Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Eee! Nice advancement in the plot :)
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
This is getting good! :D I keep worrying about things like slow connection and halting conversations though. Damn internet. But this chapter placed a smile on my face and I can't wait to see them talk to each other like this for the first time.
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
I can't wait to see how this story plays out cant't wait till the next update
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Woohoo, they now have sound. Does this mean they will move onto video next? Enjoying this story and looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Who would think this hot story could get any hotter?
But I should have known given your previous stories...
This phone call should be pretty interesting...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Hello Edward indeed. Damn honey his words alone get me all hot and bothered. *Fans herself* Don't even get me started on the voice...sigh...the dolcet sound of sex is what that is. Wow!
They get to speak and am sitting on the edge of my seat with anticipation. Please don't leave me on the edge to long.
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Update! Update! Update.... please! lol Guess you can see I'm a fan! Great so far....
Reviewer: KellieR (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Good chapter. Looking forward to getting Bella's side and her thoughts on his voice.
Reviewer: lacyangel32 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
wow! this is hot! hot! hot! lol great job with the story line! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
*GASP* Hahaha! I can't wait for more XD
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
AHHH!!! I cant wait for thte next chapter :P
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
:D I like very much you get a 10
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Good chapter! Edward is so yummy!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
NOOOOO ugh.....why did you cut off there???? cant wait for the next update!!! are they actually going to meet in real life?
Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
AAGHHH!!! Now they are going to talk!!! It keeps getting better and more personal.
Wonder if they will brave sending eachother a pic???
Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Hot. Hot. Doubly Hot. Yummy. Loving it. Can't wait for the next one when they talk.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
OMG, this is freaking hilarious! And Edward used his work email to log on to some sex chat site? So funny. But would they just end up sexing each other online or would they actually meet up. Would reality be better than the fantasy that they created. Ah...well, hope you continue with the story :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
So good and so hot! Can't wait to see what happens now that they are talking!
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Ok....I'm officially hooked....... Update quickly please! Webcam! Webcam!! Rah Rah Rah!!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
will they ever meet?
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Owww next step: webcam, uuuhhhh
Post more, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Xoxo
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
yeah, they brought in the mic. can't wait to see what they think.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
I am really enjoying this. And the mic is a fabulous addition. Typing one handed would get...awkward.
This is a beguiling story!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected
tantilizing!
Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected
I love how they can't really keep it completely inpersonal in their minds and how it's creeping over into their posts!
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