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Reviewer: tpol (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 02:19 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

LOVED it!

Reviewer: banana_sensei (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Wonderful! My favorite story about that first night of the many, many ones on this site.

I love how you captured that awkwardness (and at the same time beauty) of that first time. I liked also that it was more poetic than anatomical.

Would change the title, though. Something like "Hold Me Tighter."

Reviewer: Littlewillow (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

So beautiful and tastefully written. Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: Rory22 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Lovey, just lovely. I wish THIS was in the book :)

Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

nice!

Reviewer: nataliem (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Very nice, very tasteful, and well written!

Reviewer: Tara Von Delectable (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Excellent! If a sex scene can be tastefully done, this is it. If only the Twilight Saga wasn't pg 13...

Reviewer: SciFiFan (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Perfect - I only wish it had been part of the book. I may have to glue it in :)

Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

H O T.

Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

H O T.

Reviewer: Ravenhawke (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

OMG! That was wonderful, sensual and charming.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

That was sexy and sweet! romantic, too....

Reviewer: bunnysue (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

wow

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Great job! Thanks for filling in the gaps. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Veve_908 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

That was so romantic!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it so much, and It all made perfect since.

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Wow. That was amazing. It fits perfectly into the story. I would love it if you wrote this in Edwards POV so we can know what was going on in his head. Very good 1-shot. :-)

Reviewer: flyingnicole (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

great job filling in the blanks to that one scene...too bad there are others in Breaking Dawn too, like the second time and the first as a vamp...any chance you wanna fill in those too? ;)

Author's Response:
Actually, that is on my "to do" list ... ;)

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Very in-character, very fulfilling, that missing space in the honeymoon J

Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Very nice job! I wholeheartedly agree, that whole 'fade to black" thing became annoying and unsatisfying. I am very tempted to print this out, and glue it into my BD book right at that part!

I have to agree with other reviewers, you should do EPOV, I love reading things from his POV! And another suggestion, how about the other missing sex scene? The one that comes after she has her dream when she wakes up crying and finally gets him to make love to her a second time?

Author's Response:
I'm definitely considering the other "fade to black" scenes -- including the one you mentioned, and also after she becomes a vampire. So stay tuned ... :)

Reviewer: LaBellaBonita (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Wow that was incredible.. I need to go home and see my boyfriend.. Remarkable use of words..

Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Wow, I really liked this. Good work.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Great job. I agree with you, the honeymoon in the story should have had a little more. You did a very good job with this.

Reviewer: Jarbles (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

This has to be my favorite 'fill in the blank' from Isle Esme. It was very well written, seeming as if it were from the great SM herself!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

i like it you should do E PoV

Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Bruises (Purple & Black)

Nicely done!

I also wish that S Meyer had given at least a little more detail, but the books are pitched to the teenage market.

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