Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:07 PM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
I love that Bella has decided that she is ready, but she does pick the wrong place and time. I was glad Edward stopped them, but made it clear that he wanted her too. Charlie and Edward's conversation was really great. I loved that they came to an agreement that Charlie protecting his daughter was necessary to keep her safe. It was quite funny when Charlie revealed that he did see what Bella and Edward were doing in his car. Nice chapter. I look forward to the next.
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 11:19 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
Charlie really does have a heart, Edward has the brains, now we just need to get bella to have the courage and we'd be off to see the wizard! lol
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 11:01 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
Well done!!!
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 08:41 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
I have goosebumps.
And I think that's all I need to say.
Fuckawesome.
Reviewer: A_Cullen_Wannabe (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 06:44 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
Hee,hee...they were busted and Charlie overheard everything. i was kind of hoping he was hearing the interaction to know just how stand up of a guy Edward really is. Great Chapter!
Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 05:36 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
that was awsome and although your story is soo good I can wait for the update I CANNOT WAIT for the next chap. Charlie was great and I am looking foward to see what happened when they are no longer in Charlie's house!!! sy
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 05:24 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
Love Charlie, I think your version of him is the best one around. He´s quite understanding after all with not so tinted windows observations...
Reviewer: siecle (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 03:23 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
I absolutely love this story. The way you write Bella confronting her past particularly. I've struggled with developing a relationship after abusive experiences myself and think you write it exceptionally well. And to top it all off, your Edward and Bella are so funny, adorable and sexy!
Reviewer: layla1 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 03:18 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
That was one of the most heart wrenching and heart warming chapters I have ever had the pleasure of reading. When you first started going down this road I was unsure of how you were going to handle such horrible subject matter but you have pulled it off respectfully and beautifully. I loved Charlie in this chapter, background checks and all. Both he and Edward are both man enough in my book. I would now like to see Bella come into her own as well. I think its time. You write a wonderful story. Thank you
Reviewer: noxetdies (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:30 AM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
Loved it! I was so happy to see updates.
Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 12:38 AM · On: In Which Edward Has An Epiphany
ok, the toothbrush thing kinda grossed me out, but I am liking your story a lot.
Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:54 PM · On: In Which Edward is Schooled
okaaay, I wasn't expecting that! Well, I was totally expecting the vomit, but not actually on Edward!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:40 PM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
LOL, i love the bit at the end. "that tinting on your windows? It's not as dark as you think..."
Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:36 PM · On: In Which a Battle is Won
Where has this fic been hiding? I love it. The goofy stuff that gets you through the workday seems like it also is going to help the two of them fall in love. I can't wait for the rest of this. I am strangely happy that I found it already well established. It's gonna be a long night.
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:08 PM · On: In Which All is Revealed
God! That was friggin heartbreaking and so real...you've highlighted a very real problem and given your readers a reality check for lack of a better way of saying it. You handled it without being abrasive or overly graphic, but not fade to black either...perfectly balanced...well done! ; )
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:43 PM · On: In Which There is a Play
Wow...I don't get warnings...I mean...I do, but idk...sorry you had a buzz kill freakout for the "lack of warning"...all I'm concerned with at the moment is that my swearing vocab has increased exponentially as a result of this story! Asshat has become my new favorite word...I must spread the love! Heheheheh!
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:04 PM · On: In Which There is a Kiss
Gosh...I feel really bad for Bella...you make it feel so real...:( but still : )
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:52 PM · On: In Which a Wedding is Discussed
Yay! Denseward found his balls! Woot, woot!
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:50 PM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
You continue to amaze me with the high quality of writing chapter after chapter, not to mention the excellent "one-liners" (which are mostly in Edward's head) and how you can so effortlessly blend humor with heartache. I especially love that the entire story is in EPOV which is a rarity in fanfiction.
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:39 PM · On: In Which Our Flummoxed Lovers Spork
God! I just love all the randomness! I have been cracking up here...good thing the hubby isn't here to hear me! Seriously I feel like I'm reading a conversation between my brothers or me and my brothers! LMAO!
Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:33 PM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
I adore Drunkella too!
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:27 PM · On: In Which Edward Has An Epiphany
LMAO! Where do you come up with some of this stuff!? I mean some of it has to be RL, right? The panties...if they aren't real...the should be! lol! You just conrnered the market my friend! Muwahahahahaha!
Reviewer: missj (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:17 PM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
Fabulous chapter! Very heartfelt between Edward and Charlie.
Reviewer: idealistic4ever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:54 PM · On: In Which Some Porn is Watched, Redux (Jasper)
OMG! I have 4 brothers and you have nailed it on the head! So friggin funny! Best chapter! Love how you've written Jasper...awesome! Can I just say too, my favorite passage of this chapter....well...lmfao!
So I began to teach my brother's not-quite girlfriend the ins and outs of fisting (no pun intended), a lesson I was in the middle of when Edward finally came out of his room, cleaned, groomed, and—I’m secure enough in my masculinity to say it—as fuckhot as the rest of us Cullen men.
I’ll freely admit it: We were a very fuckable bunch, we Cullens.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 08:48 PM · On: In Which Edward Smells Smoke
I love, love, love it!!! What some great boy time!!!! Boy i bet Edward was so glad he handled Bella the way he did, that could have been very uncomfortable for all involved. I really liked where this chapter took all of them. I just hope Bella remembers what all she said to Edward!!! and that she really wants to continue where they left off when they get home!!!!
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