. Continue.
My curiosity about where your going to take this story is piqued.
To say the least...
Reviewer: bambi_frious (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Oooh, hot damn. That was nice. Haha. Update soon?
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Please continue it was so good
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