Reviewer: robsgirl (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
so strange and yet so damn hot. I love it. I hope there's more!
Reviewer: esme_says_so (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Love, love, love where this is going so far! Really great, looking forward to reading more!! :)
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
awwww... i love that they are already going to talk to one another.... i'm sure B will think E also has the most sexy voice she has heard... can't wait to see her POV on that... E loves her voice so much after just 2 words... i love it.... can't wait to see what these 2 get up to now with the talking... very hot stuff i'm sure.. *waits patiently for next update* love ya and love this story!
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected
oh, another hot cyber chat for e & B and going to do it again eh? hot stuff..... this is fun and i like that b gets so turned on by just his words... she is opening up and letting herself go for once... very, can't wait to see what happen NOW.
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
I like so far and am intrigued to see where these 2 go with this... on to read more now! love ya. mawh! ;)
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Dear God! Bring on the naughty talking, velvet filled, lemony goodness!!!
Don't think this chapter would have been right without Bella's gasp and sigh over Edward's voice....lol
Sdnez drools on laptop......
Reviewer: chishi09 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Can't wait til they add on a webcam! or the next chapter.
Reviewer: scarlett71177 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Gah! Epic cliffie! It's really hot how all-consumed they both are with one another. Very canon in that respect.
I really like the characterization of Emmett here. The sense of humor is most appropriate, as is the teasing from him.
Would it be horrible if I said "write fast!" lol.
Good luck, continued success.
Reviewer: scarlett71177 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Gah! Epic cliffie! It's really hot how all-consumed they both are with one another. Very canon in that respect.
I really like the characterization of Emmett here. The sense of humor is most appropriate, as is the teasing from him.
Would it be horrible if I said "write fast!" lol.
Good luck, continued success.
Reviewer: scarlett71177 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected
lol, It was cute that Bella was drunk during the first encounter. I like the idea of her being just a regular girl in the world and a tiger in the chatroom. I think that suits the idea of her character. Good call.
Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: scarlett71177 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
I really like your characterization of Edward here. He's enough like the book that it's not an ungodly stretch to believe it, or just a random dude named Edward. He's a more modern, less Victorian, version- and it's hot, lol.
Continued luck!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Exciting! Things are going to get a little more interesting with voices added. (a little easier with both hands available too!) Can I hope for some SKype down the road? (and of course eventually the real deal after lots of fun)
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Yes, I'm really liking this story & the idea of these two developing a real (IRL) relationship.
I wish I had some ideas for you.
Reviewer: MAGalovic (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
awesome story i dont think that i have read anything like,....keep going....i want more DAMNIT
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
Like it
Reviewer: Jamiejo7984 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
AH! Pretty pretty PLLLLEEEEAAASSEEE (with a cherry on top) post another chapter soon!!! :D
Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
yay!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Ooh la la! Things are getting hot now! I think they are gonna have to meet up in person pretty soon. They are totally gonna fall in love. They need to send each other some sexy pics or something! I mean, if they are gonna actually talk now, they might as well take it to the next level, right?
Can't wait to read the next update. This is really starting to get juicy! ;)
Reviewer: ShadesofTwilight (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Hellooooo, Edward...I have a mic too. Just sayin'...
I'm enjoying this story muchly. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Woohoo! I really, really shouldn't read this at work. Really.
Reviewer: shannigal911 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
pleeeeeeease update soon. i realy want to read the next time with a mic! pleeeease update soon!
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Unknown
A little too dirty for me, but I'm intrigued with the story.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
Awww... I'm so excited!!!.. Thanks, I love it all.
Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Unexpected
Wow!. I love it. It was all incredible and totally hilarious. I knew Bella had to be drunk because their is no way she would have initiated the chat. It was all amazing! thanks!
Reviewer: elisena (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Preoccupation
i really like this storyline!! so hot!! and what a place to end a chapter--can't wait for more.
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