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Reviews For Time In a Bottle
Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 07:18 PM · On: Thought Process

So when does Jake come back to fight off Edward.  He can't let this thing with her go away so easily.  He's had her a whole year!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Thought Process

Hummm...not good at predictions...but I can review and tell you I love your story! Hopefully you will get the 15 reviews.

Pauses for shameless plug...Have you checked out my story? "These Dreams" You might like it....let me know.



Author's Response:

haha ive seen it, but ive been so busy writing!

Ill definitly check it out and let you know what i think (:

Reviewer: Imagine (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 07:07 PM · On: Thought Process

interesting! i like how this is going--- please let this have a happy ending!!!!!

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Thought Process

P.S.  Including this one,  you now have 143 reviews for just 8 chapters of a story.  Average = 17.875 per chapter.

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Thought Process

Oh I like that twist.  I forgot for a second that she didn't jump in this story.  Very interesting.  Perhaps this insight will establish a pattern?  I'm really excited for the family to come back.  Thanks for another good chapter.  Bella's confused and self-doubting, of course, but Edward sounds exuberant and I love it.

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 06:46 PM · On: Thought Process

I'm so glad that Edward was there for Bella when she had her nightmare.  They'll work things out together one way or another!

Reviewer: SpiderMonkey (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 05:06 PM · On: Thought Process

can i just say awwwwww, after all that time and now he's back, not thinking about himself but about bella for once! love it!

Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 04:48 PM · On: Thought Process

UPDATE! It's wonderful!!!!

Reviewer: lauraluvsedward (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Thought Process

more! this is one of my favorite stories

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:56 PM · On: Thought Process

ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?  THIS is where I am left off???   AAARGHH!!  PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon - I will be your review slave for life!

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:43 PM · On: Guardian Angel

AAACK!  I am so sad for Jacob!  Sorry, no time to review more, must read the next chapter...

Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:39 PM · On: Thought Process

Those two always make things so much complicated than they have to be.  Nice writing.

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:38 PM · On: Flashbacks

OH GODS, PLEASE DO NOT STOP THIS STORY!  I love this, every second of it!

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:31 PM · On: Disappear

OMG - I AM IN TEARS OVER THAT DAMN ICE PACK!!  SOOOO did not see that coming, but that is such a Bella thing to do!

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:19 PM · On: Illusion

I was hesitant to continue reading this after the first chapter, I didn't click with it at first.  I am glad I kept reading!  I like this idea..

Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:08 PM · On: Thought Process

Love it. :)

Reviewer: elizabeth18 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 03:05 PM · On: Thought Process

good chapter.  I liked how her dream mirrored the events in New Moon (well, except for Edward being torn apart and all).  Update soon!

Reviewer: GoldIwannaB (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:57 PM · On: Thought Process

the begging is kind of annoying to those of us who do review faithfully. But hey, whatever works ;)

this is amazing, as usual. 

Reviewer: irismagic101 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:38 PM · On: Thought Process

I really like your story.

Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:16 PM · On: Thought Process

Awesome chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens next....

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:53 PM · On: Thought Process

That was amazing Yeah AMAZING!!Update soon

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:31 PM · On: Thought Process

OOOOOOH ITS EDWARD!

ICE PACK BE DAMNED!

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:17 PM · On: Thought Process

Great Chapter. Love it that he finally came forward. More please!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:13 PM · On: Thought Process

I will review 15 times if I have to! I am so glad that he came back to her!

Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 12:36 AM · On: Decisions

I haven't read your story, nor do I intend to. This is something I've been working on for awhile, so I highly doubt it's "exactly like" yours. MYOB, thanks.

P.s. - similar ideas does not mean same storyline. 

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