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Reviewer: pink_photographer (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 12:07 PM · On: ETA Six Minutes

HAHHAHA I LOVE IT

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:30 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

absolutely love your story please update soon!

Reviewer: nita (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:50 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

i love it   i can't breath  from laughing so hard     can't wait for more   but i better refill  my inhaler   

Reviewer: Mrz_Jasperhale4ever (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:49 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

allergic to vaginas that is too priceless poor rob will never live that down ppl got edward saying it now

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:44 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

Oh come on, so now bella is Doogie Howser? But still can not wait for an update to see how this goes. Oh and i do love Dev. Love him most

Reviewer: DeeDubbs (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:20 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

lol...allergic...lol...someone had to right? i almost snorted dr. peper out of my nose when i read that. i so wanst expecting that. thanks for craking me up.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:46 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

Funny chapter! I love the Dev & Angel. :)

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Shotgun Shells

I love the bullets with the names on them

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Payback

The charlie part...ewwww. but loved the rest.

Reviewer: GlitterInMyHeart (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:30 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

Couldn't help but snigger at the 'allergic to vaginas' line :P

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Leather and Kisses

loved this chapter. too much fun

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Lojack

OMG funny funny funny

Reviewer: Bbuttis (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Dare

After reading the first chapter, I just had to leave a review and tell you that I laughed my ass off! Hilarious! Thanks :D

Will be reading ->

- B

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:34 AM · On: The Purse

I am loving this. too funny

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Dare

OHMYGOSH. Too funny

Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:47 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

what is ETA and what boss, and what is Calgon? i do NOT get it. it is a great book, really funny, i'm waiting for an update...



Author's Response:

ETA is estimated time of arrival.  Bella mentioned before that she was a consulant of some kind, you'll find out.  And Calgon is a type of bubble bath, in the 80s and 90s they gave commericals where a woman would be surrounded by people all wanting her to drop everything to help them, and she'd scream "Calgon, take me away."

Hmm, maybe I should have Emmett ask, "Didn't they sponser your show?" heheheeh

 

erica

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:45 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

THis was hilarious. Alot of action. Those two have been through alot in the two days they ahve known each other.

Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:39 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

I have no idea what is happening. It's so chaotic and I love it. I wondered who would be the first to use the "Allergic to Vag" line. Hooray you win the prize, lol.

Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:14 AM · On: The Purse

first off eeewww! thank god edward didnt accept dare number 2!

this is pretty hilarious...:)

Reviewer: ryudo911 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 12:38 AM · On: ETA Six Minutes

wooo! finally a new chapter! lol. i loved it. charlies scary as hell

Reviewer: z stupid lamb (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:11 PM · On: ETA Six Minutes

loved the part about maybe hating vaginas haha! reminded me of when robert pattinson said he is allergic to vaginas during his details interview lol! funny chapter!

Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 10:35 PM · On: ETA Six Minutes

Funny.  I loved dev and angel.

Reviewer: ASHiE (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Dare

"Trouble in the trenches" OMG, actual LOLs

I really should have learned by now, not to read fanfic in public. I got a few weird looks from the dude at the next table

...Please update!!

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:34 AM · On: He Did It

Couldn't stop laughing...Emmett's POV...hilarious! :)

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Lojack

Ha ha ha...this is too funny. :)

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